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Poetry competition CLOSED 6th October 2023 4:05pm
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MadameLavender
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Say it...without saying it

WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

Poetry Contest

Sensual erotica...metaphorical style
Write an erotic poem that shows what is happening without using the usual words and/or expressions. Explore metaphor and make it sensual. Say it without actually spelling it out graphically. This is a style of erotica I personally struggle with but am drawn to and compelled to learn. We have some amazing erotica writers in these halls, show me what you got!

*1 entry only
*3 weeks
*New writes only
*No epic sagas please – keep it to 50 lines or less
*Post your poem & then link it here
*Please post comments to the writer’s personal page.

I need a moderator to set with Adult Content, please

adagio
Tyrant of Words
United States 5awards
Joined 15th Jan 2019
Forum Posts: 605

Blue Garter Melancholia

Blue Garter melancholia cashmere
held by the scent of Benedictine on rye  
and a collection of whispers
Pulling me close into your basket
of tainted thirst to my ear
from the succulent tongue
and a collection of whispers
Abandoning the verse
with the ominous candle
held by the scent of Benedictine on rye  
Blue Garter melancholia cashmere
Written by adagio
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WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

Thank you, adagio, for an intriguing kick off entry!

Jordan
D.O.C.
Thought Provoker
United States 13awards
Joined 4th May 2022
Forum Posts: 245

Lust's Labor's Licked

or
 
Willy in the Rear Room of the Boar's Head Tavern behind Closed Doors
 
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His mistress' eyes of onyx black blank laze,
her lips brick liquorice of venom wet,
her mouth a furnace pitch and grease emblaze,
her throat an ink soot void salts up in sweat;
ere ebon sweeps and prospects tours his tongue,
flicks scarfing Aquitaines of Carménère,
Barolos rich of Tuscanies far-flung,
Riojas bloodstained stored in liquid air;
till rounding oil lagoons in wildwoods thick,
it dives to slate cenote depths earth gold,
and homeward gears on growing hearthstone sick,
to reaches crow inside a wanton cold;
the Devil metal draped enthroned her skin --
full banned from court the licit marriage gin.
 
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Contest: Say It without Saying It -- Sensual Erotica / Metaphorical Style
 
Sponsor: WillowsWhimsies
 
Subject: "The Dark Lady" -- The Mistress of William Shakespeare's Sonnets  
 
Form: Bestial Shakespearean Sonnet
 
Major Poetic Techniques: Metaphors Black / Irony Granite
 
Theme: The Marriage of True Minds Adulterate
Written by Jordan (D.O.C.)
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WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

Thank you joining with a great entry, Jordan!

LunasChild8
Dangerous Mind
Canada 21awards
Joined 27th Dec 2017
Forum Posts: 540

Dessert

The sight of your glorious body laying bare before me
The scent of your Jasmin Noir perfume teasing my nose
A bowl waits by your side filled with chocolate cream
I lick my lips in anticipation and pick up my paintbrush.
-
I dip the brush in and begin the first stroke
Your honey eyes study the relaxed motions of my hand
I lead the thin brush over your perked nipples and perfectly mounded breasts
Your pupils dilate and sweat forms on your mocha skin.
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Yet even the sinful chocolate can’t compare
To the sweetness of your mouth-watering cream
I take a taste; your breath hitches
And my tongue goes numb as the tastebuds overload.
-
Rich caramel intoxicates me
This is the sweetest of desserts that I’ve ever had
I can barely get over the initial shockwave of pleasure
But we have all night; another taste wouldn’t hurt.
Written by LunasChild8
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WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

Thank you for a lovely entry, LunasChild8!

robert43041
Viking
Tyrant of Words
Canada 43awards
Joined 30th July 2020
Forum Posts: 918

Softly

She dressed with extra care for Naomi was coming over
For the last fitting of the magnificent dress before the grand Gala

Emerald green, silk.  Tight fitting
Just enough décolleté to put the single pearl necklace
In evidence

She loved the way Naomi played piccolo with her fingers
On her body, lingering a moment here, tightening a bit there
Touching special points while they exchanged suggestive looks

Touches producing delicious shivers in her body
As Naomi let her hands roam to her back
Brushed aside her superbly long and curly auburn coiffe
And proceeded to slowly unzip her.
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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Kinkpoet
Tyrant of Words
United States 11awards
Joined 9th May 2019
Forum Posts: 1067

September Harvest

sun-warmed peach
draped in fine fur
ambrosial fragrance

first bite
sharp teeth piercing vulnerable skin
nectar dripping down chin

amber flesh slipping past tongue
sticky sweet-tart aftertaste
incites desire

hungering craving
yearning for another
heavenly kiss
Written by Kinkpoet
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Asani
Twisted Dreamer
Jamaica
Joined 17th July 2012
Forum Posts: 21

I wanna fuck u a poet

Asani
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Asani
Twisted Dreamer
Jamaica
Joined 17th July 2012
Forum Posts: 21

I’d like to withdraw my submission because it’s not a new entry

WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

Thank you for a wonderful entry, robert43041!

WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

Thank you for a fabulous entry, Kinkpoet!

WillowsWhimsies
Dangerous Mind
United States 19awards
Joined 8th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 296

This is a great poem, Asani! I understand and accept your withdrawal. Feel free to write a new poem for the comp!

Sinfulsagittarius
6vibez
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 8th May 2015
Forum Posts: 2

Relief

I look at you
To admire that smile
That makes time feel slow
Staring into your eyes
Just to get you vulnerable
Enough to see into your soul

Invading into Eden.
Days will fade into each other
As you let down the walls as well
As your clothes- feeding me
Sweetness til I separate your essence-
From your mind and body

This becomes my favorite hobby.
Each time I revise so when I divide
And conquer your lands
You can’t predict the unexpected.

Your pleas from this pleasure
State that you want more
Before you crumble into a million pieces
My name becomes my favorite thing you say
When it echoes off the walls
I’m empowered by your calls
You submit to me.
Helping you take all your worries away

Even for a moment
Written by Sinfulsagittarius (6vibez)
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