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Mikey
I call out to you my friend
hoping you will answer
I call your name in the darkness
it bounces off the walls
echoing across time,
shattering the silence of my mind.
Then,with a whisper so loud
I hear you,I see you,
I'm with you again.
Laugh with me,joke with me,be with me.
Memories of days went by
times that will always be
if only in my head.
Thanks,for answering my call,
my dear friend.
RIP
hoping you will answer
I call your name in the darkness
it bounces off the walls
echoing across time,
shattering the silence of my mind.
Then,with a whisper so loud
I hear you,I see you,
I'm with you again.
Laugh with me,joke with me,be with me.
Memories of days went by
times that will always be
if only in my head.
Thanks,for answering my call,
my dear friend.
RIP
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Re: Mikey
Anonymous
8th Dec 2013 12:33pm
This is filled with melancholy and beauty, nice work hashman ;-) peace
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re: Re: Mikey
8th Dec 2013 1:03pm
Thank you mikimoondancer,he was my best friend forever...been gone for many years but I still miss him and love him :)
Re: Mikey
8th Dec 2013 3:41pm
A very moving piece Hash, always nice
when those close to us keep in contact
So hopefully he knows how you feel bro.
when those close to us keep in contact
So hopefully he knows how you feel bro.
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re: Re: Mikey
Yes my brother...my dear friend Mikey is not with us any more...but I am sure he can still hear me.(thanks)
Re: Mikey
8th Dec 2013 5:00pm
As long as we are in mental contact
with our beloved ones they will
always be with us and hear our calling,
even answer to our calls.
I'm sure your brother is near you ...
I'm very moved by this emotional ink, Hash.
with our beloved ones they will
always be with us and hear our calling,
even answer to our calls.
I'm sure your brother is near you ...
I'm very moved by this emotional ink, Hash.
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re: Re: Mikey
8th Dec 2013 5:09pm
Sorry Miss Chi for the trip up...when I said my brother to Poetik I should have spaced that out a little more(took care of that) but really you are right because if not by blood he is still my brother.Thank you very much for all your kind words :)
re: re: Re: Mikey
8th Dec 2013 5:19pm
A brother of the heart is no less
than a brother of the blood.
(Can I say so?)
than a brother of the blood.
(Can I say so?)
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8th Dec 2013 5:24pm
Re: Mikey
8th Dec 2013 6:43pm
Re: Mikey
Anonymous
9th Dec 2013 3:51am
Sad and poignant piece Mr. Hash, i'm sure he's watching over you with a smile.
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re: Re: Mikey
10th Dec 2013 9:57pm
Re: Mikey guy
9th Dec 2013 9:42am
Re: Mikey
Anonymous
10th Dec 2013 10:48pm
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10th Dec 2013 11:10pm
Re: Mikey
15th Dec 2013 12:27pm
I believe that through this poem you answered his call out to you from the other side and made him smile.
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