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Instance Creeping
*so what's the speed of dark?
Creeping along the edge, our universe
expanding this same manner
popping up within galaxies
vacuums void, infer life
stars dust shaken, yanked in thrust
Black hole gardens, destruction
Diligent
Apocalyptic
Raging
Kaon-s
The man headed home, dragging feat
fates delayed by way of pharmacy
screaming foul swift winds, cursing
sends in the rush of an unfed junkie
fixing the man with a glazed over stare
squeezing a throat now gasping for air
Driving
Actual
Ramped
Killing
Creeping along the edge, our universe
expanding this same manner
popping up within galaxies
vacuums void, infer life
stars dust shaken, yanked in thrust
Black hole gardens, destruction
Diligent
Apocalyptic
Raging
Kaon-s
The man headed home, dragging feat
fates delayed by way of pharmacy
screaming foul swift winds, cursing
sends in the rush of an unfed junkie
fixing the man with a glazed over stare
squeezing a throat now gasping for air
Driving
Actual
Ramped
Killing
Published 10th Apr 2013
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10th Apr 2013 5:25am
10th Apr 2013 7:42am
Good luck with the competition,
not that you'll need it.
Creeping along the edge, our universe
expanding this same manner
popping up within galaxies
vacuums void, infer life
stars dust shaken, yanked in thrust
Black hole gardens, destruction
I thought this poem was based on a
clever idea, the visual aspects also
bring it all together masterfully.
Very well written.
not that you'll need it.
Creeping along the edge, our universe
expanding this same manner
popping up within galaxies
vacuums void, infer life
stars dust shaken, yanked in thrust
Black hole gardens, destruction
I thought this poem was based on a
clever idea, the visual aspects also
bring it all together masterfully.
Very well written.
You are too kind...Thank You so much Dear Scribbler!!!
(i love oils:) and thats the death of Socrates---i found to be quite a disturbing work)
(i love oils:) and thats the death of Socrates---i found to be quite a disturbing work)
10th Apr 2013 9:25am
Excellent portrayal of the speed of dark, wonderful write Soul.. Good luck in the comp. :)
10th Apr 2013 2:10pm
10th Apr 2013 10:41am
10th Apr 2013 2:11pm
10th Apr 2013 7:17pm
Soul you are a master poet!!! the speed of dark indeed faster than we can blink..excellent poem..peace Crim
10th Apr 2013 9:03pm
I thank You for such Kind praise Crim--humbled
I am master of the spork and color with blunt crayons-Tis You who has the Masterful pen!!!
Thank You for reading:)
I am master of the spork and color with blunt crayons-Tis You who has the Masterful pen!!!
Thank You for reading:)
10th Apr 2013 11:04pm
WOW! <--see someone told me that leaving comments such as this was a bit generic in their opinion. Although I don't agree because a lot of ink WOW me, leaving me speechless and in awe.....quite like this write,....wow doesn't seem to have enough power for this ink!
It's clearly beyond the WOW factor, but WOW! WOW! WOW! :)
It's clearly beyond the WOW factor, but WOW! WOW! WOW! :)
10th Apr 2013 11:15pm
LMAO!!! Thank You Dear Rain!!!
You are way Too Kind:) Thank You for such High Praise:) I WAS proud of that one a little:)
You are way Too Kind:) Thank You for such High Praise:) I WAS proud of that one a little:)
11th Apr 2013 10:23pm
I enjoyed this Soul
I envisioned myself in a dark place watching the second stanza unfold
Good luck
G
I envisioned myself in a dark place watching the second stanza unfold
Good luck
G
11th Apr 2013 11:00pm
