Your Best Angry Rant

do you miss me yet            
my ejected Tourniquette?            
you diverted air from my brain            
for an interval indeterminate            
           
oh fluffy boa-ed constrictor            
thy insidiousness so sinister            
after slow-mo Soul wrench was finished            
your hollow kiss felt like a sister`s            
           
to be fair, I concede            
culpability is a two way street            
only I could be seduced by a succubus            
who never gets on her knees            
           
what was I thinking?            
I have no inkling            
you clamped blood supply so tight            
my extremitie`s extension began shrinking            
           
if you didn`t protest `bout expenses            
I may never have regained senses            
notice I didn`t say "come to"            
alas, that "sin" no longer threatens            
           
perhaps those functions still remain    
Show up once I`ve shrugged off the snake            
go on, squirm back to the garden            
my tragically beautiful mistake

Entitlement

your sense of entitlement gives you the right
to treat everyone like shit in your life?
I am supposed to drop everything to do.
whatever it is you need for me to

              a sense of entitlement gives me the right
              to expect and demand things in this life
              drop what you're doing and do it now
              figure it out I don't care how

how high am I supposed to jump today
my guess is higher than yesterday
your lack of consideration kills me
along with your self centered way of thinking

              time to jump because I say
              I'll determine how high from day to day
              inconsiderate and only thinking of me
              learn to deal with it this is how it will be

as far as you doing whatever you want
it would be nice if you gave someone a thought
or at least listen when I try to explain
and not freak out when I happen to complain

              I'll do what I want whenever I want
              without ever giving it a second thought
              don't bother to question or ever complain
              because if you do there'll be hell to pay

all of the bitching and whining and carrying on
has been going on now for way too long
I have bitten my tongue and kept to myself
with a few exceptions when it couldn't be helped

              I'll bitch and whine and say what I will
              sit there in silence you know the drill
              bite your tongue and shut your mouth
              you know your voice doesn't have any clout

talking to you is a waste of my breath
you hear what you want and dismiss the rest
once you have something set in your mind
changing your view becomes a waste of my time

              nothing you say is important to me
              I will not listen to the words you speak
              I'll make up my mind and we'll leave it at that
              and completely dismiss the opinions you have

you know what is best I should listen to you
and try to conform to your point of view
so don't ever alter or change what you do
and don't give a shit when I'm talking to you

              I know what is best and soon you will too
              if you do not try to change what I do
              I'm set in my ways and I will not change
              no matter what you do or happen to say

nope

The Bitter End

If I was transparent
the world could see  
The little girl
and the lion in me
 
Sometimes i wonder
can god tell us apart?  
Does he see the anger
that blankets my heart?  
   
The light in me
slowly faded  
The price you pay
when all love is jaded
 
I am not at fault
my hands are clean  
Yet damage surrounds me
more is forseen  
   
Crumbling under the weight
of this head  
Starting to think
my angels are dead
 
The footprints of others
all over my skin  
My love not returned
tossed in the bin  
   
Boiling point
I don't even care  
I now look at life
with a cold hard stare
 
Blood of my blood
denying the shame  
Nobody's child
A borrowed name  
   
The edge creeping closer
with every breath  
Is it truth that sets you free
is it really death?
 
Buried inside this version of me  
Loosing my grip on reality  
 
Close to explosion
I am about to blow  
The rage inside leaking
A constant flow
 
If I could just hold on
until I go insane  
Set my mind free
make a stranger of pain  
   
I don't think I can
contain this blast  
Send my soul salvation
blank out the past
 
So sick and tired
this ageing struggle  
When i close my eyes
I see the piles of rubble
 
I fight back, get up
try and try some more  
It's always the same
I land face on the floor  
 
When you scream out
as I have done  
Take a good look
what I have become
 
As you beg for mercy
A desperate face  
Watch me walk away
you drown in disgrace  
 
It won't be long now
until the bitter end  
The moment has passed
to slow my descend
 
Why could nobody see
what I was worth?  
Faintly beating heart
abandoned at birth  
   
Now justice is just
an empty word  
I could have been saved
if my cries had been heard.

I Know Your Secret

You’re an ignorant fucking cunt
who doesn’t know when to quit
Harassing me every few days
and spreading around more shit
You can’t suck a dick worth a fuck
even with those blow job lips
Do something about that fat
that’s gathering in your hips

You run off at the mouth
and you’re so full of lies
Your twat can’t be eaten
It smells like dead flies
You reek of arrogance
and low self esteem
You should fight your own fights
and not hide in your dreams

You two are the same
full of false attitude
naïve to the fact
that we all find you rude
We think it’s hilarious
everyday a new look
for the closet emo
who claims she can cook

You now pal around
with those who you hate
Does your loyal man know
how many you date?
We all know it’s an act
playing dark as a crow
and I have the knowledge
you want no one to know.

RAGE!! On he 15th of october....



"FUCK!!!"
Is what I scream in my moments
Of fast thought and fury...
My moments of
BREAK YOUR FUCKING FACE!!!
With that curb.
The "rip the phone off the proverbial wall"
That is my patience...
And calm...
And sit back and relax
And take life at a glance.
"FUCK!!!"
Is what I scream
In my moments of temporary insanity
Boiled over onto the coals
That lit the fuse
To my "WHAT THE FUCK!!!!"
BULLSHIT!!
I want to reach out
And touch your lips
With my fist
To bloody the improvised pride on your mind.
But soft!!
The calming of the beast,
Inside the unwavering
Mixed up prideful mind,
Of the broken thoughts of mine.
Then calm...
The calamity of yesteryear ceases to be and...
Everything, cool...
Calm and collective. ..
Until the point.
Pride takes over and,
Again flows the glorious crimson
Of your once flawless,
Now flawed, scarred lip and nose.
Your endorphins released for my...
Calming, settle down?
Until next time....
Release?
Act upon one's impulse
And no more.
PRACTICE WHAT THE FUCK YOU PREACH!!!!
YOU BITCH MADE MOTHER FUCKER!!!!
Wait and see..
We'll see...
Then snap.

Intricate B

Insanity Lied

INSANITY WHY?!
Do you insist on
Embracing me as though
That's what you're
Supposed to do?!
You lead me in a
Malevolent fashion,
To believe that there is
Comfort in allowing you
To bathe me in your false glow?

Well insanity...
I need you to listen and,
Hear with un-muddied ears;
Focus on the words that pour
Fluidly from my bent mind.
In your embrace,
I have searched for solace
From a world cold and cruel.
But, your bosom wasn't warm.
You aren't comforting, and
Definitely do nothing
To ease my pain.

Every time, in you I confide,
I find myself
Roaring forth in a stentorian cry
That dissolves all matter,
Down to a quantum level,
For when a soul weeps
The sound is not
Of this realm and
Would shatter every eardrum
Within 100 miles.

Insanity, you are NOT!!
My fucking friend!
You are not the best for me!!
You led me astray
In more than one way,
And whispered in my ear,
The nonsense that I hear
That drives this man, mad.
Drilling in my mind,
A paranoia so profound That,
Rather than to speak of it,
I bottle and cork that shit
In an act of rebellion.
I DEFY YOU STARS!!
I DEFY YOU MOON!!

I defy you healthy means of
The suspension from this...
Emotional retention,
As my mind soars and reels,
There's more than I can mention,
From feelings I think I don't feel
To craziness locking my soul,
In an emotional detention!!

FUCK YOU INSANITY!!
You lied to me and booted me hard
To the edge of a bottomless void of eternity.
The only stop known during the descent,
Is upon the release of my final breath,
And when I smack with a thud,
It's cause I'm no more.

ALL THE WHILE YOU FUCK!!!
In the endless descent,
A sore realization of the ignorance preached by YOU!!
YOU!!! you fucking convinced me of!!

I should've accepted the embrace
Of the one I truly needed.
Insanity you son of a bitching bastard!!
Denied me of the only
Comfort I've ever truly felt!!

I fucking defy you, and deny you,
And curse you insanity,
You cruel fucking mistress,
For turning me away from the
Purest warmth, radiated,
Soft as silk bosom where I truly belong!!

But, guess what fuck head?!
This is me.
In truest of form letting you know,
As I turn my back to the edge of the void,
Since regaining my balance.
These are my hands,
Middle fingers fully extended
Without looking back.

I see past your forked tongue poison!!
Because, whispering in my other ear
All along,
Was the voice of an Angel.
Her purest melody
Stabbed your screech with
The double edged sword of unconditional love.

So, check this out, sanity slayer.
Fool me once, shame on you...
Fool me twice, shame on me...
Fool me again? Guess what?
I guess I'm crazy since,
The definition of crazy is,
Doing the same thing,
Time and again and
Expecting different results.. Touche..

But listen good and hard you shit,
For I'll say it only once.
One voice rings louder,
Purer, more fluid and flawless than yours.
That of my Saint of a Wife.
Because of you, un-sound mind...
I almost lost forever
The only person for whom,
I truly desire to better myself.
You caused to cut with cruel disregard,
The heart from my chest.

And, when I drew back
For a fast ball pitch....
"I"...
With force,
Arm thrust forward, in a pitcher's stance...
"Love"...
And a fraction of a second
From release...
"You", fluidly into my ear canal...

And, with the inertia
From my almost pitch,
Gripping tight my reason for life,
The purpose for my next breath,
I crumble in a heap,
To the ground.

And, guess what?
As I lay prone,
Sobbing like a newborn baby,
That just lost his first born
The day after his Grandmother died,
Guess who was there,
Comforting this broke down palace
In an Angel's, warm embrace?
My soul mate.
My Queen of a Wife.
The very heart I was a minuscule fraction
Of a second, from throwing away.

So, insanity.
The last attention I will
Ever afford you, is this.
My eyes are open...
(to her purity)
My ears are clear...
(receiving her voice, so pure)
And my heart back in place,
With my soul revived,
By a love you could never provide.
Fuck off insanity.
Fuck off.

Intricate B

The Lone Stranger


"Hey, sexy! It's ME."
You give me the glinting, masked lone ranger smile.
You believe yourself to be my long lost hero.

Of course I remember you!
You're the one who forgot about me.

Your once white hat is now black
And the wolf on your shoulder is no longer shy.
Under those low slung, mudwashed jeans
I'll bet you still wear Sponge Bob shorts.

Now hold your wild horse; You got away once
But I'll tie you to mine now and drag you through deep ditch,
The same one you threw me in after I polished your gun.

You took my all...
The kindness in my outstretched hand,
The hearty "welcome stranger",
Warmth of my heart against your own,
Feather boa tickles and laughs,
The fullness of free favors,
Along with my faith that our friendship would last
Much longer than your extended sexual stamina.

Those hopes went up in smoke
with your post coitus cigarette,
Grey whispers of thin promise:
"I would love to see you again.
I'll be back tomorrow."

I choked on the dust of your leave
For two dark, rainspun years
And wondered what happened to you.
I was worried sick
That you had been shot by a flaming arrow
Perhaps from Tonto's own fist...
I was never sure whose lips you had kissed before mine.
I wonder why the Indian feather in your Stetson is frayed.

You never once sent letter of your adventures,
Though you knew I loved to learn
Nor did you ever fire a bullet in my name
To loudly ring a fast-passing hello.

Now you come to me, older but more stupid;
You ask for another round with me
On my bed of rose petals,
Baring full bottle in between your legs.

I snap my horsewhip at your head!
Shove that bottle in your ass
and slither on out of town!
Sit on the highest cactus spike
And send me pony express the note
Of what erotic shapes
You see in your lonely, waning campfires at night!

I am no fancy saloon whore.
I ride the Diamondback saddle;
Proud sheriff of this Old Ghost town.

Great entries, everyone! Will be a tough call on this one!

Okay ML, here is my submission, all of these pieces look great, you do have a challenge on your hands. This submission is a collab of a new piece and parts of an old piece. Great topic!!!

Daddy

Daddy

Every single time
I was alone on the concrete’s crack
You were there, but hours later
Every single time
I turned my back
You’re were there to serve mom papers
Every single time
I suffered a smack
You hand revealed a small crater

Fathers do not always know best
They are there to raise and not leave their sons bereft
You’re a liar
You’re a crier
Poor you?
Poor me…no fucking clue
You have ruined my life
You sadistic old bastard, so much strife
Divorce is one thing
But the aftermath was this fling
That you pumped with cash
And smoked up like your weed stash
Using family court
To thwart my emotions
Preventing me from life’s natural promotions

I yearn to taste your blood
All you have is crud
You have stomped on me
With your poisonous foot, but you couldn’t see
That the pain you caused
Has reciprocated: this should give you pause
So…

“Take your bait
and succumb to your fate,
suffer in the twilight zone,
my friend there are no cell phones,
your loves have been lost
evil creates pain at any cost
your love is foul
wolves violently howl
your heart is black
you hurt me and I hurt you back
such a horrific situation you need a smack
take your powder
your screams can’t get any louder
bloodstreams get infected
medication: your body said rejected
up is up and down is down
your mood is cruel and produces frowns
booms are screeching, booms are violent
the victims of your wrath are scared—they remain silent
(but not me) punishment is something earned, not naturally born,
never mess with me, especially when I am scorned
play your games and live and shame
you’re to blame
these rhymes take time,
your pain is sublime,
I am settled into my own mold
your insults are getting old,
so do me a favor enjoy your punishment, enjoy the twilight zone,
unfortunately for you, I cannot condone,
the actions of your mouth,
the devil will escort you to your destination down south
when I snap my fingers and count to three,
your life will disappear, and mine left with glee
go away and leave my sight,
1…2…3…take with you your endless fright,
your existence has been diminished,
your presence now finished,
I can see clearly now, I can see,
that from now, dead to me is how you will forever be.”

You’re a
Self-centered
Egotistical
Mind-boggling
Narcissistic
Fucking
Douchebag
Of an asshole.

My Anger Rant.

Ok

boys and girls

welcome to super politics 101

I am pleased your journey of understanding has lead you thus far

Lets start with the basics

There is a coven of powerful people that run your country

They are beyond your influence

The President?

Is merely the latest new face

To take the blame and to promote the dream

The promise to be lifted to the upper eschelon

The super glue of this supposed democracy

You can go ahead and wipe your ass with your vote so it serves a purpose

I can feel it

Going to hit the lottery, become a rock star or get that call from Major league baseball any day now

The President?

Is just the latest punching bag, a facade, the wizard is projecting from behind the curtain

The fist two years in office:

"Ohh he just got in, it takes time to make real changes"

Year 3 and 4

"Shit is still fucked up and he is on the way out"

Then he is gone

Rinse and repeat

Time for a new mask

Let this new face seduce you for a bit

A shiny object to distract you

Your insides bleeding from the rape of freedom

Just know it is not his cock that's fucking you

somelikeithot said:[quote-230726-MadameLavender]Great entries-this will be hard to judge!

Thank you for this competition.....it is very cathartic...and I like Grace's above....[/quote]


I agree.  This is helping with a current situation that I'm completely angry/pissed off about

I'm Sorry

I’m sorry I hate you
You’re only good to drink with
A few rounds at the bar and we’re all good
But the moment we’re back home
I hate you
You’re a dick
A jerk
Treating your wife like shit
Mocking everyone and everything
Like you’re the only one who knows anything at all
You’re the only one to do anything right at all
We’re all lower than you
You’ve placed yourself on that pedestal
I’d love to shove you off
You’re a pigheaded Dick
I should apologize to the appendage as a whole
Dick’s are lot better than you
And I think I just insulted them
Sorry Guys!
I’m sorry you’re such a fucking pig
Verbally abusive fuckwad
I’m sorry everyone’s put up with you
Especially for so long
Maybe it’s all their fault
You’re the way you are
For not standing up
Calling you out
So now I’m stuck paying the price
Fighting for what’s right
Not standing for your wrongs
By apologizing I’m only confirming what you believe
That you’re better than me
Than anyone
That you can get what you want simply by demanding
So no, I don’t think I’ll fucking apologize
I didn’t do a damn thing wrong!
I won’t be treated this way
I can’t get a decent apology out
It doesn’t work, no matter how many tries I’ve given
‘Cause you don’t deserve my apology
I’ll be going against my stance
What I believe
What I’ve worked hard to fight against for so long
And you’re not worth giving that up
Just for an apology I don’t mean
That is undeserving
Fuck this family society
Fuck it all
Fuck the ones asking me for this apology
It’s not working
And it won’t happen
You’re the abusive fuck
Not me