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Thanks a lot Mr A. glad You dug it Sir!!!

Masterful ink Soul I so love dragons!!! peace Crim :)

Thank You so much Dear Crim...I'd love to do many more on that subject...just needs that right place right time to do them...Indeed much love for dragons!!!

Gosh, this ink-execution was delivered wonderfully! Enjoy the dark edgy story. Adding Rainbow's lyrics were spot on for this fantastic piece....Xo
Pen on my Soul~  

Thank You Dear Rain :) I had hoped for better, but it was how it rolled out :) Glad the Rainbow worked:)

A wonderful write, Soul, the magic of yore peeps. Enjoyed the read.

Thank You Dear Grace :)
I hope to Write better ones of this subject sometime...this was a first attempt-peep indeed ;)

I really like this poem sir, I like the words you chose to express your thoughts and the content was easy to follow.

the one thing that kind of stood out a little, were the lines beside the picture, it's happens to me that when I put a picture in, it knocks my original line breaks out. if that's the case, perhaps use some commas to redefine your line breaks.

all in though, great read , shine on

Humbled You think so Sir-Greatly appreciated...I thought long about those damn eyelashes...it seemed to help the read in certain ways...but then it made concrete to certain meanings where I wanted it left up to the reader...so I thought...if I put just a couple in...that would seem fkng stupid...so I left them all out...indeed I do catch Your drift-this may be a future rewrite-though I detest those.

I don't think anything so drastic is warranted, I think if you're happy enough to leave it , then you should go with your gut, that's where it came from in the first place I assume :)

Really feeling this one, soul. You manage to tell the story of a mindset, and of a land spanning ages in a short poem. Reminds me of a Raymond E. Feist novel I read way back ( I think that's the authors name anyway) nice write man, hope to see more like this, it suits your style perfectly and you manage to do it without being cheesy which is always a plus :)

That means a lot Sir-Greatly appreciated -surprised I am quite known for my cornball ways hahaha
I'll check that Auth. out another round of books to checkout soon...hopefully I can play in this realm from time to time...

Dragon lore is one of my favorite topics.
Cant help being fascinated by it. These are such magical worlds and hold much magic.
Seems like yours is more or or less a Warrior Dragon, a fire dragon. You craft so well, dear Soul!!!

Indeed I love them so...my lore knowledge isnt quite up to snuff other than fantasy novels I've read through the years...but love these creatures since Youth that's for sure!!!
Indeed I thought of Her as One who loved controlling Her land as well as relishing new inhabitants to strike fear into maintaining her self worthiness :)
Thank You so Much Dear Queen!!!

Your word play is amazing my friend. A very creative mind with a soul to match. Magical indeed in your deliverance.

Your too kind EB-Thank You so much for reading this Sir-Greatly appreciated!!!

A well depicted ink my dear friend...suddenly I was in dungeons and dragons...
A well written story always takes our minds and imagination and creates the most amazing world without lleaving our chair...good work sir!!!

Oooh! Nice! I've had a lifelong love for sword n' sorcery. I try to incorporate it in my poetry often. I love the setting you've conceived here...so my dragon fetish is sated for today.

& a classic Rainbow track to boot! RJD is hugely missed. Very, very cool.

I wish I lived in Middle-Earth, or in Westeros, or some place like that...I do love the fantasy theme. (If I did live in a world like this, I'd probably sit around wishing I were a corporate lawyer or a chartered accountant. Okay, maybe I went a bit far there...)

If I had room, I'd list this one. I'm apparently at my limit, so when I have more room, I'll add it. Killer inspirational write, Mr. Soul. I'll be coming back to this one often.

yeah man...staple to our kind I think ...(fantasy and Ronnie HA!!!:)
Always appreciate Your words Butcher!!!!
don't worry Bro...next medal or shortly after Your list will be given more room...it aggravated me for a little bit...I took away a few to make room for new...had I known I never would've ....kick myself for it...though a warning...if people leave here they'll leave Your list :( wasn't expecting that...

Appreciate You coming back for this Butcher-im humbled!!!

I love this walk through your magical words it had a real dungeon and dragons feel. Wonderful read dear one!

I wish to do more in this realm...and better...this was wrote as simple as I could....I figured I would start that way and embellish as I grow with these Writes....we shall see eh?
Be well Dear Glynis and Thank You!!!

You are so amazing! so vivid and a fresh
piece of airs. I felt ancient and beautiful
reading your words. Lovely story souladareatease ..

So kind You are HW- humbled I am- ever grateful.
This was my attempt to capture a piece of magic these creatures held for me.
A child's first pet :)