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A Sin

Please give me your honest criticism, I rap bout everything including communism, I've been thinking lately and I'm locked up in my own prism, YBE over everything we the best tradition, took time off for my bad decision. Dead inside it's time to be risen, I'm not a smartass; I'm full of wisdom, I hate the fiction; it's a sin towards my religion, I miss when we was all children, but now that I'm here I'm going in till my extinction.
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