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Superwoman of the Paddy Fields
She wipes her brow
she ties her hair
long upon her shoulder
she dares the sun
to turn her brown
as she works the land
for her sons
five in all
and their education
she tends the field
caresses cold soil
coaxes the rice plant to grow
praying for good harvest
hoping for surplus
so she could sell
to buy them schooling
so her boys will have
a better future
the dusk of day
she shepherds her boys
to the creek to bath
and home where sky
peeks through the roof
soil looks up from below
dinner she serves with love
handful of rice for each
a piece of fish on empty plates
at night she softly sings
a lullaby to make them sleep
her beloved boys
off spring of love
from a man now gone
to glory where no bullet flies
from terrorists’ guns
no hatred from vigilantes
no tears of hunger
dawn greets her with brightness
never tire she set fish traps
pound the rice for her boys
wash their tattered clothes
repair the roof of the house
set the buffalo off to graze
harvest the paddy from the field
at night her beloved boys
listen to her lullaby.
she ties her hair
long upon her shoulder
she dares the sun
to turn her brown
as she works the land
for her sons
five in all
and their education
she tends the field
caresses cold soil
coaxes the rice plant to grow
praying for good harvest
hoping for surplus
so she could sell
to buy them schooling
so her boys will have
a better future
the dusk of day
she shepherds her boys
to the creek to bath
and home where sky
peeks through the roof
soil looks up from below
dinner she serves with love
handful of rice for each
a piece of fish on empty plates
at night she softly sings
a lullaby to make them sleep
her beloved boys
off spring of love
from a man now gone
to glory where no bullet flies
from terrorists’ guns
no hatred from vigilantes
no tears of hunger
dawn greets her with brightness
never tire she set fish traps
pound the rice for her boys
wash their tattered clothes
repair the roof of the house
set the buffalo off to graze
harvest the paddy from the field
at night her beloved boys
listen to her lullaby.
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 13th Jul 2013
| Edited 24th Mar 2020
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13th Jul 2013 4:16pm
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13th Jul 2013 4:46pm
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13th Jul 2013 4:53pm
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13th Jul 2013 5:10pm
They are there in the fields RT, unsung superheroes...fighting for betterment not for themselves but for the generations to come. Thanks for reading.
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13th Jul 2013 7:21pm
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Anonymous
13th Jul 2013 9:16pm
This is such a beautiful tale of ordinary heroism...good luck with the competition
good read
Kitty
good read
Kitty
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14th Jul 2013 00:47am
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14th Jul 2013 00:14am
What a Beautiful Write Dear Grace--Super hero indeed!!!
No longer unsung with this fine work!!!
Good luck in the comp.!!!
No longer unsung with this fine work!!!
Good luck in the comp.!!!
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14th Jul 2013 00:49am
Thank you Soul. She has her joy I believe...the love of her sons. I think they will always think of her as super-mom. :)
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 3:51am
Excellent write grace...good luck!
Strider
Strider
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14th Jul 2013 11:40am
Re. Superwoman of the Paddy Fields
10th May 2020 7:34am
Lovely images make this heartfelt poem of a mother's sacrifice resonate. Nicely done, Grace !
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10th May 2020 8:39am
Hi Tony! Good to see you and thank you for reading my old poem. Well you know we have mothers like that here. So I thought I would share it.
Stay Safe!
Stay Safe!
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