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Faraway
Faraway from home
Footsteps rustling falling leaves
On parks paved with petals
Of rainbow flowers
Heated by the sun, arid in humid
Air, drizzles of rain
At dawn
Gusts of unfriendly wind
At dusk
Faraway from you
Kissing rain
With dust in my eyes.
Footsteps rustling falling leaves
On parks paved with petals
Of rainbow flowers
Heated by the sun, arid in humid
Air, drizzles of rain
At dawn
Gusts of unfriendly wind
At dusk
Faraway from you
Kissing rain
With dust in my eyes.
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 11:38am
kissing rain with dust in my eyes..heavy line! great piece, Grace..far from home is not easy at all..
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2013 3:06pm
beautiful write and real grace...
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11th Jun 2013 1:16am
Yes, EngrVV, homesick is the word. You do dream of the islands eh. Thank you for reading me.
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10th Jun 2013 9:09pm
Wistful and a little sad your delicate pen always pulls at the heart strings, Grace.
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12th Jun 2013 8:09am
Very beautiful, romantic-feeling, and indeed quite wistful write you've penned here my friend! It is easy to praise such a great work, but hard to find the right words to convey how lovely it is. I offer my humble praise, even so! Loved it!
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13th Jun 2013 3:19am
Beautiful imagery Grace,
though I find most winds to be friendly and merry met, especially on hot days :-)
though I find most winds to be friendly and merry met, especially on hot days :-)
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13th Jun 2013 6:35am
There are winds and there are winds....thanks for reading and commenting Dulcea.