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dreamer
She said, “I’m not lost
I’m just misplaced
like the car keys
or that pair of half price Gucci sunglasses
I bought while drunk at 10 in the morning”
“I’m not aimless
I’m just open to all the possibilities
"Anything that passes me by
was never meant to be mine
because dreams are bigger than reality
and all the best dreams are in my head”
“‘Cause life is like a cigarette
you light it on fire
but eventually it burns out
and all you’re left with is the part
you shouldn’t smoke”
“And love…
love is like drowning in whiskey bubbles
no matter how much you want to stay drunk
the morning comes and you find out
that your knight in shining armour
is just an alien enthusiast in a tin foil hat
with a list of conspiracy theories so long
it could almost be classified as a fetish”
“But dreams, they live forever
and I'd rather be a dreamer than a child
in adult skin with no dreams at all"
"In my dreams I can fly
in my dreams love is beautiful and tomorrow
my bed won't be empty still lingering with the scent
of last night's fantasies"
"No, I'm not lost
I'm just misplaced
and wherever I am
is exactly where I'm supposed to be"
© Indie Adams 2013
I’m just misplaced
like the car keys
or that pair of half price Gucci sunglasses
I bought while drunk at 10 in the morning”
“I’m not aimless
I’m just open to all the possibilities
"Anything that passes me by
was never meant to be mine
because dreams are bigger than reality
and all the best dreams are in my head”
“‘Cause life is like a cigarette
you light it on fire
but eventually it burns out
and all you’re left with is the part
you shouldn’t smoke”
“And love…
love is like drowning in whiskey bubbles
no matter how much you want to stay drunk
the morning comes and you find out
that your knight in shining armour
is just an alien enthusiast in a tin foil hat
with a list of conspiracy theories so long
it could almost be classified as a fetish”
“But dreams, they live forever
and I'd rather be a dreamer than a child
in adult skin with no dreams at all"
"In my dreams I can fly
in my dreams love is beautiful and tomorrow
my bed won't be empty still lingering with the scent
of last night's fantasies"
"No, I'm not lost
I'm just misplaced
and wherever I am
is exactly where I'm supposed to be"
© Indie Adams 2013
Written by
Indie
(Miss Indie)
Published 8th Nov 2013
| Edited 10th Nov 2013
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Re: dreamer
9th Nov 2013 00:19am
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10th Nov 2013 7:13am
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9th Nov 2013 00:44am
yes, me dreams is def'nitly thee preferred reality.
'Taint less real than what brainmind processes 'reality' as when not sleepin.....all processed illusion
wonderful poem, dear...glad to see ye back here, or there, or wherever
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10th Nov 2013 7:14am
Thank you kindly Dan :D Much appreciated. Glad to see you're still about.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
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9th Nov 2013 1:07am
Always worth having and chasing-We fight for them on and on-Hopes and dreams are the living bits-the rest is just motion.
Beautiful Write Indie!!!
Beautiful Write Indie!!!
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10th Nov 2013 7:15am
Thank you very much souladareatease for your lovely feedback :) I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
"Hopes and dreams are the living bits-the rest is just motion." I like that :D
Peace, Indie
"Hopes and dreams are the living bits-the rest is just motion." I like that :D
Peace, Indie
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20th Jun 2014 1:11am
So good to hear this spoken Indie!!!
Cool to see You out and about kickin' it Hellion-Rock on!!!
Cool to see You out and about kickin' it Hellion-Rock on!!!
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20th Jun 2014 5:22am
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9th Nov 2013 4:35am
This needs a reading, of course! It will be kick-ass out loud.
I love this, dreams and cigs and whiskey bubbles...
I love this, dreams and cigs and whiskey bubbles...
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10th Nov 2013 7:16am
lol, thank you Atakti, I will have to get around to doing a reading of this. It's on my list of pieces to do. Glad you enjoyed. :)
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: dreamer
9th Nov 2013 6:45am
Indie
good to see you back here writing. you need to go over your inverted commas, I think you only need two throughout.
"No, I'm not just lost". I think the just there is surplus
This is pretty good Indie, it holds a lesson too. 'she has a good head on her shoulder. your poems I find sometimes carry your personality, I think that's a good thing.
shine on Miss
good to see you back here writing. you need to go over your inverted commas, I think you only need two throughout.
"No, I'm not just lost". I think the just there is surplus
This is pretty good Indie, it holds a lesson too. 'she has a good head on her shoulder. your poems I find sometimes carry your personality, I think that's a good thing.
shine on Miss
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re: Re: dreamer
10th Nov 2013 7:18am
Thank you, as always E, for your indepth feedback. I'm sure I don't need all the quotation marks but I'm keeping them. The extra "just" in the last verse is all fixed up. :) Thanks again for your crit and compliments.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: dreamer
9th Nov 2013 2:41pm
Indie this is a very deep well thought out poem.. I love the way you think beautiful lady :) peace Crim
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re: Re: dreamer
10th Nov 2013 7:18am
Aww, thank you so much Crim, it means a lot. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Peace, Indie
Peace, Indie
Re: dreamer
10th Nov 2013 7:30am
or that pair of half price Gucci sunglasses
I bought while drunk at 10 in the morning”
love this
I bought while drunk at 10 in the morning”
love this
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11th Nov 2013 1:18am
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10th Nov 2013 8:00am
"I'm not lost
I'm misplaced
and wherever I am
is exactly where I'm supposed to be"
These lines sum up how much of a dreamer they are and how they've forgotten to live.
Liking how the piece flows with different quotes. They could also be from one dreamer or many.
Enjoyed
S:)
I'm misplaced
and wherever I am
is exactly where I'm supposed to be"
These lines sum up how much of a dreamer they are and how they've forgotten to live.
Liking how the piece flows with different quotes. They could also be from one dreamer or many.
Enjoyed
S:)
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11th Nov 2013 1:19am
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I enjoyed your reading Indie. Takes a pair to read your work in front of other like that, kudos...
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Thank you Fenom :) I actually learnt this piece, no paper involved, thugh my performing still needs work. I love the adrenalin of getting up and performing. It used to terrify me, but I love how alive it makes me feel.
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23rd Jun 2014 00:15am
i loved your metaphors...especially whiskey....i think your speaking truths that anyone can relate to and/or resonate with and that you should speak with such conviction! Good poem :)
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7th Aug 2014 5:41am
Thank you earthtoned for your lovely comment :) I'm so glad you found this piece relateable.
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23rd Jun 2014 4:06am
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13th Sep 2014 8:40pm
I just found this Indie ... Love the poem! I'd love to hear it without the distractions in the background if you ever think about re recording.
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16th Sep 2014 00:48am
Thanks Lobode, unfortunately this isn't my recording, it's from a gig I frequent, and while I could rerecord it at home, IMO it's always better live. The atmosphere pushes me to give more than if I'm just behind a mic and computer screen.
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16th Sep 2014 00:51am
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