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Eden, Awaiting Birth
Slow the walk on dewy grass
swish of feet on spongy moss
soft the glow of angel dusts
glow of gold on eastern sky
dream the sleeping of worlds
in the land of far away
bubbles of prism on curved rainbows
bowed with floating crystal petals
from other realms where Eden reigns
peace tranquil in hues of silver
repose the dreamer on feather
pillows and mattress of silky downs
Waking dreams of glorious Eden
of hues of peace and ever evolving
colours, Love sparkles in merry circles
like arms engulfing the passive realm
in every passionate compassionate move
souls together awaiting birth.
swish of feet on spongy moss
soft the glow of angel dusts
glow of gold on eastern sky
dream the sleeping of worlds
in the land of far away
bubbles of prism on curved rainbows
bowed with floating crystal petals
from other realms where Eden reigns
peace tranquil in hues of silver
repose the dreamer on feather
pillows and mattress of silky downs
Waking dreams of glorious Eden
of hues of peace and ever evolving
colours, Love sparkles in merry circles
like arms engulfing the passive realm
in every passionate compassionate move
souls together awaiting birth.
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Re: Eden, Awaiting Birth
13th Jun 2013 9:23am
Even though I have only woken up a few hours ago, I could go back to sleep nicely from your soothing words. This piece is like a beautiful mental. lullaby.
Wonderful write Grace.
Wonderful write Grace.
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 4:33pm
Grace
Every poem you write is so pleasurable to read.
Thank you for a good read.
Hugs
Kitty
Every poem you write is so pleasurable to read.
Thank you for a good read.
Hugs
Kitty
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2013 9:38pm
like a magical, fantasy read..lovely work-such a beautiful visual imagery you provide!
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Re: Eden, Awaiting Birth
14th Jun 2013 8:44am
It is beautiful poetry you have written here, Grace, and it reminds me strongly of a beautiful kind of magic... pure enchantment, the stuff of fond childhood fantasies. Thanks for taking us to your realm of enchantment! Lovely, song-like stuff. :)
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14th Jun 2013 9:05am
I think of this as on threshold of rebirths. Here and there. Thank you Jess dear.
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 10:43am
Lovely grace...strider...
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