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Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 2:35am
WHOOOOOOA MAMA!
Ay Carambe!....Muy Caliente!
Si Senorita!
Mucho Amour!
XOXO
Fire
Ay Carambe!....Muy Caliente!
Si Senorita!
Mucho Amour!
XOXO
Fire
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 2:42am
Si mami muy caliente! lololol Thanks fire for reading and for the great comment.:-)
Red
Red
Re: Out of Sight
Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 2:45am
Red hot!
Strider...
Strider...
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12th Jun 2013 2:53am
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12th Jun 2013 2:51am
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12th Jun 2013 2:54am
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12th Jun 2013 3:00am
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12th Jun 2013 3:03am
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12th Jun 2013 4:22am
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12th Jun 2013 5:38am
Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 4:58am
So Like...Your computer doesn't melt when You set it to fire like this???
Intricate and Passionate Write Dear Red!!!
Intricate and Passionate Write Dear Red!!!
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 5:40am
I am on my second extinguisher now Soul, there was a few sparks but I got under control. :-) Thanks for stopping by!
Red
Red
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12th Jun 2013 4:20pm
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Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 7:02am
Hot stuff my dear.. I will have to call the fire brigade if you carry on like this lol.
Wonderful write Gypsy.
Wonderful write Gypsy.
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 1:41pm
Hahaha coming from the lady who has the boys panting...lolol that's funny!:-) Thank you my dear.
Red
Red
Re: Out of Sight
Anonymous
12th Jun 2013 9:35am
you have that sexy pen talent! :-) awesome
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12th Jun 2013 1:42pm
Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 1:05pm
The slow seductive ambience of this while clearly intentful STILL left me with a hunger n anxiety that wanted to see its pleasurable end lol but of course u just had to leave me 'hangin' lol
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 1:46pm
Ohhh po baby....awwww fill in the blanks lolol. Thanks babes for the great comment. :-)
Red
Red
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12th Jun 2013 5:15pm
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12th Jun 2013 5:35pm
Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 6:38pm
Wow. Every word conjures up visual images in my mind that evoke strong desires.
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re: Re: Out of Sight
12th Jun 2013 7:06pm
Lol I have penchant for painting images with my words I thrilled you enjoyed this piece.
Red
Red
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This poem is labeled WARNING:MAY CAUSE SEVERE BURNING DUE TO POETIC HOTNESS!!!...this pulls at the testosterone bringing it just beneath the surface yearning for emancipation...you Red are a trouble maker...and this here is flat out marvelous!!!!...
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Oh!!! I love it, I love it!!! Too much fun! Naajir you made my night with this comment!!!hahaha Well my friend as I see it, I can finish it and throw you into total melt down OR you can add your own spin hmmm? Now you can really say I am a troublemaker! And it is TRULY MY PLEASURE! HAHAHA
Red :-)
Red :-)
re: re: Re: Out of Sight
13th Jun 2013 2:08pm
A response is indeed brewing for this tantalizing piece of poetic seduction....yes indeed!...stay tuned Red..hahaaa..
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13th Jun 2013 7:12pm
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13th Jun 2013 7:49pm
My naughty Colonel! Glad to see you, I knew this was right up you alley hahaha Thanks Mark your sweetie!
Red
Red