Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 1:22pm
2nd Aug 2024 1:22pm
blown away
the sun lost his dominance
as thick clouds bullied him into shadow
turning afternoon to complete darkness
no thunder...no lightning...no rain
only the gods breath in full fury
& things meant to stand tall & proud became horizontal
abasing themselves in the face of it
fallen trees & sundered limbs covered the streets
those caught unaware
{among them...my daughter...}
forced to dodge flying debris
we had no warning
& with one loud boom...power gave out
my tiny basement with its crowding...
as thick clouds bullied him into shadow
turning afternoon to complete darkness
no thunder...no lightning...no rain
only the gods breath in full fury
& things meant to stand tall & proud became horizontal
abasing themselves in the face of it
fallen trees & sundered limbs covered the streets
those caught unaware
{among them...my daughter...}
forced to dodge flying debris
we had no warning
& with one loud boom...power gave out
my tiny basement with its crowding...
#confessional
#nature
#storm #universe
#storm #universe
216 reads
10 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
Abyssus
"And if you gaze long enough into the abyss, the abyss also gazes into you" - Nietzsche
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
#astronomy
#dreams
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
87 reads
11 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
14th Sep 2024 5:08am
Distracted
The narrator
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
in the documentary about the deepest secrets of space
the mysteries of the universe
the ultra-exclusive party
in the creator's backyard
A portal to drive a 500 mph Ferrari
through the wall of limitations
into a field of luminescent orbs
each one the voice of wisdom
each one beckoning you
to hear its story
To know
To finally,
actually
really
know
But the narrator
- the stupid effing narrator -
keeps...
#stars
#universe
143 reads
3 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2023 9:00pm
22nd Aug 2023 9:00pm
Touch me...
Touch me....
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads. ...
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads. ...
#lust
#universe
#lover
#passion
#orgasm
1140 reads
46 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 1:18am
11th Jun 2024 1:18am
17 Down
pain is real
pain is bending
pain is mighty
inside, outside
or nothing at all
crossword puzzles
in the sunday paper
fill in the boxes
need another 4 letter word
for love...
pain is bending
pain is mighty
inside, outside
or nothing at all
crossword puzzles
in the sunday paper
fill in the boxes
need another 4 letter word
for love...
#universe
175 reads
2 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
Written In The Stars
fore the Nile flowed from primal spring
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How many universes are...
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How many universes are...
#universe
#stars
#mystery
586 reads
2 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:48pm
7th Feb 2025 10:48pm
we make new names for old Gods
The evening sky blushes through my window
between twilight and darkness we lie, looking out
waiting for the stars through the
leafy silhouettes of palm tress
I try to teach you all the names
of the creeping constellations
but you make up your own
giggling into the deepening sky
We are so small under the burning tendrils of light
and so blessed to see them, and name them at all
between twilight and darkness we lie, looking out
waiting for the stars through the
leafy silhouettes of palm tress
I try to teach you all the names
of the creeping constellations
but you make up your own
giggling into the deepening sky
We are so small under the burning tendrils of light
and so blessed to see them, and name them at all
#astronomy
#nature
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
111 reads
8 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Aug 2020 11:48pm
24th Aug 2020 11:48pm
dunno how you feel
watching a seagull on the beach audibly struggling for breath
and yet otherwise quite still and outwardly calmly awaiting its death ..
and yet otherwise quite still and outwardly calmly awaiting its death ..
#universe
386 reads
5 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 9:16pm
16th Jan 2024 9:16pm
The Wish of Universal Annihilation
Those who are fascinated by forbidden lore
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
#dark
#universe
#apocalypse
329 reads
5 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
19th Jan 2023 10:51pm
19th Jan 2023 10:51pm
Loving Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
With to many nights spent dreaming about you
To many secret poems written for you too
Ooh the lies in my diary
Of you kissing and loving me, Loving Me
I swear I can't take this fall
Rejection has my back against a wall
But the truth has gotta be
I gotta know if you also wake screaming for Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please...
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
With to many nights spent dreaming about you
To many secret poems written for you too
Ooh the lies in my diary
Of you kissing and loving me, Loving Me
I swear I can't take this fall
Rejection has my back against a wall
But the truth has gotta be
I gotta know if you also wake screaming for Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please...
#love
#dreams
#universe
726 reads
31 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
4th Feb 2025 2:34am
Softly Stargazing
I have been loving this awakening moment in time
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
It has taken me so many years to be in heart, mind, body and giving thanks to my soul
To not allow the small occurrence in life to rock my morale
It is best to live in the moment
I listen daily to so many troubled intellects and they scream for peace, serenity of their heart
Endorphins and Adrenaline is the body’s best friend
Such a natural high when both are merged is to calm or a flight in your weakened defense
If everyone would only tap into the resources of its on psychic ...
#moon
#stars
#universe
#water
#sun
189 reads
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 7:13am
6th Feb 2025 7:13am
silent beauty (stars)
another
early morning
before
the sun
even dreams
of waking,
the cluster
of stars
visible
somewhere,
even though
hidden from
my view,
i know
they are
just
above me,
silent beauty
waiting.
early morning
before
the sun
even dreams
of waking,
the cluster
of stars
visible
somewhere,
even though
hidden from
my view,
i know
they are
just
above me,
silent beauty
waiting.
#astronomy
#night
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
76 reads
6 Comments
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