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A Poet's Power
We stitch thoughts that become fabrics of emotions
Cloaked in poetic apparel
from Tailor-made experiences
with the sweat of our pen’s brow
We Labor hard, in scorching fields of ink
Collecting melted vowels and consonants
Metamorphosis of words, burning relevance
Into the minds, hearts and souls of our audiences
We disrobe on paper and strip on stage
Wearing only words
Exposing our inkwell for all to witness
As poetry flows through our veins
Revealing personal secrets and battles scars
Coaxing us to pen our victories in beautiful bold fonts,
So others can see that giving up, is not an option.
We are strength,
courage,
hope and inspirations; in words
We arm ourselves with lethal words
Release them through our poetry
Creating abstract art; painting belief on despair’s canvas
with the brush of a poet’s soul
Molding words of motivation
Stirring passion and evoking intimacy
With ballpoint pens that drip fantasies
Our words are powerful and weapons of change
Unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words…
or listen attentively to the vibrations of emotions in our voice.
We touch so many....
with simple words
~Rain~
Cloaked in poetic apparel
from Tailor-made experiences
with the sweat of our pen’s brow
We Labor hard, in scorching fields of ink
Collecting melted vowels and consonants
Metamorphosis of words, burning relevance
Into the minds, hearts and souls of our audiences
We disrobe on paper and strip on stage
Wearing only words
Exposing our inkwell for all to witness
As poetry flows through our veins
Revealing personal secrets and battles scars
Coaxing us to pen our victories in beautiful bold fonts,
So others can see that giving up, is not an option.
We are strength,
courage,
hope and inspirations; in words
We arm ourselves with lethal words
Release them through our poetry
Creating abstract art; painting belief on despair’s canvas
with the brush of a poet’s soul
Molding words of motivation
Stirring passion and evoking intimacy
With ballpoint pens that drip fantasies
Our words are powerful and weapons of change
Unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words…
or listen attentively to the vibrations of emotions in our voice.
We touch so many....
with simple words
~Rain~
Written by
rain1courtel
(RainC)
Published 1st Oct 2013
| Edited 1st Apr 2016
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1st Oct 2013 10:22pm
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2nd Oct 2013 00:30am
You've expressed yourself beautifully, Theo! :)
Thank you for the poetic love! Much appreciated! Xo
Thank you for the poetic love! Much appreciated! Xo
Re: A Poet's Power
1st Oct 2013 10:22pm
This speaks to the soul of
the scribe in me....
You have captured the essence....
Of why ... We ALL write...
Well Done!
XOXO
Fire
the scribe in me....
You have captured the essence....
Of why ... We ALL write...
Well Done!
XOXO
Fire
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2nd Oct 2013 00:33am
Ecstatic this ink speaks to you queen Fire! :)
I was hoping to gloss the core of poetry a wee bit! Thanks hun! Xo
I was hoping to gloss the core of poetry a wee bit! Thanks hun! Xo
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1st Oct 2013 10:29pm
Rain this is some deep, powerful poetry dear lady!!! so very beautiful peace Brenda
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2nd Oct 2013 00:34am
Thank you Brenda! Always happy when you visit my home! Appreciate the love! Xo
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1st Oct 2013 11:01pm
Paying homage in the best way possible. A worthy anthem.
Bless you Rain
S:)
Bless you Rain
S:)
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2nd Oct 2013 00:36am
An anthem for poetry indeed, SHaven!
Love the idea! :)
Thank you dearheart! Xo
Love the idea! :)
Thank you dearheart! Xo
Re: A Poet's Power
1st Oct 2013 11:21pm
Rain that is a magnificent piece on every level. I would love to hear you read it aloud on this medium. Any chance dear lady?
Luv & hugz
Luv & hugz
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2nd Oct 2013 00:40am
Thank you my sweet funnyman! Humbled by your response. Xo
....and good lawd, no reading aloud! I hate my voice! I sound like a hoarse eight year old, imitating a southern woman! o_O ;)
....and good lawd, no reading aloud! I hate my voice! I sound like a hoarse eight year old, imitating a southern woman! o_O ;)
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Too funny! bc I'm at odds with my voice at times too.
INCREDIBLE INK! ... As said this should be the site's anthem!
LSP
INCREDIBLE INK! ... As said this should be the site's anthem!
LSP
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2nd Oct 2013 6:59pm
I sooo hear you on this about reading aloud--ummm nope!! But your wording and tribute to the art of bleeding your soul out through words...beautiful!! all smiles and snaps here! :)
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2nd Oct 2013 7:07pm
haha....seems like I'm in good company for voice haters! Thank you sweet Shell!:) Been a minute!Awesome seeing you beautiful...Xo
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 2:24am
..and amen to that!
this should be the sites anthem for us all, beautifully crafted with your master ink RainC!
this should be the sites anthem for us all, beautifully crafted with your master ink RainC!
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2nd Oct 2013 5:46am
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2nd Oct 2013 2:52am
Never simple words...O great Pen of Masterpieces-Painted Beauty here Dear Rain!!!
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2nd Oct 2013 5:49am
They're simple until a message is composed....then they breed power! :)
lol @ O great Pen of Masterpieces...-that's you sweet Soul! Thanks hun! Xo
lol @ O great Pen of Masterpieces...-that's you sweet Soul! Thanks hun! Xo
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 3:05am
This poem is a masterpiece of excellent writing and good intentions. The way you depict the poet is most kind and demonstrates the work, the skills and the determination it takes to become a excellent poet...like you!
With admiration
Kitty
With admiration
Kitty
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2nd Oct 2013 5:52am
Oh Kitty, you humbled me with the most beautiful and inspirational replies! Comments coming from a gifted poet as yourself, makes me blush! Thankya luv! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 5:53am
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2nd Oct 2013 5:55am
I think you just did explain it through comment, Vizard......and it was lovely! :) Thank you for the poetic love! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 3:31am
"We put pen With Paper in times of devastating tragedy,
We just try to make Sense of it,
Maybe we will find clarity in some of these words
Maybe...we will find peace"
What Writers Do....
your words are awesome
We just try to make Sense of it,
Maybe we will find clarity in some of these words
Maybe...we will find peace"
What Writers Do....
your words are awesome
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2nd Oct 2013 6:00am
We put pen to paper with anything and during anytime. Devastation just happens to take precedence over our joys of life. I'm digging your scribe there, Free! Appreciate the love! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 3:48am
This is one of those, damn it! Why didn't I think of that!? Haha, You captured that magic quite effortlessly on this one. Coaxing us to pen our victories in beautiful bold fonts,
So others can see that giving up, is not an option.
preachin n teachin, booyaaa!
So others can see that giving up, is not an option.
preachin n teachin, booyaaa!
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2nd Oct 2013 6:07am
hahaha....You're so silly Ghos!:)I always love reading your comments. They show your fun character! Thanks a bunch suga! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 4:02am
This ink is proof positive of your title n statement... A powerful n very deep insightful n inspiring write!! Brava my dear, it's another FAV!
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2nd Oct 2013 6:09am
awww.... I adore that statement, Poet! Thanks! :)
Wide joker-smile plaster on my face! Xo
Wide joker-smile plaster on my face! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 4:14am
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2nd Oct 2013 6:12am
Thank you Michael! The feelings are mutual! :)
....and yes, always my little Ivory thunder! Xo
Pen hug~
....and yes, always my little Ivory thunder! Xo
Pen hug~
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2nd Oct 2013 4:42am
You always seem to take a few simple words and create a visual symphony of them, creating a whole world when you write and it's beautiful and inspiring to me!
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2nd Oct 2013 6:14am
A most gorgeously polished reply, Chels!:)
Really sweet and kind! Thank you lovely lady! Adore ya! Xo
Really sweet and kind! Thank you lovely lady! Adore ya! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 5:04am
I would say more but I am clapping my hands quite vigorously right now. An excellent expression of one of life's greatest obsession. Outstanding ink, supreme dedication fully expressed. Love this. xoxoxo
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2nd Oct 2013 6:16am
I love that you love this, Archie! ;)
Beautiful artistic comment you've left me too! Always the artist! Thank you luv! Xoxo
Beautiful artistic comment you've left me too! Always the artist! Thank you luv! Xoxo
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2nd Oct 2013 7:09am
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2nd Oct 2013 7:16am
You suggest a labor of love in writing that denotes the true artists, like yourself from mere novices like me.
A very enjoyable write.
A very enjoyable write.
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2nd Oct 2013 5:54pm
aww.....such a sweet and kind thought, Ted! :) Your poetic love is always welcomed here...Xo
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Anonymous
2nd Oct 2013 4:50pm
Ya got that right!!
"listen attentively to the vibrations of emotions in our voice" ~that's me Rain and you touch me everytime.
Splendid!
"listen attentively to the vibrations of emotions in our voice" ~that's me Rain and you touch me everytime.
Splendid!
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2nd Oct 2013 5:56pm
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2nd Oct 2013 6:38pm
This is grand!!! I imagine you like President Obama in !08 filling a stadium full of poets and giving this rousing speech..haha..I absolutely love the power in which you speak Rain...and every word here rang with undeniable truth...speak it young goddess..speak it!!
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2nd Oct 2013 6:58pm
Oowee! Talk about an ego boosting red bull stimulating comment! lol...Wow Naajir, this was a most humbling statement but the only thing I took from it was,...'young goddess'! lmbo..... Oh if you only knew my age. Thanks hun! Appreciate ya! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 9:12pm
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2nd Oct 2013 9:14pm
^^^ that should be patent and on billboards across the world! How true it is! Love it! Xo
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2nd Oct 2013 9:16pm
btw...wonder if I can rub some 'spirit' on my skin?! just saying......hahaha
Re: A Poet's Power
2nd Oct 2013 9:46pm
Eloquently stated and beautifully scripted! Clever, brilliant, creative, cute and excellent! Loved it, love the pic and it goes on my list! Keep on inking sister, miss you...
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3rd Oct 2013 2:15am
Well look at who the lovely sweet autumn breeze brought by?! Hey Mel!:) So good to see you dear! I've missed you too! Thanks for stopping by with your endless support! Xo
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3rd Oct 2013 2:17am
p.s.....shoot me an email when you have some time. Would love to chat via phone soon, it's been awhile! Hugs....
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2nd Oct 2013 9:58pm
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3rd Oct 2013 2:19am
Rain smiles at your actions! :) Gratifying show of affection. :) Thanks Chris! Xo
Re: A Poet's Power
wow this poem puts into words what a lot of us feel but cant express as well as you do in this awesome piece. reading this makes me so proud to be a poet! thanks you for continuing to inspire me!
My favorite line of all time!
"Unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words…
or listen attentively to the vibrations of emotions in our voice.
We touch so many....
with simple words"
My favorite line of all time!
"Unbeknownst to us,
we have become oracles for readers and listeners
who sit in quiet calm to read our words…
or listen attentively to the vibrations of emotions in our voice.
We touch so many....
with simple words"
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3rd Oct 2013 2:22am
Okay, your comment alone was worth the 'sweat of my pen's brow' to slave over this ink! :) I can not tell you how humbled I 'am by your words, Raven!
Thank you so very much! Xo
btw.....it's great hearing from you friend...
Thank you so very much! Xo
btw.....it's great hearing from you friend...
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Damn, I hate it when I'm late on the table...everybody already had said what I need to say! I totally agree with everyone; Rain you really captured the essence of a true disciple of this art we call poetry. Kudos to you my friend! You're one of a kind...the poet of the century!
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3rd Oct 2013 4:06pm
Vic, I love it when you're late at the table...you pile it on thick, and I loveeeeeeeeeeeeee it! :)
Your last line left my mouth wide open! Damn, how will I ever ink something to top that statement?!
Thank you so very much! Xo
Your last line left my mouth wide open! Damn, how will I ever ink something to top that statement?!
Thank you so very much! Xo
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3rd Oct 2013 1:05pm
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6th Oct 2013 7:59pm
Damn Rain with words like this,
"We stitch thoughts that become fabrics of emotions
Cloaked in poetic apparel
from Tailor-made experiences", you can't help but become hook to your words of God gifted poetic style. I'm telling, that is telling your great at what you do. I honor and respect your gifts. Lovely ink my friend, lovely indeed.
"We stitch thoughts that become fabrics of emotions
Cloaked in poetic apparel
from Tailor-made experiences", you can't help but become hook to your words of God gifted poetic style. I'm telling, that is telling your great at what you do. I honor and respect your gifts. Lovely ink my friend, lovely indeed.
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6th Oct 2013 11:32pm
Your comment(s)are Awesome.......like YOU!:)
Thank you so much for your kind and supportive words. Xo
Pen Respect~
Thank you so much for your kind and supportive words. Xo
Pen Respect~
Re: A Poet's Power
9th Oct 2013 2:36am
The soul of a poet is captured perfectly in this amazing piece of art. I love your mind, it is a pleasure to read your heart, mind & soul in the form of words. Sincerely, Alicia (EYES-OF-GRACE)
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9th Oct 2013 4:03am
What a beautiful comment, Alicia! Thank You! :) So wonderful to see you...xo
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Anonymous
26th Oct 2013 8:47pm
YES YES YES. This is fantastic.
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27th Oct 2013 00:12am
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26th Oct 2013 11:58pm
Add me to the long list of poets who have decided to keep this one. Every once in a while, we must write poetry about writing poetry. I believe this to be necessary & affirmative.
"We are strength,
courage,
hope and inspirations; in words"
simply stated perfection, that....that we are....that we are.
Thank you!
"We are strength,
courage,
hope and inspirations; in words"
simply stated perfection, that....that we are....that we are.
Thank you!
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27th Oct 2013 00:17am
A most humbling comment, Scraps! :)Truly appreciate your visit.
...and yes, as long as we go back to the root of why we write, our passion for the art will always shine through our words. Xo
...and yes, as long as we go back to the root of why we write, our passion for the art will always shine through our words. Xo
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2013 2:10am
Seriously it can't get better than this...hmmm...I bet does with you though... my words don't show enough gratitude and appreciation for your work. Messiah of ink!
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30th Oct 2013 3:05am
Chili, you could say one word to describe my ink and it would be as if you wrote tribute about my work. :) Thankya! Xo
Re: A Poet's Power
26th Nov 2013 6:30pm
i feel words are bowed to you and pleaded to describe them in appropriate place with infusion of thoughts which is drizzling in mind of poet. to describe the routine of poet & ink of your pen is gifted with feature "conducive to readers heart"describe the altruistic nature of poet.
appreciation cause excellence , Hoping your next lines shall ink many hearts
Hats Off
appreciation cause excellence , Hoping your next lines shall ink many hearts
Hats Off
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27th Nov 2013 4:45am
...truly in awe by your reply....
My deepest thanks for the support and poetic love....Xoxo :)
My deepest thanks for the support and poetic love....Xoxo :)
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10th Dec 2013 5:14am
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9th Jan 2014 8:17pm
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10th Jan 2014 2:08pm
Thank you so much Kyle! I'm actually floored that this piece was received so well. Glad so many poets can relate to this....Xo
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21st Apr 2014 9:01pm
77 comments... whoo. That's a lot. And I see why you got so many, it'll be a fantastic entry into the competition. I'd tell you how great this work is, but about 35 other people already did. No point beating a dead horse, right? Well, poor choice of words on my part, this poem has certainly been brought to LIFE.
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21st Apr 2014 9:16pm
Thanks so much :) A lot of amazing entries, you've got your pen full with this comp. :) Xo
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I don't know if you you realize how much I will miss you and your beautiful mind Rain.
Tara, I do hope you know that everywhere you go in your mind no matter what, Dup will always be waiting in a corner anytime you are ready to come home... I have learned a lot reading from you Malady ") and you have inspired me more times than I can count, bet you didn't know that lol *HUGS*
I hope to see you on the big screen one day showcasing your messages and beautiful love scenarios that only Rain can deliver!
Stay strong sister and know I love you Through and Through!!!!!
Always
your sister
Jackie Xoxoxoxoxox
Tara, I do hope you know that everywhere you go in your mind no matter what, Dup will always be waiting in a corner anytime you are ready to come home... I have learned a lot reading from you Malady ") and you have inspired me more times than I can count, bet you didn't know that lol *HUGS*
I hope to see you on the big screen one day showcasing your messages and beautiful love scenarios that only Rain can deliver!
Stay strong sister and know I love you Through and Through!!!!!
Always
your sister
Jackie Xoxoxoxoxox
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26th Aug 2014 3:17pm
....choked up a bit by this Jackie! I've always knew you respected me as a writer but I had no idea that your admiration ran so deeply for me until today when I roamed your profile and saw my name.
*literally speechless, but so very humbled*
Thank you! I'll be in touch with you many other ways. Xoxoxoxo
I'll be back to DU, someday......
*literally speechless, but so very humbled*
Thank you! I'll be in touch with you many other ways. Xoxoxoxo
I'll be back to DU, someday......
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26th Aug 2014 2:17am
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27th Aug 2014 3:16am
Truly, RainC, luv :-* ~
The profundity you pen here is awe-inspiring and transformative.
Thank you for embodying the soul and heart of poetry, luv. :-*
You are an inspiration, o kindred spirit! :-*
The profundity you pen here is awe-inspiring and transformative.
Thank you for embodying the soul and heart of poetry, luv. :-*
You are an inspiration, o kindred spirit! :-*
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13th Oct 2015 6:41am
....don't know how I missed commenting on such a wonderful reply you've left me Savaja!
Thank you beautiful woman! I'm humbled! Xo
Thank you beautiful woman! I'm humbled! Xo
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15th Oct 2015 8:41am
Ahhh, RainC, luv ~
No worries. :-* I am so far behind in replies, 'twill take me long ere long to catch up methinks. Mayhap, I shall sometime in the not-too-distant future. :-p
I am delighted you have returned, luv. :-* I will be in and out for awhile. Please bear with me.
No worries. :-* I am so far behind in replies, 'twill take me long ere long to catch up methinks. Mayhap, I shall sometime in the not-too-distant future. :-p
I am delighted you have returned, luv. :-* I will be in and out for awhile. Please bear with me.
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Re. A Poet's Power
23rd Sep 2015 5:27pm
such a scorching scripture! capturing the essence of every poets spirit... what a goddess
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24th Sep 2015 9:48pm
....it's a great feeling to know this ink is still alive. I really tried to spill the essence of a poet.
Thanks for reading, appreciate ya.....
Thanks for reading, appreciate ya.....
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Anonymous
28th Oct 2015 12:43pm
wow this poem , simply amazes! this is compelling,
inspiring. I love your choice of words and how you used them...
(Incrdible use of language/imagery); Thank you for sharing!
xox -- barrie
inspiring. I love your choice of words and how you used them...
(Incrdible use of language/imagery); Thank you for sharing!
xox -- barrie
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4th Nov 2015 6:07pm
"I love your choice of words and how you used them...
(Incrdible use of language/imagery"<----- and this is how, and why, we are poets. :)
Thrilled that you enjoyed this and added it, barrie! She's my baby! Thanks lovely one!
(Incrdible use of language/imagery"<----- and this is how, and why, we are poets. :)
Thrilled that you enjoyed this and added it, barrie! She's my baby! Thanks lovely one!
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I'm truly starting to crush on your personality, Taryn! :)
I feel so amazing because of your lovely affirmation, and just your all around constant appreciation for my craft.
You humble me so sweetly!
I chuckled at your revelation of the posted date. lol...
I had about 150 poems here and I deleted them all, with the exception of this one, in August of last year, when I deactivated my account. I left this one up because of the content being the reason we all are on this site. Plus, I knew I would one day return to DU and I wanted my favorite girl still standing. She keeps me grounded.
Thank you my lovely friend. Xoxo
...oh and, thanks for keeping her. :)
I feel so amazing because of your lovely affirmation, and just your all around constant appreciation for my craft.
You humble me so sweetly!
I chuckled at your revelation of the posted date. lol...
I had about 150 poems here and I deleted them all, with the exception of this one, in August of last year, when I deactivated my account. I left this one up because of the content being the reason we all are on this site. Plus, I knew I would one day return to DU and I wanted my favorite girl still standing. She keeps me grounded.
Thank you my lovely friend. Xoxo
...oh and, thanks for keeping her. :)
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4th Nov 2015 8:50pm
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4th Nov 2015 9:35pm
hey JT! Thank you for the poetic love by way of comment, subscription and Reading list.
Will be in your neck of the woods real soon....
Will be in your neck of the woods real soon....