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lepperochan
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Poetry Contest Description
Write a short poem
I've noticed theres been a shift towards short poems among a fair amount of poets. I like them, they pack a punch, deep as an ocean, sharp as a Jewish accountant
Please write a poem (new) with words not exceeding 25. Title not included
I'm looking for depth, intellect, wit even
I've a theme for this one, if you dont mind. The image above struck me, and her story, I found quite beautiful:
she took the gun from her injured husband who was carted away in a car to a safe house. she kept the army back until she was eventually killed. when the commander of the army saw they were fighting a woman he told his army not to touch her. she was buried by her own kind
anyhow, he said aloud "we fight for a queen who cares not about us, and she fought for love and nation"
"The theme:
The photo was chosen for Women's day in Ireland and the quote below was written on top:
"Don't be afraid to be associated with a strong woman. One day may come and she'll be your only army".
take what you like out of the image, no need to take it literally if it's not your cup of tea, concentrate more on the quote
Thank you muchley
let's say two per human
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Hullo
yes, that's what I'm talking about. depth, I like how you present her. good stuff, well done
yes, that's what I'm talking about. depth, I like how you present her. good stuff, well done
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lepperochan
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Nathaniel Peter, you've captured the essence of the image and quote very well, thank you. Good luck
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I lay
still as the fog
in winter
heard
them fall
then felt her lips
on my forehead
fell into sleep
with a smile
still as the fog
in winter
heard
them fall
then felt her lips
on my forehead
fell into sleep
with a smile
Indie
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blood and gun smoke
She stood fearless
temporarily bulletproof
gun smoke lingering
as death awaited her sacrifice
of blood freely given
a one woman army
dying for her homeland
temporarily bulletproof
gun smoke lingering
as death awaited her sacrifice
of blood freely given
a one woman army
dying for her homeland
Written by Indie
(Miss Indie)
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lepperochan
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Good stuff there Miss Indie, love it. welcome to the hood
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Flack You
Bitch In Ditch With Killer Itch
Fashion Assassin Passion Cash In
Rifle Crack Step Back No Slack
Adversary Itinerary Get Rich
Ashen Distraction Imagine Reaction
Fashion Assassin Passion Cash In
Rifle Crack Step Back No Slack
Adversary Itinerary Get Rich
Ashen Distraction Imagine Reaction
Written by Blackwolf
(I.M.Blackwolf)
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Splintered
in the moment,
and the wreckage is forever.
But death will follow,
to swap her strength
for freedom.
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lepperochan
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Black wolf, Jade, Missy , Ethan
good stuff y'all
Missy, should I ask how you knew that is an AK
anyhow, all wonderful perspectives, well done, good luck
good stuff y'all
Missy, should I ask how you knew that is an AK
anyhow, all wonderful perspectives, well done, good luck
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She was willing
to die
for the pain
of losing
her love
to die
for the pain
of losing
her love