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Downward Spiral
Spiraling fast
in slow motion
as despair
ages the flesh
of a grey
afternoon...
the cobwebs
of the soul
futilely attempts
to grasp
what ever
remnants
disperse
into
the murky depths
of
a
shattered heart...
in slow motion
as despair
ages the flesh
of a grey
afternoon...
the cobwebs
of the soul
futilely attempts
to grasp
what ever
remnants
disperse
into
the murky depths
of
a
shattered heart...
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Re: Downward Spiral
3rd May 2013 2:47pm
re: Re: Downward Spiral
3rd May 2013 3:11pm
Thanks, was in a pretty dark place when I wrote it...
your support is truly appreciated :)
your support is truly appreciated :)
Re: Downward Spiral
Anonymous
3rd May 2013 3:06pm
Painted the feeling to a T. Well done, Poetikmind.
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re: Re: Downward Spiral
3rd May 2013 3:14pm
Really!? Dagg I trying to paint a V! lol jk
seriously though I'm grateful for your time n thoughts dude
swinging by you spot soon :)
seriously though I'm grateful for your time n thoughts dude
swinging by you spot soon :)
Re: Downward Spiral
3rd May 2013 5:49pm
re: Re: Downward Spiral
3rd May 2013 6:12pm
Thanks Mag... Yea profound is a very good way to define
how I felt when I wrote ur lol... Grateful as always for support :)
how I felt when I wrote ur lol... Grateful as always for support :)
Re: Downward Spiral
Anonymous
3rd May 2013 7:35pm
Been there, love. You capture it well.
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Re: Downward Spiral
3rd May 2013 8:17pm
I'd bet alot of us has huh? thank u so much
for your thoughts n your sweet support my friend,
I appreciate it . :)
for your thoughts n your sweet support my friend,
I appreciate it . :)
Re: Downward Spiral
4th May 2013 5:59am
Re: Downward Spiral
4th May 2013 6:13am
Aaaawwww well u have some dope pen skills urself so I gotta take this as high compliment! lol thank u my dear poetess always n forever grateful for u :)