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Truth in Wishes
Stars twinkle at last light removal
covering day to its powdery dust
where the eyes see clearly
wishes of this world
strewn
to explosion covering us
There Ink and tear
poise unison
dripping wax sealing confession
as an act of contrition
holding in secret
sounds of the pumping heart
O dare do we say
each one spoken for
utter only
by the sound of a gurgle
reaching their comfort light
by a distant Dawn
Lines in the sand
etch deep
from glares of another
tying tongues proper
placing, bound in shackles
crying limp, seething from starvation
Ever mine shall Heavens reflection
play trumpet
leading a chorus along strings
lighting up
the stage with pin point accuracy
passions play
covering day to its powdery dust
where the eyes see clearly
wishes of this world
strewn
to explosion covering us
There Ink and tear
poise unison
dripping wax sealing confession
as an act of contrition
holding in secret
sounds of the pumping heart
O dare do we say
each one spoken for
utter only
by the sound of a gurgle
reaching their comfort light
by a distant Dawn
Lines in the sand
etch deep
from glares of another
tying tongues proper
placing, bound in shackles
crying limp, seething from starvation
Ever mine shall Heavens reflection
play trumpet
leading a chorus along strings
lighting up
the stage with pin point accuracy
passions play
Published 2nd Oct 2013
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2nd Oct 2013 6:53am
Truth in Wishes
Poem Image
Stars twinkle at last light removal
covering day to its powdery dust
where the eyes see clearly
wishes of this world
strewn
to explosion covering us
There Ink and tear
poise unison
dripping wax sealing confession
as an act of contrition
holding in secret
sounds of the pumping heart
O dare do we say
each one spoken for
utter only
by the sound of a gurgle
reaching their comfort light
by a distant Dawn
Lines in the sand
etch deep
from glares of another
tying tongues proper
placing, bound in shackles
crying limp, seething from starvation
Ever shall Heavens reflection
play trumpet
leading a chorus along strings
lighting up
the stage with pin point accuracy
passions play
*******************************************
So much easier to copy your poem in it's entirety, instead of picking favor parts and lines because the whole poem wears a masterpiece jacket :)
Poem Image
Stars twinkle at last light removal
covering day to its powdery dust
where the eyes see clearly
wishes of this world
strewn
to explosion covering us
There Ink and tear
poise unison
dripping wax sealing confession
as an act of contrition
holding in secret
sounds of the pumping heart
O dare do we say
each one spoken for
utter only
by the sound of a gurgle
reaching their comfort light
by a distant Dawn
Lines in the sand
etch deep
from glares of another
tying tongues proper
placing, bound in shackles
crying limp, seething from starvation
Ever shall Heavens reflection
play trumpet
leading a chorus along strings
lighting up
the stage with pin point accuracy
passions play
*******************************************
So much easier to copy your poem in it's entirety, instead of picking favor parts and lines because the whole poem wears a masterpiece jacket :)
2nd Oct 2013 7:02am
:D Your a Brat :D But such a kind one!!!
Thank You so much Dear Rain!!!
Thank You so much Dear Rain!!!
2nd Oct 2013 7:07am
*hand to chest with shocked look on face* "Brat?" "Me?".............. That sound about right! hehe...
Thanks hun...xo
Thanks hun...xo
2nd Oct 2013 8:48am
There is truth in all wishes, wishes on stars, wishes on hopes and dreams. Sometimes dreams come true...destiny is a fickle mistress. Good read Soul.
3rd Oct 2013 4:05am
So Very True Dear Grace!!!
May Your Wishes Always come True!!!
Thank You:)))
May Your Wishes Always come True!!!
Thank You:)))
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 9:33am
Somehow this poem made me think of the good old little rhyme "twinkle twinkle little star...."
Of course yours is much more in depth creation.
Must be october coming that causes deep thoughts to swim up from its surface, Soul....
Of course yours is much more in depth creation.
Must be october coming that causes deep thoughts to swim up from its surface, Soul....
3rd Oct 2013 4:09am
:) Thank You Dear Queen :)
I think Your Right...these can be such quiet times eh? ...is it the sun fading? the leaves changing, falling...the cold creeping in that makes us turn inward...I don't know but You are absolutely right!!!
I think Your Right...these can be such quiet times eh? ...is it the sun fading? the leaves changing, falling...the cold creeping in that makes us turn inward...I don't know but You are absolutely right!!!
2nd Oct 2013 10:17am
When one wishes upon a star Soul, the universe hears.. Enjoyed this my friend.
3rd Oct 2013 4:10am
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 1:44pm
Your ability to write beautiful poems
show through clearly in every word,
every sentence, every stanza
You have great talent
Reading this poem was very satisfying
In awe
Kitty
show through clearly in every word,
every sentence, every stanza
You have great talent
Reading this poem was very satisfying
In awe
Kitty
3rd Oct 2013 4:14am
...I put letters in a box and shake :)
Rightbackatchya Kitty :)
Thank You for such a compliment-My neck no longer has the strength for my big head!!!
Rightbackatchya Kitty :)
Thank You for such a compliment-My neck no longer has the strength for my big head!!!
2nd Oct 2013 8:14pm
good stuff sd. the 2nd and 4th stanzas really stand out brutally...
like it brotha....
like it brotha....
3rd Oct 2013 4:18am
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2013 1:31pm
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28th May 2014 3:04am
I thought this was fierce truly powerful!
Love this!
Broomie xox and a pinch*
Really nice Gabe ")
ITRLIG!
Me...
Love this!
Broomie xox and a pinch*
Really nice Gabe ")
ITRLIG!
Me...
