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Raven's Shade
you don't know me
& never will
I clothe myself
with raven feathers
nighttime covers
to keep out prying eyes
the ones that would consume
my gentle soul
taint my blood
with their hate
twist the knife deeper
creating a gnawing ache called pain
guilt riddled holes
are puss filled wounds
in the darkness I reside
where evil, the decrepit
are common place
shaded by my realm
see my face fade to black
cloaked in the shadows
sleeping with the demons I know
you sipped my flavor once
when I was naive
that was once upon a time
when I was ruled by paranoia
you took a slice of me
I vowed to all hell
it would never happen again
this is now my domain
if you step to me
remember you're stepping to a Queen
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 12th Feb 2017
| Edited 13th Feb 2017
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Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 9:49pm
This is so raw and fierce!
A powerful punch in this portion-
"you sipped my flavor once
when I was naive "
Badass ink.
No one does it better than you, Crim. ❤️
A powerful punch in this portion-
"you sipped my flavor once
when I was naive "
Badass ink.
No one does it better than you, Crim. ❤️
15th Feb 2017 10:05pm
Anonymous
12th Feb 2017 11:17pm
My Beautiful Brenda, this write shows your strength in each and every word right from the opening lines and the ending....my girl...kick ass! Fierce Queen of mine you are and I will forever adore and be right beside you...
I love you so very much!
xoxo Taryn
I love you so very much!
xoxo Taryn
15th Feb 2017 10:06pm
thank you my love you are the Raven feathers that are my covering.. I love and adore you lovely one.. xo Brenda
13th Feb 2017 00:42am
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13th Feb 2017 00:58am
A warning to the abusers of the past. The caterpillar has transformed and this butterfly bites.
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13th Feb 2017 5:25am
Oh Brenda, you express yourself so vividly your own words defy you...
"with raven feathers
nighttime covers
to keep out prying eyes"
And yet your poetry allows our eyes to see beneath the sheets of your soul...
JJ
"with raven feathers
nighttime covers
to keep out prying eyes"
And yet your poetry allows our eyes to see beneath the sheets of your soul...
JJ
15th Feb 2017 10:10pm
13th Feb 2017 7:12am
A brutally powerful piece, Crim;
I feel it as you rise to claim what's
yours.
All hail the beautiful, Queen of Darkness...
I feel it as you rise to claim what's
yours.
All hail the beautiful, Queen of Darkness...
15th Feb 2017 10:11pm
13th Feb 2017 10:33am
Such a strong and fierce write, dear Crim!
It makes me happy to see you standing so tall :-)
Love, Duende
It makes me happy to see you standing so tall :-)
Love, Duende
15th Feb 2017 10:11pm
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13th Feb 2017 1:31pm
What an amazing display of strength and vulnerability you've shown in these words! There is nothing I can say that hasn't already been said by one or more of the individuals above, but this is gorgeous! Stepping to a Queen indeed! Brava! :)
Willow
Willow
15th Feb 2017 10:13pm
thank you dearest Willow beautiful lady for showing me love on this :) love Brenda
15th Feb 2017 10:13pm
13th Feb 2017 8:02pm
a beautifully framed threat - I would definitely think twice :-)
loved it :-)
loved it :-)
15th Feb 2017 10:14pm
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Anonymous
14th Feb 2017 7:43am
this is soooo damn fierce, beautiful one
gorgeous in its entirety
tho those last two verses are crucifixion nails
hammered soul deep
loved!!!!
xo
gorgeous in its entirety
tho those last two verses are crucifixion nails
hammered soul deep
loved!!!!
xo
15th Feb 2017 10:16pm
thank you my beautiful one I so love your comments and cherish your visits.. love Brenda
15th Feb 2017 1:28am
Both thrilling and scary Lady Crim. You really spread your wings as the domain's imperious Queen. Love this!
15th Feb 2017 10:16pm
16th Feb 2017 1:53am
Brenda.. my lovely sister.. bowing to your brilliance.. you are a divine poetess.. into my list it belongs.. love you..
Dave
Dave
16th Feb 2017 12:23pm
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16th Feb 2017 12:24pm
thank you said in true poetic fashion making me think at this god awful hour :) cheers Crim
