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Night Out
I missed the last train
when I stopped to think.
It could have rained but never did.
Sleep on a bench
finished the night.
when I stopped to think.
It could have rained but never did.
Sleep on a bench
finished the night.
Published 13th Sep 2013
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17th Sep 2013 6:59pm
What a difficult way of spending the night out - sleeping on a bench...what were you thinking?
I missed the last train
when I stopped to think.
It could have rained but never did.
Sleep on a bench [should be: Slept on a bench]
finished the night.
everything was in past tense except sleep...
I missed the last train
when I stopped to think.
It could have rained but never did.
Sleep on a bench [should be: Slept on a bench]
finished the night.
everything was in past tense except sleep...
