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More than sex
Fuck you-split that seam by a thread
Wooden buttons on a teddy bear
Gives way to a reminiscent stare
As the insecurities lay bare
The restoration,of that decrepit smell of attic air
Lined with twisted stings-now matted things discarded without care
Unwind the underlined conversations that we shared
Should have wish me dead...
Instead of that fucking wish that showed me you was never there
In comparison;to someone who was scared
Frighten hearts lack the balls to squeeze the trigger
Yet,it's that fear that keeps you near
How does love spell evol?
It's when it exist within despair-
Sheltered and giving clarity to an emotion thats rarely spared
So
Eliminate the sexual tension that induced our hearts
Subtract the intimacy-keep the sex,erase the memories of heavy breathing and it's affairs
Hate that anger steers my tongue
But I no longer mother fucking care
Actually it's because I do-damn,but this bleeding heart of mines isn't fair
I hate you...
Is a lie,I will always claim and spread
Wooden buttons on a teddy bear
Gives way to a reminiscent stare
As the insecurities lay bare
The restoration,of that decrepit smell of attic air
Lined with twisted stings-now matted things discarded without care
Unwind the underlined conversations that we shared
Should have wish me dead...
Instead of that fucking wish that showed me you was never there
In comparison;to someone who was scared
Frighten hearts lack the balls to squeeze the trigger
Yet,it's that fear that keeps you near
How does love spell evol?
It's when it exist within despair-
Sheltered and giving clarity to an emotion thats rarely spared
So
Eliminate the sexual tension that induced our hearts
Subtract the intimacy-keep the sex,erase the memories of heavy breathing and it's affairs
Hate that anger steers my tongue
But I no longer mother fucking care
Actually it's because I do-damn,but this bleeding heart of mines isn't fair
I hate you...
Is a lie,I will always claim and spread
Published 10th Jan 2014
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11th Jan 2014 6:29pm
This is awesome!!!!! Your lines are powerful to trigger emotions. Your wording and lines are all your own style. Very well done! :)
12th Jan 2014 5:00am
Thank you.
Inspiring words.
I truly don't no if I have a style I mostly just write what my heart says.
And it has an irregular pulse.
Inspiring words.
I truly don't no if I have a style I mostly just write what my heart says.
And it has an irregular pulse.
12th Jan 2014 2:53am
great poem
start to finish
well done
tight from the first word
solid ending also
I might have a new favorite around here
welcome to DUP
*wish I was better at this critique stuff
I just know what I like.
start to finish
well done
tight from the first word
solid ending also
I might have a new favorite around here
welcome to DUP
*wish I was better at this critique stuff
I just know what I like.
Thank you very much.
And for welcoming me.
Flattered.
And don't worry neither am I,I'm into honesty though,really what comes to mind is fine with me again thanks.
And for welcoming me.
Flattered.
And don't worry neither am I,I'm into honesty though,really what comes to mind is fine with me again thanks.
