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Moving On
Laughter echoes
in alleyways
flooded by water
from drainpipes
overflowed by
the falling rain
Shivering, one step
at a time
I walk up the stairs
forever walking up
echoes of footsteps
like lonely heart beats
Lit by the gangrenous
neon light
green light, black shadows
the dark night echoes
with loneliness
the door knob is cold
a hot cup of coffee
dusts in my eyes
I smile and remember
I am moving on.
in alleyways
flooded by water
from drainpipes
overflowed by
the falling rain
Shivering, one step
at a time
I walk up the stairs
forever walking up
echoes of footsteps
like lonely heart beats
Lit by the gangrenous
neon light
green light, black shadows
the dark night echoes
with loneliness
the door knob is cold
a hot cup of coffee
dusts in my eyes
I smile and remember
I am moving on.
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Re: Moving On
Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 3:17pm
it's not easy moving on..stay strong. Lovely work, Grace :-)
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7th Jun 2013 5:36pm
Lovely poem Grace, enough to spice my second cup of coffee at noon... Never give up, keep going!
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7th Jun 2013 5:40pm
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7th Jun 2013 8:51pm
Ahh such a chore it is, I have helped move my mum so many times.
Lovely write Grace.
Lovely write Grace.
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Re: Moving On
26th Apr 2014 6:35am
Bravo Grace, perfectly sad indeed...
I can so relate to this very much!
Zazzles
I can so relate to this very much!
Zazzles
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26th Apr 2014 5:13pm