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Re: Pagan I am
Anonymous
19th May 2013 5:18pm
The fourth stanza says it all Red....write on!
strider...:)
strider...:)
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re: Re: Pagan I am
19th May 2013 5:21pm
Lol somethings just need to be said hermano, and so it falls on us, the literate and the wise, to teach others. Thank you
Red
Red
Re: Pagan I am
19th May 2013 5:22pm
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19th May 2013 5:57pm
Re: Pagan I am
19th May 2013 5:55pm
"The essence of life is everywhere in everything,
all things have a spirit that must be respected,
this day has dawned and we all have forgotten this,"<--that stanza spoke volumes :)
A powerful piece written with truthfulness!
Beautiful Read, Red! XoXo
all things have a spirit that must be respected,
this day has dawned and we all have forgotten this,"<--that stanza spoke volumes :)
A powerful piece written with truthfulness!
Beautiful Read, Red! XoXo
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re: Re: Pagan I am
19th May 2013 6:02pm
Thank you Ms.Rain I am humbled. Every once in awhile I have to follow the obligation of my office and teach.
Red
Red
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Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 1:42am
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20th May 2013 1:52am
Re: Pagan I am
How Awesome is this?!?!?!
Friggin' Great I say!!!
Indeed truths, but crafted in Art and class-Shocker :) Truly a lovely write in wisdoms bite!!!
Friggin' Great I say!!!
Indeed truths, but crafted in Art and class-Shocker :) Truly a lovely write in wisdoms bite!!!
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re: Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 2:55am
Lol gotta love your enthusiastic comment my friend its about as wonderful as you, thank you sweets.:-)
Red
Red
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20th May 2013 4:06am
My enthusiasm is ALWAYS meant Dear Red!!! <---those
are my favorite marks!!!
are my favorite marks!!!
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20th May 2013 1:03pm
Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 9:09am
perfect write as always. its strange the pagan mythology seems to follow me around.
great write
Marcus
great write
Marcus
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re: Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 1:07pm
Marcus you think it may be time to reconsider changing your thoughts about it being mythology, to it having much more honesty than most of the ideologies? Thank you my friend for reading my piece.
Red
Red
Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 1:03pm
Red, you know, you posted a poem here once and I thought it was the best. I now think this one is the best. You astound me every time every time, my friend. You're resourceful, and your imagination is rich, and your vocabulary wealthy.
The message in this poem is very potent. It carries with it a conviction that resounds on its own. An article like this one cannot come from one who is not a skilled writer.
Excellent work, Red. For my reading list.
The message in this poem is very potent. It carries with it a conviction that resounds on its own. An article like this one cannot come from one who is not a skilled writer.
Excellent work, Red. For my reading list.
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re: Re: Pagan I am
Well Demo, let's address the first part of your comment if we stop thriving to better ourselves we become commonplace and sin of complacency, hence the continual bettering of my craft.
As for my imagination, it is a perpetually pregnant wicked thing lol if my Vocabulary seems rich it is owed to my penchant for reading. I have an insatiable hunger for true knowledge not rhetoric or false ideals.
And as to the last if I seem skilled, although I assure you I am not, it is because I do write about my convictions,beliefs in short my life. I will not write about something I have no firsthand knowledge of.
I do hope one day to publish my works but till then you all are my barometer on how my work is.Thank you my friend your insightful commentary.
Red :-)
As for my imagination, it is a perpetually pregnant wicked thing lol if my Vocabulary seems rich it is owed to my penchant for reading. I have an insatiable hunger for true knowledge not rhetoric or false ideals.
And as to the last if I seem skilled, although I assure you I am not, it is because I do write about my convictions,beliefs in short my life. I will not write about something I have no firsthand knowledge of.
I do hope one day to publish my works but till then you all are my barometer on how my work is.Thank you my friend your insightful commentary.
Red :-)
Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 1:04pm
Red, you know, you posted a poem here once and I thought it was the best. I now think this one is the best. You astound me every time every time, my friend. You're resourceful, and your imagination is rich, and your vocabulary wealthy.
The message in this poem is very potent. It carries with it a conviction that resounds on its own. An article like this one cannot come from one who is not a skilled writer.
Excellent work, Red. For my reading list.
The message in this poem is very potent. It carries with it a conviction that resounds on its own. An article like this one cannot come from one who is not a skilled writer.
Excellent work, Red. For my reading list.
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Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 2:20pm
Red!! Red!! Read... That's what I said! I READ RED, n I for now have a satisfied head, until the next ink RED will have bled! lol awesomeness always lady! :)
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re: Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 2:31pm
Hahaha okaay funny boy lol Glad to see you stop by to read my piece, thanks!
Red
Red
Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 4:04pm
I'm that girl in the back dancing and shouting to the heavens
AMEN!!!!
love this sis:-)
much love
G
AMEN!!!!
love this sis:-)
much love
G
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re: Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 4:18pm
Lol G! I am glad you are there with me lol like minds an all, Thank you for reading!
Red
Red
Re: Pagan I am
20th May 2013 11:49pm
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21st May 2013 00:33am
Yeah baby! That's how we do it, speak the truth no matter what. Thanks sis!
Red
Red