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Drifting in space
jaspersilence
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Fire of Insight
7
Joined 12th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 708
Poetry Contest Description
Imagine you're an astronaut,whom is stranded in space...
You can't make it back to earth,so you know you either have to drift till you die,or take your own life...However...You will be able to see things beyond what any man,or woman has seen before...Explain...
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Anonymous
Out There
Zero gravity sensations
floating aimlessly towards nowhere
slowly
thinking cheers to the space program
looking around for Spock or Alf
knowing it's all over now
just a matter of time
heavy contemplation
but the pause lent clarity
with lessening disparity
I looked out, beyond
into the expanse of time
watching the fallacy unravel
smiling at the facade
how much I bought, invested
thought I had
I laughed and closed my eyes
willed my passing
and crossed
Zero gravity sensations
floating aimlessly towards nowhere
slowly
thinking cheers to the space program
looking around for Spock or Alf
knowing it's all over now
just a matter of time
heavy contemplation
but the pause lent clarity
with lessening disparity
I looked out, beyond
into the expanse of time
watching the fallacy unravel
smiling at the facade
how much I bought, invested
thought I had
I laughed and closed my eyes
willed my passing
and crossed
Anonymous
http://media.theweek.com/img/generic/Space_1_TheRose.jpg
DRIFTING IN SPACE
The brilliant deep blue ocean
Shades of green and surf white
Seeing atolls and clouds drift by
The sun comes up like thunder
It sets just as fast
This mission has gone way past wrong
I definitely will not last
So I have a choice, live until food and water run out
Or kill myself, with what they have provided
So far I am doing well, just trying to decide
When all at once an alien ship comes near
By this time, what the hell, I let them dock
They are fully dressed, as am I, in our outer space gear
We have a secret universal translator, and so do they
They say they cannot bring me back to earth
But would I come with them to their planet, far away
I pack my bags with what I need, and go an join them
I have to live in a sealed room full of oxygen
However they give me little pills and wonderful food
I am happy I chose to go, knowing my cyanide capsule
Taped to my chest, will relieve me if things go bad
We travel through a cosmos, only shown through the telescope
With undulating sheets of colour, like the northern lights
In an out of black holes, and in an out of white
Which our scientists do not know of, but Alice knew
A universe so beautiful, so grand, it is hard to describe
Is in contrast to this race of men, built to last
Grey is not their colour, they have grey suits on
They look like naked pink mice with high IQs
Always polite, they bow to each other
As they stay out of each others' way
So I alternate between watching through the porthole
At vistas that are hard to describe
Reading what they gave to me
Passing time
I lived on their planet in a house built for me
I could not come out, and they could not come in
If you are reading this poem, I have died
They sent it with a spaceship, to the other side
The message is in a canister, and it reads like this
Dear Earthlings you have destroyed your own land
We did that once before, and now we take a stand
Of no harm to the earth and no harm to the animals
As for you "humans", you are acting like cannibals
Instructions on how to come back from the precipice
Are clearly written in 10 languages
If you fail to follow them, we are sure
That the planet earth will die
For Gaia is her name
We read about her once
We know it will be a shame
To be on our list of extinct planets
Who were much like you
Intelligent and capable, but stupid and greedy
In the name of religion or politics or wealth
You drove the planet down
As for your astronaut, he loves to get high
So he will live out his natural life on euphoriants
Do not worry about your man
We even cloned a woman for him
Using one of his ribs
He will live to a ripe old age
Don't you go worrying about him
The only worry you have are your
Children's children's children....
DRIFTING IN SPACE
The brilliant deep blue ocean
Shades of green and surf white
Seeing atolls and clouds drift by
The sun comes up like thunder
It sets just as fast
This mission has gone way past wrong
I definitely will not last
So I have a choice, live until food and water run out
Or kill myself, with what they have provided
So far I am doing well, just trying to decide
When all at once an alien ship comes near
By this time, what the hell, I let them dock
They are fully dressed, as am I, in our outer space gear
We have a secret universal translator, and so do they
They say they cannot bring me back to earth
But would I come with them to their planet, far away
I pack my bags with what I need, and go an join them
I have to live in a sealed room full of oxygen
However they give me little pills and wonderful food
I am happy I chose to go, knowing my cyanide capsule
Taped to my chest, will relieve me if things go bad
We travel through a cosmos, only shown through the telescope
With undulating sheets of colour, like the northern lights
In an out of black holes, and in an out of white
Which our scientists do not know of, but Alice knew
A universe so beautiful, so grand, it is hard to describe
Is in contrast to this race of men, built to last
Grey is not their colour, they have grey suits on
They look like naked pink mice with high IQs
Always polite, they bow to each other
As they stay out of each others' way
So I alternate between watching through the porthole
At vistas that are hard to describe
Reading what they gave to me
Passing time
I lived on their planet in a house built for me
I could not come out, and they could not come in
If you are reading this poem, I have died
They sent it with a spaceship, to the other side
The message is in a canister, and it reads like this
Dear Earthlings you have destroyed your own land
We did that once before, and now we take a stand
Of no harm to the earth and no harm to the animals
As for you "humans", you are acting like cannibals
Instructions on how to come back from the precipice
Are clearly written in 10 languages
If you fail to follow them, we are sure
That the planet earth will die
For Gaia is her name
We read about her once
We know it will be a shame
To be on our list of extinct planets
Who were much like you
Intelligent and capable, but stupid and greedy
In the name of religion or politics or wealth
You drove the planet down
As for your astronaut, he loves to get high
So he will live out his natural life on euphoriants
Do not worry about your man
We even cloned a woman for him
Using one of his ribs
He will live to a ripe old age
Don't you go worrying about him
The only worry you have are your
Children's children's children....
jaspersilence
Forum Posts: 708
Fire of Insight
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Joined 12th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 708
Very nice,thanx for starting it of Miki & P.B.U.Y
Anonymous
“Fixing the Bubble”
http://static.ddmcdn.com/gif/space-walk-hubble.jpg
Things happen in space
unknown to us on Earth,
the endless hours,
no concepts of time,
you can lose your mind in this place.
We had been working for weeks,
the televised
HST-repair-mission,
its telescope had
been malfunctioning,
not reading the
low ultra-violets.
On the last day,
the commander-in-charge
said we had
to move quick,
the Perseus shower
was heading our way,
we’d be dead meat
from the meteorite-heat
in T-minus-twenty.
Damn!
That did not
give us much time,
there was still
plenty to do,
if you only knew.
Perkin-Elkins
designed this bad boy,
a 24,000-lb behemoth
capable of the
most magnificent,
vivid-astrophotography
in the entire universe,
no distortion,
laser-clear.
The flawed mirror issue
was one thing,
but not reading
low UVs was serious,
we had to get
this mission complete,
and fast,
those flying-rocks were
heading this way
at supersonic-speeds.
I asked the foreman
for the ratchet,
got no answer.
What the hell was he doing,
space-dreaming?
I asked him again,
screamed for the tool,
still no answer.
Jesus!
I spun around to look.
God Almighty!
The crew was all gone,
they were nowhere to be seen,
a shiver went down my spine,
to stay out of trouble,
they took refuge
in the Hubble,
we called it The Bubble,
how unkind.
Christ!
Those guys
had left me out here
all alone
in the sub-zero cold,
to face
a horrific
fiery-death,
solo.
I was a fool to
trust their calculations,
the first meteor
whizzed by so fast,
it was ten minutes early,
singed my boot,
melted the heel,
that hurt.
This was crazy,
freaking insane,
me floating,
dodging,
pelted with cosmic-dust,
to think I trusted them.
The next heat-rock
slammed into the craft,
dead-center,
taking have of it with it,
I could see human-entrails,
they looked like sausages,
snakes floating in space,
quite sickening.
Quickly,
I used my
propulsion-device
to get away,
get myself out
of this terrible mess.
Good Lord!
I moved just in time,
the next meteorite
finished off
what was left of
the craft,
not a trace,
no wreckage,
it disappeared
into thin air.
Sadly,
it had
happened again,
lives lost,
millions tossed,
just another day
in the life of
a working-astronaut.
But,
no worries.
You see,
I heard the Russians
were on their way
over from the ISS,
be here in an hour,
gonna rescue me.
HST-Hubble Space Telescope
ISS- International Space Station
http://static.ddmcdn.com/gif/space-walk-hubble.jpg
Things happen in space
unknown to us on Earth,
the endless hours,
no concepts of time,
you can lose your mind in this place.
We had been working for weeks,
the televised
HST-repair-mission,
its telescope had
been malfunctioning,
not reading the
low ultra-violets.
On the last day,
the commander-in-charge
said we had
to move quick,
the Perseus shower
was heading our way,
we’d be dead meat
from the meteorite-heat
in T-minus-twenty.
Damn!
That did not
give us much time,
there was still
plenty to do,
if you only knew.
Perkin-Elkins
designed this bad boy,
a 24,000-lb behemoth
capable of the
most magnificent,
vivid-astrophotography
in the entire universe,
no distortion,
laser-clear.
The flawed mirror issue
was one thing,
but not reading
low UVs was serious,
we had to get
this mission complete,
and fast,
those flying-rocks were
heading this way
at supersonic-speeds.
I asked the foreman
for the ratchet,
got no answer.
What the hell was he doing,
space-dreaming?
I asked him again,
screamed for the tool,
still no answer.
Jesus!
I spun around to look.
God Almighty!
The crew was all gone,
they were nowhere to be seen,
a shiver went down my spine,
to stay out of trouble,
they took refuge
in the Hubble,
we called it The Bubble,
how unkind.
Christ!
Those guys
had left me out here
all alone
in the sub-zero cold,
to face
a horrific
fiery-death,
solo.
I was a fool to
trust their calculations,
the first meteor
whizzed by so fast,
it was ten minutes early,
singed my boot,
melted the heel,
that hurt.
This was crazy,
freaking insane,
me floating,
dodging,
pelted with cosmic-dust,
to think I trusted them.
The next heat-rock
slammed into the craft,
dead-center,
taking have of it with it,
I could see human-entrails,
they looked like sausages,
snakes floating in space,
quite sickening.
Quickly,
I used my
propulsion-device
to get away,
get myself out
of this terrible mess.
Good Lord!
I moved just in time,
the next meteorite
finished off
what was left of
the craft,
not a trace,
no wreckage,
it disappeared
into thin air.
Sadly,
it had
happened again,
lives lost,
millions tossed,
just another day
in the life of
a working-astronaut.
But,
no worries.
You see,
I heard the Russians
were on their way
over from the ISS,
be here in an hour,
gonna rescue me.
HST-Hubble Space Telescope
ISS- International Space Station
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
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I'll Be Right There
I've been here before
All of my life in fact
Suspended between life and the unknown
Seeking salvation and acceptance by many who I'm now foreign to
Unseen by
Yet enjoying my freedom above them
Unpolluted by the very things which keep them bound
I can feel her tentacles pulling me
She's not the monster my mother always said to stay away from
Make sure you have protection daddy would warn
But she's always been there with me
For me
I built sandcastles under her
Held hands and stole kisses
She colored my daughters' skin
She's warming my back now
Pulling me faster and faster
Moving me closer and closer
I can't resist her
I never had the strength
I'll just sleep
So we can be together
Shoulda brought marshmallows
I'll Be Right There
I've been here before
All of my life in fact
Suspended between life and the unknown
Seeking salvation and acceptance by many who I'm now foreign to
Unseen by
Yet enjoying my freedom above them
Unpolluted by the very things which keep them bound
I can feel her tentacles pulling me
She's not the monster my mother always said to stay away from
Make sure you have protection daddy would warn
But she's always been there with me
For me
I built sandcastles under her
Held hands and stole kisses
She colored my daughters' skin
She's warming my back now
Pulling me faster and faster
Moving me closer and closer
I can't resist her
I never had the strength
I'll just sleep
So we can be together
Shoulda brought marshmallows
MadameLavender
Forum Posts: 5726
Guardian of Shadows
90
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5726
Beyond The Capsule Door
(Or what happens after David Bowie’s hero dies in space, set to the tune of “Space Oddity”)
Ground Control, it is no more.
Ground Control, it is no more.
I’ve stepped through the capsule door.
(Ten ) Ground Control, (Nine) I am no more (Eight)
(Seven, six) This countdown’s (Five) different than before; (Four)
(Three, two) Meant for landing, (One) destined right for Heaven’s Floor.
This is Heaven’s Floor to Major Tom,
You’re floating very near
Turn your engines off and land right over here.
This is Major Tom to Heaven’s Floor,
I’m seeing with new eyes
All the secrets that are God’s up in the skies,
And the place where all the astronauts must go
For having gave their lives for duty—I know.
Now here, as I’m landing in a new place
Alive, in Lord’s embrace
The colors bend, entwined,
Rainbows right before my eyes.
And though I don’t know really, what went wrong,
I’m feeling very whole
From the welcome of the souls here that I know.
My wife will be ok and learn to make a start
Without me, but filled with God’s grace within her heart.
This is a new place, Major Tom.
This is your new life, Major Tom.
Will you join us, Major Tom?
We’ve been waiting, Major Tom.
Angeliki
Angela Psyhopoulos
Forum Posts: 100
Angela Psyhopoulos
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 1st Mar 2013Forum Posts: 100
I was travelling in the SPungemat Rocket
First the DOg RONNY then me
ANd I was going to Jupiter planet of church laws
Somewhere RONNY never went before
The planet had plates with empty signals
there where no directions and the MArshian Priests
where all gathering human genes for transgression
I couldn't see a savior
The rocketship SPungemat had no radio signal
Gravity was pounding in my heart
I couldn't find my steps but I was lifted in the air
For moments at a time, the velocity of the aircraft shuttle
left me deaf
I was blind with no priest In Jupiter able to exorcise me
All the marshian priests are having human transgressions
But the planets universal laws are on the side
of the most sensitive, and I was allien
I found the Spungemat SAtellite ready
to tansmit signals of disbelief and ill fame horror
Of the human genes transgression to Marshians
The transmission polluted the air with criminal cells
Modified by a Satellite with intentions of creating
HUman bombs, the Marshians wanted to die
There where no church laws in Jupiter
There was only a sacred universal law lingering for Allien only
I commanded the spacecraft to leave Jupiter
to go to Earth and warn CHurches about the transmission
THe pilot was found dead with a cross left in his hands
I Allien found a COMMANDER and he suddenly pressed a button
which set the assembly mission too early
The Commander was infected by the Spungemat Satellite transmission
and started drinking a dead priests blood
I luckily was saved by a passing Spacecraft
The austronauts where human and I survived with the feeling of decomposure
First the DOg RONNY then me
ANd I was going to Jupiter planet of church laws
Somewhere RONNY never went before
The planet had plates with empty signals
there where no directions and the MArshian Priests
where all gathering human genes for transgression
I couldn't see a savior
The rocketship SPungemat had no radio signal
Gravity was pounding in my heart
I couldn't find my steps but I was lifted in the air
For moments at a time, the velocity of the aircraft shuttle
left me deaf
I was blind with no priest In Jupiter able to exorcise me
All the marshian priests are having human transgressions
But the planets universal laws are on the side
of the most sensitive, and I was allien
I found the Spungemat SAtellite ready
to tansmit signals of disbelief and ill fame horror
Of the human genes transgression to Marshians
The transmission polluted the air with criminal cells
Modified by a Satellite with intentions of creating
HUman bombs, the Marshians wanted to die
There where no church laws in Jupiter
There was only a sacred universal law lingering for Allien only
I commanded the spacecraft to leave Jupiter
to go to Earth and warn CHurches about the transmission
THe pilot was found dead with a cross left in his hands
I Allien found a COMMANDER and he suddenly pressed a button
which set the assembly mission too early
The Commander was infected by the Spungemat Satellite transmission
and started drinking a dead priests blood
I luckily was saved by a passing Spacecraft
The austronauts where human and I survived with the feeling of decomposure
edward
The Poetic Philosopher
Forum Posts: 29
The Poetic Philosopher
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 7th June 2013 Forum Posts: 29
The black hole
on the other side of a black hole is where you can find me
Feeling null and void
Lost in the vacuum of nothingness
A souless vessle waisting away
In a graveyard for stars
Where asteroids collides
on the other side of a black hole is where you can find me
Feeling null and void
Lost in the vacuum of nothingness
A souless vessle waisting away
In a graveyard for stars
Where asteroids collides
edward
The Poetic Philosopher
Forum Posts: 29
The Poetic Philosopher
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 7th June 2013 Forum Posts: 29
THE BLACK HOLE
on the other side of a black hole is where you can find me
Feeling null and void
Lost in the vacuum of nothingness
A souless vessle waisting away
In a graveyard for stars where asteroids collides
Damn this is hard the words jus wont come
Pent up anger have me exploading like a supernova lying
In the fields of pluto
The death and rebirth of a universe
on the other side of a black hole is where you can find me
Feeling null and void
Lost in the vacuum of nothingness
A souless vessle waisting away
In a graveyard for stars where asteroids collides
Damn this is hard the words jus wont come
Pent up anger have me exploading like a supernova lying
In the fields of pluto
The death and rebirth of a universe
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
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Space Exploration Gone Haywired
Drifting in space
almost out of oxygen
before I passed out,
dreadful thoughts flashed
through my numbing brain:
river of darkness
fire in the lake
modern tyrants
overriding sweet memories:
afternoon walks on the beach
sipping vintage wines
making love afterwards
before I join
this space exploration.
I have been floating for days
within this dark abyss,
lost sense of time
defecating in zero G,
until there was
an ominous splintering crack--
followed with quick flash images
an updraft... caught me
boosting me farther
into oblivion,
turning into quagma
beyond infinity
Carpe_Noctem
Forum Posts: 3022
Tyrant of Words
8
Joined 3rd Mar 2013Forum Posts: 3022
Icarus Project
I'm gonna send him to outer space,
to find another race.
Spaceman, I always wanted you to go
into space man
How exciting then, to be chosen
handpicked, best of the best
The Intense training
all worth it
Champagne flutes toast the christening
Icarus the Sol dancer
Solar sails unfurled
five, four , three
two, one
ignition
Day 82
Just.....plasma....storm
Klaxon sounds
this is not a drill
...Mayday...
..Control..
Circuits fried pungent smells
wafting through the ozone
There's a fire between us
my love, where is your god?
I have lost control
if the oxygen system holds
I will have the most
spectacular view of the sun
Here I fade to black
My love know
I think of you
Icarus signing off...
Is this oxygen deprivation?
I swear there is a beacon
shining out there
I can hear Sneaky Sound System
I saw a UFO but nobody believes me
ground control to Major Tom
Beam me up Scotty
I want to go home
FacePaint
Steven D
Forum Posts: 98
Steven D
Thought Provoker
8
Joined 28th Nov 2012Forum Posts: 98
Into The Abyss~
"It was just another random systems test,
'Get your suit on and your ass out on that deck!'
When I came out the ship, through the air-lock doors,
Didn't know I wouldn't see anyone anymore.
I got out on the Deck and something must have went wrong,
Alarms and flashing lights came on, then it was gone.
I woke up floating through this void all by myself,
And now it occurs to me that no one will come to help.
If only I could have known what I know now,
I wouldn't be looking out at the world
wishing I could get back Home somehow.
I would have stayed on board and died there with the crew,
alas, I'm in this nothingness, what can I do?
I find myself in this Abyss, staring deep inside,
I feel it staring back at me, comforting my mind.
As I find release I find that it's so peaceful here,
There's no Hate, there's no Pain and, certainly, no Tears.
Just Planets floating like big balls upon calm Ocean tide,
Just beauty in this nothingness to help me pass the Time.
The Stars look so amazing here, like giant fireflies,
Wandering so aimlessly inside this endless night.
I'm glad that i could be right here as Time just fades,
Oxygen is getting low but its not like I can evade.
So into this Abyss I go, with no control,
Letting it consume my Mind, my Heart, my Soul.
I thought it would be nothingness, but I was wrong,
Surely this is Heaven and my Soul is moving on.
It wants me here, i hear it calling me, The Great Abyss,
It tells me if I let it it will take my Loneliness.
I think that I know what it wants me to do,
And I guess this is my last goodbye to you.
I'll take off my helmet and welcome Her embrace,
And I will be forever free inside this Beautiful place.
Don't know if anyone will find this recording.
It doesn't matter anymore.
The Abyss will have already rescued me......"
"It was just another random systems test,
'Get your suit on and your ass out on that deck!'
When I came out the ship, through the air-lock doors,
Didn't know I wouldn't see anyone anymore.
I got out on the Deck and something must have went wrong,
Alarms and flashing lights came on, then it was gone.
I woke up floating through this void all by myself,
And now it occurs to me that no one will come to help.
If only I could have known what I know now,
I wouldn't be looking out at the world
wishing I could get back Home somehow.
I would have stayed on board and died there with the crew,
alas, I'm in this nothingness, what can I do?
I find myself in this Abyss, staring deep inside,
I feel it staring back at me, comforting my mind.
As I find release I find that it's so peaceful here,
There's no Hate, there's no Pain and, certainly, no Tears.
Just Planets floating like big balls upon calm Ocean tide,
Just beauty in this nothingness to help me pass the Time.
The Stars look so amazing here, like giant fireflies,
Wandering so aimlessly inside this endless night.
I'm glad that i could be right here as Time just fades,
Oxygen is getting low but its not like I can evade.
So into this Abyss I go, with no control,
Letting it consume my Mind, my Heart, my Soul.
I thought it would be nothingness, but I was wrong,
Surely this is Heaven and my Soul is moving on.
It wants me here, i hear it calling me, The Great Abyss,
It tells me if I let it it will take my Loneliness.
I think that I know what it wants me to do,
And I guess this is my last goodbye to you.
I'll take off my helmet and welcome Her embrace,
And I will be forever free inside this Beautiful place.
Don't know if anyone will find this recording.
It doesn't matter anymore.
The Abyss will have already rescued me......"
Wakry
Charlie
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Charlie
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 6th June 2012Forum Posts: 7
Outwards, unto nothing
To see what no man has seen
To feel what no man has felt
I have the grey round window
I gaze through my small grey window, tranced in the nothingness
All I see is a mercliess reflection
A lunatic lusting longingly into the bleak infinite
No escape from the outwards drift
Rasping, banging, panting at the window
To see what no man has seen
To feel what no man has felt
I have the grey round window
I gaze through my small grey window, tranced in the nothingness
All I see is a mercliess reflection
A lunatic lusting longingly into the bleak infinite
No escape from the outwards drift
Rasping, banging, panting at the window
LobodeSanPedro
Forum Posts: 3304
Tyrant of Words
109
Joined 16th Apr 2013Forum Posts: 3304
Thanks Jasper for providing the challenge ... It really gave me a situation to think about.
Great work by everyone.
LSP
Great work by everyone.
LSP