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Time
It seems
that I've got more time
than I know
what to do with
I am not certain
if I resent the fact of it
or if it just allows me the
time to find a reason
to love it. . .
Published 9th Oct 2013
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9th Oct 2013 7:16am
I really enjoyed this. Short and concise but thoughtful. My job gives me a lot of down time and it can be a blessing and a curse.
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9th Oct 2013 7:21am
Thank you very much! I was hoping that the length wouldn't be too much of a problem. :)
12th Oct 2013 1:26am
I think this is a good start. Brevity is fine, provided you have something interesting to say and can properly convey it. I think you should consider renaming it something less run-of-the-mill; if you type "Time" into the DU search you'll find hundreds of poems named that. Try for something which adds another layer of depth to the poem.
16th Oct 2013 6:32am
