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Bipolar Darkness
Ricochet from melancholy moods
To youthful and joyous countenance
Rising from the dark, disturbing corners
Stepping into a taunting winter sun
Chill nips at milky cappuccino skin
As the wind whips around me
I chew on the inside of my mouth
And my chapped lips until I bleed raw red
Scars from yesteryear are prominent
Light illuminating rows of healed wounds
My inner demon shivers within me
Thinking of the bleeding droplets
And sometimes the taste of them
A wave of darkness floods through me
And all I can do is wait until it passes
To youthful and joyous countenance
Rising from the dark, disturbing corners
Stepping into a taunting winter sun
Chill nips at milky cappuccino skin
As the wind whips around me
I chew on the inside of my mouth
And my chapped lips until I bleed raw red
Scars from yesteryear are prominent
Light illuminating rows of healed wounds
My inner demon shivers within me
Thinking of the bleeding droplets
And sometimes the taste of them
A wave of darkness floods through me
And all I can do is wait until it passes
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Re: Bipolar Darkness
29th Dec 2013 9:14pm
learn to make friends with the monsters under your bed...
a powerful write kitty
a powerful write kitty
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29th Dec 2013 11:58pm
Re: Bipolar Darkness
29th Dec 2013 11:44pm
I also live with BPD. this is beautifully penned, and honestly captured, well-done madame
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29th Dec 2013 11:59pm
Re: Bipolar Darkness
30th Dec 2013 2:45am
Kitty this is beautiful ink, so well written but my heart aches for you. I know it's not an easy place to be but you've expressed exceptionally well in this piece.
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2013 1:57am
Honest and painful to read ink Miss Kitty..hope you can continue to work through it. :)

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