Acrostic challenge, Alphabet Soup
Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Excellent Dyana
Good luck 👍🏻🍀
Good luck 👍🏻🍀
Noble_Incubus
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 28th Jan 2016Forum Posts: 256
Hey Zazzles,
My poem isn’t a true acrostic poem but I don’t want to change the format to meet the rules because it would disrupt the flow of the poem. Not sure what to do. Do you want me to remove it?
My poem isn’t a true acrostic poem but I don’t want to change the format to meet the rules because it would disrupt the flow of the poem. Not sure what to do. Do you want me to remove it?
Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Noble_Incubus said:Hey Zazzles,
My poem isn’t a true acrostic poem but I don’t want to change the format to meet the rules because it would disrupt the flow of the poem. Not sure what to do. Do you want me to remove it?
I mean you can leave it up. I would have to view your submission not just for the talent but the challenge of following the guild lines . Certainly this is a challenge which is the point
You decide what works best for you Noble,
🙂
My poem isn’t a true acrostic poem but I don’t want to change the format to meet the rules because it would disrupt the flow of the poem. Not sure what to do. Do you want me to remove it?
I mean you can leave it up. I would have to view your submission not just for the talent but the challenge of following the guild lines . Certainly this is a challenge which is the point
You decide what works best for you Noble,
🙂
Noble_Incubus
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 28th Jan 2016Forum Posts: 256
After giving this some thought I’ve decided to change the structure in order to better comply with the rules.
Ljdynamic
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Dangerous Mind
18
Joined 18th Aug 2017Forum Posts: 374
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cold_fusion
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Tyrant of Words
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surviving modern politics
alas
beating
cruelty
death
extremists
fires
gore
hazards
injustice
judges
king's
laws
my
name
overall
performed
quite
reasonably
surviving
torment
unnoticeably
vociferously
warding
xenophobes'
yearning
zealotry
Written by cold_fusion
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Bluevelvete
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 21st July 2020Forum Posts: 2349
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Noble_Incubus
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Thought Provoker
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Joined 28th Jan 2016Forum Posts: 256
Yikes! Three masterpieces in a row.
I’m glad I don’t have to judge this one.
I’m glad I don’t have to judge this one.
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Zazzles
Broomie
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Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.
alchemy and unmitigated surrender
beckon from across
cerulean deep blue seas
distance is but a flash of
electronic iridescent musing
floating upon each little reminder
gossamer-like of airy ether,
hazily encapsulate her soul's desire
idyllic beauty's bated breath,
jovial in exquisite mind's eye
kindly, in all her heart's requests
listen, dear - to such a fortunate wind
murmuring it's hushed secrets
needy, is the solid tempered ache
open arms to all and everything
passing through this needles eye
quiet in duel fervid hopes
righteously certain and
sure within
the very marrow of brittle bones
united upon those luscious waves
velvet swaths, oh to tender skin
wonderment alights a flicker when
xenial is two of piercing shine
yesterday now becomes forever theirs, as
zephyrs billow confirming a whisper'd, "mine"
Written by Bluevelvete
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Bluevelvete said:
Absolutely perfect! 100% what the guidelines call for in this competition, very well done Blue
Good luck 👍🏻🍀
Absolutely perfect! 100% what the guidelines call for in this competition, very well done Blue
Good luck 👍🏻🍀
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
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Ljdynamic said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410163-egregious-error/
Wow excellent Submission Mic, perfectly executed !
Good luck 👍🏻🍀
Wow excellent Submission Mic, perfectly executed !
Good luck 👍🏻🍀
Zazzles
Broomie
Forum Posts: 1797
Broomie
Tyrant of Words
24
Joined 23rd Nov 2013Forum Posts: 1797
surviving modern politics
alas
beating
cruelty
death
extremists
fires
gore
hazards
injustice
judges
king's
laws
my
name
overall
performed
quite
reasonably
surviving
torment
unnoticeably
vociferously
warding
xenophobes'
yearning
zealotry
Written by cold_fusion
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