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Searching
Can you hear me
in this roaring storm
screams of the winds
conflicted from four corners
of the Earth
Can you hear me
Can you see me
in this whirls of debris
from here there and everywhere
the sands from desert unknown
dusts in my eyes
Can you see me
Can you touch me
with the tip of your mind
the fingers of your soul
with the gentle lullaby
of your care
Can you touch me
Hear me, See me, Touch me
I am standing
Alone
in a storm
that only I can feel
seek me and lead me home....
in this roaring storm
screams of the winds
conflicted from four corners
of the Earth
Can you hear me
Can you see me
in this whirls of debris
from here there and everywhere
the sands from desert unknown
dusts in my eyes
Can you see me
Can you touch me
with the tip of your mind
the fingers of your soul
with the gentle lullaby
of your care
Can you touch me
Hear me, See me, Touch me
I am standing
Alone
in a storm
that only I can feel
seek me and lead me home....
Published 7th Jun 2013
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7th Jun 2013 6:11am
Always Find Light Dear Grace!!!
A sad write of trying times-perfectly penned!!!
A sad write of trying times-perfectly penned!!!
7th Jun 2013 8:59am
7th Jun 2013 2:12pm
Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 8:14am
hey you, out there in the cold, feeling lonely, feeling old-can you feel me? this made me think of that song..a beautiful heartfelt write, Grace-nice work :-)
7th Jun 2013 8:59am
Yes Miki dear, feeling old and lonely indeed. Thank you for reading and commenting.
Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 8:21am
Well written emotion grace!
7th Jun 2013 9:00am
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7th Jun 2013 2:47pm
This is a fabulous piece Grace the storm can be a metaphor for many different things in life, nicely done!
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7th Jun 2013 2:47pm
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Anonymous
7th Jun 2013 4:14pm
This flows, winds leisurely..yet
there is a sadness and loneliness.
Love these lines: conflicted from four corners
of the Earth
from here there and everywhere
the sands from desert unknown
dusts in my eyes
Can you touch me
with the tip of your mind
the fingers of your soul
with the gentle lullaby
of your care
These are very visual lines
that connect the soul:).
there is a sadness and loneliness.
Love these lines: conflicted from four corners
of the Earth
from here there and everywhere
the sands from desert unknown
dusts in my eyes
Can you touch me
with the tip of your mind
the fingers of your soul
with the gentle lullaby
of your care
These are very visual lines
that connect the soul:).
7th Jun 2013 5:32pm
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11th Sep 2013 8:25pm
Thank You catlady...:)) your words actually made me remember this "God has promised it, and He will deliver."
