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Viddax (Lord Viddax)
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Self Not Me

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

Use the image for inspiration and paint a self poem while NOT using the words listed.

Best Topic Ever!
Write a poem about yourself.
But follow the rules in terms of the words used.

Do NOT Use..

I
I'm
You
Me
We
Our
Myself
Your
Them
Their
There
Heart
Soul

It's harder than you think!
Poems only
2 Entry limit per profile
3 weeks
Old / New Writes
No collabs
All content accepted
Picture attached for inspiration!

Oh and most importantly have fun!
This comp will be judged by myself and won't go to public vote unless the roof falls on my head.

Enjoy!

crimsin
Unveiling
Tyrant of Words
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vulgar

    
down trodden hooker for need's sake  
greedily feasting till the void within overshadows dignity  
everyday seeking to feed the famine to assuage the hurt  
  
inside the psyche a broken brain is to blame  
seeking to understand the divine is implored  
admonished to dig deeply and learn from the chains in place  
   
sinking lower into a place of desolation  
a surreal mind speaking madness causes poverty  
the feeling of oppression is immeasurable  
   
flitting from vice to vice to cure what ills  
another day prostituting want, it's disturbing how low one can sink  
 
 
 
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RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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Wow! That's an awesome awesome start Crim!
Thank you so much for starting us off!
Good Of You!

robert43041
Viking
Tyrant of Words
Canada 43awards
Joined 30th July 2020
Forum Posts: 918

How

On the steps
Sitting, musing
Reflecting.
How does one
Get so blown away
So tired of the world
So quickly?
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Weak4hissmile
the.LittlestSP-EXPO
Lost Thinker
Canada
Joined 14th Feb 2022
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been traveling in

The deserts of a mind  
         try desperately  
                        To run through the sand  
How         frustrating and
sooooooooo degrading         the  time
       wasting away

huh (chuckles)  
 remember waking up  
plastered and                            stumbling  
        A full night of gin,  
pale sweat and .....     seduction

lit a match           burned the whole place  
        to the fucking ground

In a ghost town paid symphony remember...........

                   the saying goes

An artist
        should create beautiful things
                               "but  
should put nothing
            of ones own life into art

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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How

On the steps
Sitting, musing
Reflecting.
How does one
Get so blown away
So tired of the world
So quickly?
Written by robert43041 (Viking)
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robert43041 said:

Hey Robert

Thank You for joining us!

👍👍

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Hello Aemilie

Thanks for joining.

Would you read the rule words again. I see you missed some. You could edit it still as long as the final entry is before closing.

Thanks so much

Al

Weak4hissmile
the.LittlestSP-EXPO
Lost Thinker
Canada
Joined 14th Feb 2022
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Thank you its my first comp lol ty for allowing me remove the word used

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

Weak4hissmile said:Thank you its my first comp lol ty for allowing me remove the word used

Fair play!
Rather pleased that you chose this as your first comp! Really glad you submitted one here! Thank YOU!

Blue Skies @ You!

Gahddess_Worship
Osomajestuoso
Tyrant of Words
United States 38awards
Joined 21st Aug 2013
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Every Step an Everest

Climbing slowly
out of hell
fist fighting anxiety
wrestling depression
mid consequential addiction's
Irresistible spell

Compassionate friends
able hands extending
no longer reach down to assist
exclaim in frustration
“this one is not changing”
summarily crossed-off life’s list

Enter the hero
by divine spark driven
filled with stuff of deity
power-lifts to safety
exhausted downtrodden
showing true love’s
unwavering loyalty

Who came to rescue,
supernatural power wielding?
one using inherited strength
from heaven brought nearer.
whose heroic visage
can be seen in the mirror
.
Written by Gahddess_Worship (Osomajestuoso)
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RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
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Yaaaas!

Oh Goodness! Thank You for joining us GW! Grateful to see your name in the lights!

Blue Skies At You!

RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
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Whooohooo!

Thanks You for joining us England!

Fantastic to have you here!

Whhhhoooooo!

Weak4hissmile
the.LittlestSP-EXPO
Lost Thinker
Canada
Joined 14th Feb 2022
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We isn't aloud    but  we're  is a different word there for it is ok right? I got a message from a user  advising to remove it.   But isn't finding a loop hole in a word ok lol

robert43041
Viking
Tyrant of Words
Canada 43awards
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With respect:  go over the rules.  Don't fight them. Work harder on your text.

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