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Ljdynamic
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Acrostic challenge, Alphabet Soup

Zazzles
Broomie
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Excellent Dyana
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Noble_Incubus
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Hey Zazzles,

My poem isn’t a true acrostic poem but I don’t want to change the format to meet the rules because it would disrupt the flow of the poem. Not sure what to do. Do you want me to remove it?

Zazzles
Broomie
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Noble_Incubus said:Hey Zazzles,

My poem isn’t a true acrostic poem but I don’t want to change the format to meet the rules because it would disrupt the flow of the poem. Not sure what to do. Do you want me to remove it?

I mean you can leave it up. I would have to view your submission not just for the talent but the challenge of following the guild lines . Certainly this is a challenge which is the point
You decide what works best for you Noble,
🙂

Noble_Incubus
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After giving this some thought I’ve decided to change the structure in order to better comply with the rules.

Ljdynamic
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cold_fusion
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surviving modern politics


alas
beating
cruelty
death
extremists
fires
gore
hazards
injustice
judges
king's
laws
my
name
overall
performed
quite
reasonably
surviving
torment
unnoticeably
vociferously
warding
xenophobes'
yearning
zealotry







Written by cold_fusion
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Bluevelvete
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Noble_Incubus
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Yikes! Three masterpieces in a row.

I’m glad I don’t have to judge this one.

poet Anonymous

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Zazzles
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ABC's of the Corporate Politics - Visual Poem

ABC's of the Corporate Politics - Visual Poem
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dejure said:  double post

Zazzles
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ABC's of the Corporate Politics - Visual Poem

ABC's of the Corporate Politics - Visual Poem
dejure (vick)
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dejure said: dejure  very nicely done !
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
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the a-b(seas) of cerulean blue.

 
    
     
alchemy and unmitigated surrender    
beckon from across      
cerulean deep blue seas      
distance is but a flash of      
electronic iridescent musing      
floating upon each little reminder      
gossamer-like of airy ether,      
hazily encapsulate her soul's desire      
idyllic beauty's bated breath,      
jovial in exquisite mind's eye      
kindly, in all her heart's requests      
listen, dear - to such a fortunate wind    
murmuring it's hushed secrets      
needy, is the solid tempered ache      
open arms to all and everything      
passing through this needles eye      
quiet in duel fervid hopes      
righteously certain and      
sure within    
the very marrow of brittle bones      
united upon those luscious waves    
velvet swaths, oh to tender skin      
wonderment alights a flicker when      
xenial is two of piercing shine      
yesterday now becomes forever theirs, as      
zephyrs billow confirming a whisper'd, "mine"  
     
     
     
     
     
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Bluevelvete said:

Absolutely perfect! 100% what the guidelines call for in this competition, very well done Blue
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
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Ljdynamic said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/410163-egregious-error/

Wow excellent Submission Mic, perfectly executed !
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
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surviving modern politics


alas
beating
cruelty
death
extremists
fires
gore
hazards
injustice
judges
king's
laws
my
name
overall
performed
quite
reasonably
surviving
torment
unnoticeably
vociferously
warding
xenophobes'
yearning
zealotry







Written by cold_fusion
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cold_fusion said:

Very nicely done Fusion!
Good luck 👍🏻🍀

Zazzles
Broomie
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Noble_Incubus said:After giving this some thought I’ve decided to change the structure in order to better comply with the rules.

Good decision 👍🏻

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