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alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
I'm not
going
I'm just
going
to wait...
you would
not do
this to
me...
you're just
running
late...
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Re: alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
4th Nov 2013 11:42am
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4th Nov 2013 2:53pm
Re: alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
4th Nov 2013 5:14pm
I remember telling myself that once... ha!!
it didn't end well...
Great Piece!
Darker
it didn't end well...
Great Piece!
Darker
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re: Re: alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
4th Nov 2013 7:31pm
Re: alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
4th Nov 2013 6:55pm
So cruel and raw and sad.
Waiting drives you mad ...
Wonderfully composed piece, Paul.
Waiting drives you mad ...
Wonderfully composed piece, Paul.
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re: Re: alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
4th Nov 2013 7:34pm
and it's tricky, I
guess...how long
do you wait, as you
always think that
the minute you
leave they'll turn
up..!
guess...how long
do you wait, as you
always think that
the minute you
leave they'll turn
up..!
Re: alone in the bar he looks at his watch...
Anonymous
5th Nov 2013 1:55am
Best to give benefit of doubt, this way you won't get hurt :)
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5th Nov 2013 11:29pm
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5th Nov 2013 11:30pm
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5th Nov 2013 7:50pm
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5th Nov 2013 11:34pm