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To Love ~
Imagine the softness of my ivory skin
My lips kissing you as we mold together
My sapphire eyes admire you
Listen closely to what they are saying
I believed in nothing but was a dreamer
Until now
Wicked power ignites inside
To love without knowing
I have lifted the veil
My lips kissing you as we mold together
My sapphire eyes admire you
Listen closely to what they are saying
I believed in nothing but was a dreamer
Until now
Wicked power ignites inside
To love without knowing
I have lifted the veil
Published 24th Dec 2013
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24th Dec 2013 00:53am
Very pretty Tommie Lynn. Very pretty. A beautiful poems babe. Thank you. xo
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24th Dec 2013 1:49am
Very nice build to the unveiling. You've always been a good poet but I can tell your art has matured. In this piece you speak of things that I've been imagining for months :)
24th Dec 2013 2:05am
That means a lot GW.Thank you for that.
Loving someone you've never met ...now that's something isn't it...
Thanks for reading.
Loving someone you've never met ...now that's something isn't it...
Thanks for reading.
24th Dec 2013 4:25am
It is, so much so that sometimes you sense that you have indeed met in another place and time. I love this line from a James Taylor song:
"Strange as it seems I remember your face from before...this you should know...before you and I were washed up on this alien shore"
"Strange as it seems I remember your face from before...this you should know...before you and I were washed up on this alien shore"
24th Dec 2013 2:59am
I have lifted the veil
u do lift the veil of sexy ignorance
well done guys like me will praise
but seldom
ur a queen of sexidom
u do lift the veil of sexy ignorance
well done guys like me will praise
but seldom
ur a queen of sexidom
24th Dec 2013 1:56pm
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24th Dec 2013 5:08pm
some gal just wrote to me
she was 17 or 18
so i thought u 222222 must be as ung
though taken as per u
would that mean ur no virgin
or have a bf only
till ur legally ...
just friendly talk Tommie
she was 17 or 18
so i thought u 222222 must be as ung
though taken as per u
would that mean ur no virgin
or have a bf only
till ur legally ...
just friendly talk Tommie
24th Dec 2013 10:31am
Your current profile pic (showing your sapphire eyes well) would be a fitting accompanying illustration to the poem, and reinforce in a male reader the sense these words are aimed at him.
24th Dec 2013 1:58pm
