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Over there She grows
She scraped at the four walls falling
digging through to a perfect opening
there on the other side
She glimpsed such magnificent depths
caught hold and held strong in that moments notice
a quince grove
sown to beauty
blooming
with flowering trees of purpled leaves
drenched with love under the sunshine
knowing at once it was where She belonged
climbed on through the rabbit hole
and thus escaped this horrid place
where black and white photographs
bled no forgiveness
giving their concrete expressions
She left them
to lie along a couloured distance
resting Her head in the tall soft grasses
She got what She came for
and began to grow
never leaving
not now not ever
She had found
Her roots
digging through to a perfect opening
there on the other side
She glimpsed such magnificent depths
caught hold and held strong in that moments notice
a quince grove
sown to beauty
blooming
with flowering trees of purpled leaves
drenched with love under the sunshine
knowing at once it was where She belonged
climbed on through the rabbit hole
and thus escaped this horrid place
where black and white photographs
bled no forgiveness
giving their concrete expressions
She left them
to lie along a couloured distance
resting Her head in the tall soft grasses
She got what She came for
and began to grow
never leaving
not now not ever
She had found
Her roots
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Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 7:30pm
I could attach several metaphors to this creation. The part that sticks out in my mind is, "where black and white photographs
bled no forgiveness".
bled no forgiveness".
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re: Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 7:37pm
Indeed I KNOW You could Kind Sir:)
(i'm playing catch up and shall see You soon:)
Thanks for dropping By Jazz!!!
(i'm playing catch up and shall see You soon:)
Thanks for dropping By Jazz!!!
Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 8:18pm
OMG! I'm in love with this poem! I wanna' take this poem home and live happily ever after with it! Xoxo
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re: Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 8:21pm
You are so Kind Dear Rain, I'm glad You liked it:) we all need that place eh?
Thank You so much!!!
Thank You so much!!!
Re: Over there She grows
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 8:24pm
souladareatease,
Yes! We should all be so lucky as to find our place in the sun! Beautiful thought provoking write!
Enjoyed!
tornado
Yes! We should all be so lucky as to find our place in the sun! Beautiful thought provoking write!
Enjoyed!
tornado
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re: Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 8:30pm
Re: Over there She grows
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 8:50pm
This is such a special write, you have to know nature and understand its calling to write this, and I see some of what I call the female spirituality reflected in it,I see mother earth but also the tree of life reflected in it...
Like this one very much, Soul!
Like this one very much, Soul!
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re: Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 8:55pm
You see much Dear Queen, and I thank You for that!!!
Always humbled by Your kindness-Thank You!!!
Always humbled by Your kindness-Thank You!!!
Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 10:17pm
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20th Sep 2013 10:41pm
Re: Over there She grows
Anonymous
20th Sep 2013 10:44pm
That was an incredible poem and release mr soul
strider
strider
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re: Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 10:48pm
Re: Over there She grows
Soul man
another masterpiece from you yet again.
Keep it up and well done re inventing your self within your poetry.
KG
another masterpiece from you yet again.
Keep it up and well done re inventing your self within your poetry.
KG
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re: Re: Over there She grows
20th Sep 2013 11:49pm
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2013 1:08am
Shades of Alice and Mirrormask danced in my mind reading this - both young girls seeking to find their place. Beautifully written, love.
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re: Re: Over there She grows
21st Sep 2013 1:15am
Love Mirror mask :) Thank You for such a kind compliment Dear Petit-Always the magic!!!
Re: Over there She grows
21st Sep 2013 1:16am
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21st Sep 2013 1:28am
Indeed Dear Grace-that which we deserve in all the colours we can find-Thanks for reading me:)))
Re: Over there She grows
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 7:01pm
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re: Re: Over there She grows
28th Sep 2013 7:24pm
Appreciate the Advice Michael :)
for me "caught hold and held on is a run on...
kind of like breathing...where its let out slowly...
if I had put she held it strong...the flow would be for direct in emotion...instead of empathetic.
kind of like a sighing moment...some things should be direct and quick like a punch...I agree...other times things need to breathe.
Thanks for dropping By Sir :)
And always thanks for views and advice!!!
for me "caught hold and held on is a run on...
kind of like breathing...where its let out slowly...
if I had put she held it strong...the flow would be for direct in emotion...instead of empathetic.
kind of like a sighing moment...some things should be direct and quick like a punch...I agree...other times things need to breathe.
Thanks for dropping By Sir :)
And always thanks for views and advice!!!
Re: Over there She grows
Anonymous
28th Sep 2013 7:43pm
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re: Re: Over there She grows
28th Sep 2013 7:50pm
Never hurries never Worries My Friend-Time is a bitch and Yours is always appreciated when Given!!!
(never feel a HAVE to kind Sir!!!)
(never feel a HAVE to kind Sir!!!)
Re: Over there She grows
29th Oct 2013 3:02am
Sorry to say it, i can't wrap my mind around your poem. I don't get it.Its Greek to me. But I'm glad that others like it, can make sense out of it.
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re: Re: Over there She grows
29th Oct 2013 1:11pm
Thats ok...appreciate You stopping by...it is meant to be cryptic...the ONLY ones that really need to know it's hidden gems know :)