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whirlpool's edge
caught in the void of it all
that bitter cesspool
my self loathing ,
trapped
I dance the whirlpool's edge
I despise you like a cancer.
I will devour you,
while the embers burn
beneath self destructive souls
decaying upon their funeral pyres.
All I can do is laugh
such hysterics!
two steps forward
three downward,
as I build myself up -
only to mutilate myself
as I sift through the mess
that will inevitably be left.
that bitter cesspool
my self loathing ,
trapped
I dance the whirlpool's edge
I despise you like a cancer.
I will devour you,
while the embers burn
beneath self destructive souls
decaying upon their funeral pyres.
All I can do is laugh
such hysterics!
two steps forward
three downward,
as I build myself up -
only to mutilate myself
as I sift through the mess
that will inevitably be left.
Published 26th Apr 2013
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26th Apr 2013 10:41pm
I love this Noctem it speaks on how I so often feel..going forward just to be knocked back again..don't stop taking those steps and I promise I will do the same..powerful inking..peace Crim
Anonymous
27th Apr 2013 1:53am
I love this one..and relate well to the sentiment in it. the first stanza caught me, the second held me, and the last one truly impressed me.
28th Apr 2013 8:32am
It's a very slow process Crim.
Glad you liked it guys, thank you for the kind words.
Glad you liked it guys, thank you for the kind words.
28th Apr 2013 8:48am
28th Apr 2013 5:58pm
