Be the Storm
Mstrmnd1923
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Is there a way to delete my entry from this thread..the lines and spacing are all messed up..I was hoping to delete from the thread and resubmit as the original is right at the 50 lines..I also didn't follow the rules in regards to not writing in the 1st person so not even sure if I should resubmit
WillowsWhimsies
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Dangerous Mind
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Thank you for your fantastic entries, Mstrmnd1923 & Betty!
Firestorm
blazing sorceress
of the night
igniting my passions
unforetold
with firebolts
lighting up my dark skies
and the heat of two bodies
entangled, as flame
becoming, together
one growing inferno
reaching for climax
intertwined
until pulsating cyclones
erupt and convulse
scorching our love
deep into our souls…
with my seductive tempest:
femme fatale
Written by nightbirdblue
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WillowsWhimsies
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Dangerous Mind
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Joined 8th Mar 2016 Forum Posts: 296
Thank you for a great entry, nightbirdblue!
XiaoLong
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Tornadic Affair
In the sands of time, I reminisce that forbidden wine
torridly fine, the tornadic disruptions that comes to mind,
fragrance that lingers forever, my heart still gently meanders,
silent smiles I’d remember, freeing this soul to love, it surrenders!
I’d admit there’s so much pain, really nothing to gain,
with all the distractions, the pleasures were of tropical rain,
so easy for this heart to wander off, drenched in the wetness,
this attraction so vicious, an affair that’s simply dangerous!
to whom could I speak, opening up, to whom would I share,
moments of madness, justifications that I’ve come to lay bare,
my restless mind, belligerently tangential, the soul seeks the essential,
my body yearns for what’s physically biological, nevertheless consequential!
memories that lingers, thunderously returning a lot stronger,
the fire within, can’t wait to be fuelled by desires any longer,
for the pleasures of love that keeps me alive, passion is no stranger,
for I am a creature of touch, I long for the sensual language of my lover!
the universe as I know it, has it magical ways,
It disrupts, it corrupts, yet it makes me to be in touch,
my heart and my soul happily eager to vanish into the haze,
fireworks that awakened, the enchantment that I miss very much,
memories buried deep, yet I long for the warmth inside,
like a new feeling, having that body was erotically a new thing,
I want to ride, I want to slide, I want that sensation with all my pride,
the dust of love making, erotic chemistry that transcends everything!
the richness of deep passionate nights,
proceeded by the romantic sunset at twilight,
intoxicated souls bounded momentarily together,
sips of the forbidden, why would that really matter?
caressing each other under the moonlight,
catching the flames throwing the bodies wildly, tight,
the sensations of our throbbing hearts and rhythmic hips,
calm seaside breeze turning into a storm with our sealed lips,
inhibited, unabated, the night of lust ravenously blossoms,
the smoothness and tenderness that I long for again and again!
whirlwind of madness and romance in a mix, lustfully awesome,
for I am the injured creature, as I run my fingers through my wavy mane!
torridly fine, the tornadic disruptions that comes to mind,
fragrance that lingers forever, my heart still gently meanders,
silent smiles I’d remember, freeing this soul to love, it surrenders!
I’d admit there’s so much pain, really nothing to gain,
with all the distractions, the pleasures were of tropical rain,
so easy for this heart to wander off, drenched in the wetness,
this attraction so vicious, an affair that’s simply dangerous!
to whom could I speak, opening up, to whom would I share,
moments of madness, justifications that I’ve come to lay bare,
my restless mind, belligerently tangential, the soul seeks the essential,
my body yearns for what’s physically biological, nevertheless consequential!
memories that lingers, thunderously returning a lot stronger,
the fire within, can’t wait to be fuelled by desires any longer,
for the pleasures of love that keeps me alive, passion is no stranger,
for I am a creature of touch, I long for the sensual language of my lover!
the universe as I know it, has it magical ways,
It disrupts, it corrupts, yet it makes me to be in touch,
my heart and my soul happily eager to vanish into the haze,
fireworks that awakened, the enchantment that I miss very much,
memories buried deep, yet I long for the warmth inside,
like a new feeling, having that body was erotically a new thing,
I want to ride, I want to slide, I want that sensation with all my pride,
the dust of love making, erotic chemistry that transcends everything!
the richness of deep passionate nights,
proceeded by the romantic sunset at twilight,
intoxicated souls bounded momentarily together,
sips of the forbidden, why would that really matter?
caressing each other under the moonlight,
catching the flames throwing the bodies wildly, tight,
the sensations of our throbbing hearts and rhythmic hips,
calm seaside breeze turning into a storm with our sealed lips,
inhibited, unabated, the night of lust ravenously blossoms,
the smoothness and tenderness that I long for again and again!
whirlwind of madness and romance in a mix, lustfully awesome,
for I am the injured creature, as I run my fingers through my wavy mane!
Written by XiaoLong
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WillowsWhimsies
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Dangerous Mind
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Thank you for your entry, XiaoLong!
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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Daniel Long
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Emotional Firestorm
Passions ignited, I am intoxicated with rage.
Eyes enflamed with hellfire and soul enlivened,
this firestorm and the whirling clouds of smoke
incites both panic and fear within my path.
Candlewicks flare up in the heat of my presence,
so too, I melt the wax of the candlesticks.
My inferno cloud billows into the sweet air,
which itself combusts and is consumed.
Tears of joy once filled the sea of my eyes.
Now that sea boils; steam-pluming into clouds.
Even in blind rage though, my fire gives light
to perceive form in people and the words they say.
My flames lick and scorch the feelings of any
who stubbornly stand in the path of this storm.
With the locomotion of this madness,
all the world around is charred black.
Eyes enflamed with hellfire and soul enlivened,
this firestorm and the whirling clouds of smoke
incites both panic and fear within my path.
Candlewicks flare up in the heat of my presence,
so too, I melt the wax of the candlesticks.
My inferno cloud billows into the sweet air,
which itself combusts and is consumed.
Tears of joy once filled the sea of my eyes.
Now that sea boils; steam-pluming into clouds.
Even in blind rage though, my fire gives light
to perceive form in people and the words they say.
My flames lick and scorch the feelings of any
who stubbornly stand in the path of this storm.
With the locomotion of this madness,
all the world around is charred black.
Written by gothicsurrealism
(Daniel Long)
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Heart_of_Stone
Rachela
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Rachela
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I am the storm
I am the storm
bitter winds howling
screaming in feral ecstasy
cursing a loveless world
sharp talons to rake men's hearts
with needle sharp fingers
of freezing fire
a burning flame of ice
for I am no longer alive
no heart beats in my chest
nor blood flows through my veins
I am far more that human
and far, far less
for I see the sins of humanity
feasting on these transgressions
seeing the strong feed off the weak
seeing the weak [so willingly]
offer their souls in sacrifice
I am your doom
and your one saving grace
look into my eyes
to see your fate
how your pathetic spirits wait
sniveling in fear of the light
how can spineless creatures fight
lies won't save you but I just might
pick up the sword
your shining two edged soul
and stand in the gale
of my feral howling breath
and be reborn
bitter winds howling
screaming in feral ecstasy
cursing a loveless world
sharp talons to rake men's hearts
with needle sharp fingers
of freezing fire
a burning flame of ice
for I am no longer alive
no heart beats in my chest
nor blood flows through my veins
I am far more that human
and far, far less
for I see the sins of humanity
feasting on these transgressions
seeing the strong feed off the weak
seeing the weak [so willingly]
offer their souls in sacrifice
I am your doom
and your one saving grace
look into my eyes
to see your fate
how your pathetic spirits wait
sniveling in fear of the light
how can spineless creatures fight
lies won't save you but I just might
pick up the sword
your shining two edged soul
and stand in the gale
of my feral howling breath
and be reborn
Written by Heart_of_Stone
(Rachela)
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WillowsWhimsies
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Thank you gothicsurrealism & Heart_of_Stone for your great entries!
Nothing to Fear
I'm a rain wrapped tornado,
Chugging like a train.
Breaking in your doors,
And turning off the lights.
Every piece of glass,
Like daggers in the night.
You fear the only things,
That you perceive as might.
I'm a hurricane,
Whirling in the sky.
Taking all your homes,
Out with the ocean tides
Just another higher power,
You could never fight.
Fear me and you know,
You won't be alive.
I'm just a tsunami,
Where can you go?
Unless you have a mountain,
Outside your back door.
You can run, but you can't hide.
No structure can withstand this tide.
A wall of water in your sight.
Hope you're not afraid of heights.
I am just a storm cloud
Lurking in the sky.
I'll turn every thought dark,
If you fear my night.
But those who open their minds,
And ignore my destructive force,
You could be that one home,
That deterred me from my course.
Chugging like a train.
Breaking in your doors,
And turning off the lights.
Every piece of glass,
Like daggers in the night.
You fear the only things,
That you perceive as might.
I'm a hurricane,
Whirling in the sky.
Taking all your homes,
Out with the ocean tides
Just another higher power,
You could never fight.
Fear me and you know,
You won't be alive.
I'm just a tsunami,
Where can you go?
Unless you have a mountain,
Outside your back door.
You can run, but you can't hide.
No structure can withstand this tide.
A wall of water in your sight.
Hope you're not afraid of heights.
I am just a storm cloud
Lurking in the sky.
I'll turn every thought dark,
If you fear my night.
But those who open their minds,
And ignore my destructive force,
You could be that one home,
That deterred me from my course.
Written by AfterSexDilemma
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Mando82
Joined 6th June 2024
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Strange Creature
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Powerful
WillowsWhimsies
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Dangerous Mind
19
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Thank you for a fantastic entry, AfterSexDilemma!
Ljdynamic
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Dangerous Mind
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Reverberation
Frostbitten fingers reach, strangling my breaths.
You love watching my dilemma unfold.
My temperature rises as I approach death.
Your hand smolders, and you release your hold.
Chaos awoken; I can hear the riots.
The battle scars have taken their toll.
The sky turns grey, blanketing me with quiet.
There is a relief that settles my soul.
The breeze caresses me with a whisper
that reverberates within my chest
only to become gnawing, pained purrs
that grow into growls within my breast.
I rise, staring; my rage strikes as lightning,
greying out the color of my eyes.
My intensity becomes more frightening
with every single tear that I cry.
Gravity pulls down, and the drops shatter
against the ground, causing the earth to quake.
As the rifts form, you cower and scatter—
you will be the destruction in my wake.
You love watching my dilemma unfold.
My temperature rises as I approach death.
Your hand smolders, and you release your hold.
Chaos awoken; I can hear the riots.
The battle scars have taken their toll.
The sky turns grey, blanketing me with quiet.
There is a relief that settles my soul.
The breeze caresses me with a whisper
that reverberates within my chest
only to become gnawing, pained purrs
that grow into growls within my breast.
I rise, staring; my rage strikes as lightning,
greying out the color of my eyes.
My intensity becomes more frightening
with every single tear that I cry.
Gravity pulls down, and the drops shatter
against the ground, causing the earth to quake.
As the rifts form, you cower and scatter—
you will be the destruction in my wake.
Written by Ljdynamic
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WillowsWhimsies
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Dangerous Mind
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Ljdynamic, great to have you in this one!
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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The Eagle's Scream
where chaos reign with evil
and darkness harbours angels
in the perpetual celestial battle
children of light with fallen brothers
where beacons of light
the clashes of angels righteous swords
the good and everything right
fights with all pleasures and delight
the voice of reason pure and bright
Illumination of heaven's holy light
piercing through the hearts
of man wishing to do right
and from the skies
rumbles the thunder to announce
the beginning of the end
the coming of the alpha and omega
the eagle screams calling its own
"Deep calleth unto deep at the noise of thy waterspouts:
all thy waves and thy billows are gone over me."
noble and holy in its sanctum sanctorum
listen to the powerful voice so clear
thunders over mountains and fields
the truth spilled flushing fears
soaring as an eagle
words of salvation rained upon all hearts
and darkness harbours angels
in the perpetual celestial battle
children of light with fallen brothers
where beacons of light
the clashes of angels righteous swords
the good and everything right
fights with all pleasures and delight
the voice of reason pure and bright
Illumination of heaven's holy light
piercing through the hearts
of man wishing to do right
and from the skies
rumbles the thunder to announce
the beginning of the end
the coming of the alpha and omega
the eagle screams calling its own
"Deep calleth unto deep at the noise of thy waterspouts:
all thy waves and thy billows are gone over me."
noble and holy in its sanctum sanctorum
listen to the powerful voice so clear
thunders over mountains and fields
the truth spilled flushing fears
soaring as an eagle
words of salvation rained upon all hearts
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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