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the food stamp life
my emo feelings live in the projects of the heart
protesting the food stamp life
they're going hungry within my cold demeanor
where emotions aren't allowed
unless they bankrupt me
tears are money
they drain me of my energy
counterfeits are passed
I don't care, fuck you, etc.
cheap knockoffs of the real deal
soon they'll be doing a bid
for spreading phony feelings
my heart doesn't have time for that shit
even if I felt you soul deep
I would never admit it
I'll let the emotional part of me do time
behind the wall of denial
before I ever confess to having real feelings for you
Published 24th Nov 2018
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Heady and potent
Like ordering a piss water Bud Light and getting a Colt 45 Malt Liquor by accident and thinking you've found god ...
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Like ordering a piss water Bud Light and getting a Colt 45 Malt Liquor by accident and thinking you've found god ...
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24th Nov 2018 1:08pm
thank you graciously dearest Poet for a badass comment that put smile on my face...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
24th Nov 2018 1:14pm
24th Nov 2018 1:22pm
Conversational....intimate
....you get to the heart of the matter....giving yourself permission to give potentially deal breaking honesty.
A preemptive strike against rejection at some future date.....
And so, the unprocessed contradiction, self-non-acceptance is the call for personal transformation....resolved by the algorithm of having been of a previous perception, you now have perspective and it becomes a paradox, unconditional love sorts it all out. So, poetry becomes the unconditional vehicle, full circle.
Pretty epic before a second cup of coffee on a Saturday.
....you get to the heart of the matter....giving yourself permission to give potentially deal breaking honesty.
A preemptive strike against rejection at some future date.....
And so, the unprocessed contradiction, self-non-acceptance is the call for personal transformation....resolved by the algorithm of having been of a previous perception, you now have perspective and it becomes a paradox, unconditional love sorts it all out. So, poetry becomes the unconditional vehicle, full circle.
Pretty epic before a second cup of coffee on a Saturday.
thank you graciously dearest RT for a very well thought out comment... that in and of its self provides me insight on my own feelings giving further perspective on this write...
you gifted me smiles...
love Brenda 💕
you gifted me smiles...
love Brenda 💕
What a great metaphor for the not so pretty part of emotions. You showcased your strength and power once again. I like it.
24th Nov 2018 2:04pm
thank you graciously dearest Tim for feeling this write... you gifted me smiles this morning...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
24th Nov 2018 2:35pm
I see there’s a strong reference to your NOT wanting to care, but I can tell from what I know of you, that’s really a facade, becuz U DO care to ur core :)
24th Nov 2018 2:44pm
thank you dearest Poe you see so much yes you're right while protesting in the end I'm saying how much I care...
I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda 🌹
24th Nov 2018 2:57pm
Brenda.. this is so powerfully penned.. as only you can do.. i love your flow, and wordplay.. into my list it goes.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
24th Nov 2018 2:58pm
Anonymous
24th Nov 2018 3:01pm
Metaphorical hurricane. You remain. I feel no anger or pain here, merely a mellow acceptance.
24th Nov 2018 3:30pm
thank you dearest Rob for such a gracious and understanding comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
24th Nov 2018 3:19pm
24th Nov 2018 3:31pm
thank you dearest Snugglebuck for the read and beautiful comment...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹
24th Nov 2018 4:20pm
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24th Nov 2018 5:06pm
Great interesting piece Brenda as always👏👏
"I'll let the emotional part of me do time
behind the wall of denial
before I ever confess to having real feelings for you" yes!👏👏 those are amazing lines!
"I'll let the emotional part of me do time
behind the wall of denial
before I ever confess to having real feelings for you" yes!👏👏 those are amazing lines!
25th Nov 2018 1:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Hunter for such a beautiful comment...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
24th Nov 2018 6:21pm
25th Nov 2018 1:51pm
24th Nov 2018 10:47pm
That was a cool rap, dearest...I heard the drum beat when reading...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
25th Nov 2018 1:52pm
24th Nov 2018 11:00pm
Some tough lines here but also a real sensitivity. "Before I confess to having real feelings for you." You may not confess, but the feelings are probably there, well concealed. Great write, Brenda!
25th Nov 2018 1:52pm
thank you graciously dearest Sir Crow for seeing the real me here...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Anonymous
26th Nov 2018 4:01pm
Sorry Crimmy,
Checking in late(rough weekend. lol).
That was quite fantastic. Kind of another different side to your poetry, conversational, yet emotional and vulnerable.
You're quite an awesome writer, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
Checking in late(rough weekend. lol).
That was quite fantastic. Kind of another different side to your poetry, conversational, yet emotional and vulnerable.
You're quite an awesome writer, my friend.
Love,
Matthew.
26th Nov 2018 7:30pm
I agree with what our fellow writers have said about this piece, the metaphor, the energy. Creative and emotionally charged.
1st Dec 2018 2:37am
13th Dec 2018 10:18pm
Excellent write My Lovely Crim!!!
I can totally relate to this sentiment
XOXO
FIre
I can totally relate to this sentiment
XOXO
FIre
