Love Poems Seeking Friendly Advice
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about lost love, heartbreak and relationship problems
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Umchained Ecstasy
silky softness
of your skin against mine
awakens such a hunger
that it cannot be contained
as we revel
in the ecstasy of love
let our bodies be unchained
our souls sail on uncharted seas
of your skin against mine
awakens such a hunger
that it cannot be contained
as we revel
in the ecstasy of love
let our bodies be unchained
our souls sail on uncharted seas
#dreams
#love
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Emeralds And Songbirds
I wish that it
rained emeralds for you,
as you bathe in
the eternal sunsets hue
and time would slow
to mark your grace,
savouring the beauty
on your face.
With strength I watch
your passion swell,
your voice sings to me
my own liberty bell,
as I hold your hand
to the bluebirds song,
we dance under the
Moonlight all night long.
If winter should
fall early this year,
your warmth would
melt my crystal tears.
And with patience
you would watch them dry,
I would...
rained emeralds for you,
as you bathe in
the eternal sunsets hue
and time would slow
to mark your grace,
savouring the beauty
on your face.
With strength I watch
your passion swell,
your voice sings to me
my own liberty bell,
as I hold your hand
to the bluebirds song,
we dance under the
Moonlight all night long.
If winter should
fall early this year,
your warmth would
melt my crystal tears.
And with patience
you would watch them dry,
I would...
#FallingInLove
#hope
#love
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We
two embracing life
twin flames burning like the sun
universal love
twin flames burning like the sun
universal love
#love
#lover
#senryu
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Beautiful (2024)
beautiful woman, beautiful day
thoughts of you won't go away
I know we can never be
nevertheless it is you that I see
in inner visions of what is to come
imagining that we become one
imagining that you see me too
in any way that pleases you
your eyes, your eyes, such a surprise
shining from inside, beauty that ties
your perfection, all that I see
to something primeval deep within me
churgling gurgling bubbling up
over the rim, filling my cup
you're Aphrodite you are divine
this is for you, rhythm and...
thoughts of you won't go away
I know we can never be
nevertheless it is you that I see
in inner visions of what is to come
imagining that we become one
imagining that you see me too
in any way that pleases you
your eyes, your eyes, such a surprise
shining from inside, beauty that ties
your perfection, all that I see
to something primeval deep within me
churgling gurgling bubbling up
over the rim, filling my cup
you're Aphrodite you are divine
this is for you, rhythm and...
#love
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A Man And A Woman (Nonet & reverse. . . Plus a line lol)
Because I am the words here.
Between these words are you,
my inspiration.
In archs of ink
my pen flows
for you
only.
So
with you
my heart bonds
no new scars made,
no false prophecy.
just a man and woman
with love, respect and honour.
We'll have each other to hold close,
when all in the world seems lost to us.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It can be read from top to bottom or bottom to top.
Between these words are you,
my inspiration.
In archs of ink
my pen flows
for you
only.
So
with you
my heart bonds
no new scars made,
no false prophecy.
just a man and woman
with love, respect and honour.
We'll have each other to hold close,
when all in the world seems lost to us.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It can be read from top to bottom or bottom to top.
#hope
#love
#WritingPoetry
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I Hope You Would
I’d know you
Just from your walk
From the curve of your bones
From the way your hair sits on your shoulders
I’d know you blind and deaf
Would you know me too?
Just from your walk
From the curve of your bones
From the way your hair sits on your shoulders
I’d know you blind and deaf
Would you know me too?
#love
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What's Hers
She's so lucky, she's got you
You make it so hard not to fall for you
Oh God
Here we go again
It's unfair for me to feel this way
She's my friend and I can't take what's hers
But oh why
Must you be so fine?
So don't you seize me up like this
Don't pretend to be naive
Don't make me end up doing something
That I'll regret
You make it so hard not to fall for you
Oh God
Here we go again
It's unfair for me to feel this way
She's my friend and I can't take what's hers
But oh why
Must you be so fine?
So don't you seize me up like this
Don't pretend to be naive
Don't make me end up doing something
That I'll regret
#crush
#ForbiddenLove
#jealousy
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The Perception Of An Insecure Heart
This aching hunger
that kept me blinded for so long,
you filled in an instance,
not knowing the power you had over me,
still have over me,
not knowing just how beautiful
my loves surrender to you was.
It was always you that held my heart,
melting it in your hands, its rhythm,
at your command as a breeze
whistles through tall grasses,
gesturing to them which way to bend.
Still, My soul fears a trip,
that leads to a stumble that leads to a fall
and it fights this fear,
fights for its right to...
that kept me blinded for so long,
you filled in an instance,
not knowing the power you had over me,
still have over me,
not knowing just how beautiful
my loves surrender to you was.
It was always you that held my heart,
melting it in your hands, its rhythm,
at your command as a breeze
whistles through tall grasses,
gesturing to them which way to bend.
Still, My soul fears a trip,
that leads to a stumble that leads to a fall
and it fights this fear,
fights for its right to...
#FallingInLove
#hope
#love
#relationships
#SelfDiscovery
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unwritten endings
24 of 30
I watched him walk away
with a distinct air of unfinished business
didn't even glance over his shoulder
no indication he ever would
but I felt the later in his departure
my mind began to tremble
while my heart skipped a beat
like a poem that ends in the middle of a stanza...
...just left me hanging
there's no letting go without closure
I simply had to keep it moving
do the best I could to focus on the present
while hope kept poking me in the back
the silent emptiness continually kicking me in the ass ...
I watched him walk away
with a distinct air of unfinished business
didn't even glance over his shoulder
no indication he ever would
but I felt the later in his departure
my mind began to tremble
while my heart skipped a beat
like a poem that ends in the middle of a stanza...
...just left me hanging
there's no letting go without closure
I simply had to keep it moving
do the best I could to focus on the present
while hope kept poking me in the back
the silent emptiness continually kicking me in the ass ...
#hope
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024 #TimeHeals
#NaPoWriMo2024 #TimeHeals
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If I Stop To Remember
I have scar tissue
that spells her name,
Its valleys and peaks
landscape my core
and if I stop too long,
I'd spend a lifetime
hiking through them.
Each tree a scent
each blade of grass a memory
and the great plateau
where we parted ways
dominates all.
When sorrow dances in my bones
instinctively I move to its rhythm,
regardless if I want to or not.
that spells her name,
Its valleys and peaks
landscape my core
and if I stop too long,
I'd spend a lifetime
hiking through them.
Each tree a scent
each blade of grass a memory
and the great plateau
where we parted ways
dominates all.
When sorrow dances in my bones
instinctively I move to its rhythm,
regardless if I want to or not.
#breakup
#love
#relationships
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Please Understand: I Love You
I would love to be kissed
wanted
needed
but only by you darling
wanted
needed
but only by you darling
#crush
#FallingInLove
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Like Flames to Water
Flames to water
like
life to death.
She played
each day.
Like
stars to night
like
sun to day.
She paved
her way
into my life.
Her bright
light flickered
then died.
I gasped
a sigh
for my heart's
demise.
As my star
withered
before I said
my final,
goodbye.
like
life to death.
She played
each day.
Like
stars to night
like
sun to day.
She paved
her way
into my life.
Her bright
light flickered
then died.
I gasped
a sigh
for my heart's
demise.
As my star
withered
before I said
my final,
goodbye.
#love
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