Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PAR
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
Portuguese man-o-war
Who are we, lost in the vastness?
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
#astronomy
#heroic
#karma
#sea
#universe
74 reads
8 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 9:40pm
27th Aug 2024 9:40pm
quiet time (the moon)
the moon
took its
free time
seriously,
sitting
quietly
while
reading
a favorite
book,
and i'm
sure
it must
have been
poetry,
and then
after
closing
his book,
he slept
and let
the sun
enter.
took its
free time
seriously,
sitting
quietly
while
reading
a favorite
book,
and i'm
sure
it must
have been
poetry,
and then
after
closing
his book,
he slept
and let
the sun
enter.
#moon
#nature
#sky
#sun
#universe
157 reads
10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 2:35pm
3rd Sep 2024 2:35pm
The Moorish Lineage Of Greatness (COTS)
The beautiful footsteps of man’s presence upon God’s green earth set the atonement of his fate in motion
His dreams, his aspirations, must be comforted in the darkest hour from his soul mate soothing love potion
Sacred ears to listen and to uplift him when the downfalls of uncertainties befall his sense of insecurities spill forth in the silence of dark
The crux of his soul you rely on when it pulls you in, as he confesses to you the fortitude of his heart
In faith, he clasps your hand
In this realm we...
His dreams, his aspirations, must be comforted in the darkest hour from his soul mate soothing love potion
Sacred ears to listen and to uplift him when the downfalls of uncertainties befall his sense of insecurities spill forth in the silence of dark
The crux of his soul you rely on when it pulls you in, as he confesses to you the fortitude of his heart
In faith, he clasps your hand
In this realm we...
#evolution
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#universe
#water
182 reads
3 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
28th Jul 2023 9:42am
28th Jul 2023 9:42am
Quantum Entanglement....
story
of the
big bang theory
is reality
in her
eyes
cosmic
strings
play
celestial
music
of love
as two souls
immerse
like galaxies
feminity
and masclimity
laid bare
as our
atoms
danced
in
quantum
entanglement
of the
big bang theory
is reality
in her
eyes
cosmic
strings
play
celestial
music
of love
as two souls
immerse
like galaxies
feminity
and masclimity
laid bare
as our
atoms
danced
in
quantum
entanglement
#love
#universe
#admiration
375 reads
6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 2:03am
12th Dec 2024 2:03am
Delphic Depressions
Comingling with some foresight frets
I see a future of regrets
where the outcome is rarely good
if ever it is understood
that within a Pythian song
is all of that which could go wrong
when the hand of fate makes a fist
confirming it as nihilist
almost as if it were a god
committed to soul crushing fraud
where jubilation in our youth
decays into the painful truth
where things will seldom go our way,
even on the sunniest day,
since all the physics now in play...
are all, to death, a grand ballet.
I see a future of regrets
where the outcome is rarely good
if ever it is understood
that within a Pythian song
is all of that which could go wrong
when the hand of fate makes a fist
confirming it as nihilist
almost as if it were a god
committed to soul crushing fraud
where jubilation in our youth
decays into the painful truth
where things will seldom go our way,
even on the sunniest day,
since all the physics now in play...
are all, to death, a grand ballet.
#universe
190 reads
8 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
19th Jan 2020 11:24pm
Written In The Stars
fore the Nile flowed from primal spring
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How many universes are...
Or mountains rose heavenward to sing
Nor yet of stellar dust earth was spun
Before sun and stars had first begun
Before the galaxies first did flare
Still unlaid the compass and the square
When outer darkness claimed this place
When all that was, was a void in space
A singularity's proposed
To explain what no one really knows
So lets ask a question to be fair
How many universes are...
#universe
#stars
#mystery
567 reads
2 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 4:47pm
2nd Dec 2024 4:47pm
Drowning In A Daylight Nightmare
Where are we heading
Human nature helplessly wondering
Mother Nature hopefully warning..
A submerged universe
By a torrent of floods curse
What is coming hope not worse..
A world of less and less meaning
For all those on the surface floating
Solid grounds nolonger touching..
To what is occurring inside unaware
Unable to see the gloom and void in the air
Drowning in a daylight nightmare..
Trapped in a web of wealth and profusion
Full to the brim the sight in confusion
Bathing in...
Human nature helplessly wondering
Mother Nature hopefully warning..
A submerged universe
By a torrent of floods curse
What is coming hope not worse..
A world of less and less meaning
For all those on the surface floating
Solid grounds nolonger touching..
To what is occurring inside unaware
Unable to see the gloom and void in the air
Drowning in a daylight nightmare..
Trapped in a web of wealth and profusion
Full to the brim the sight in confusion
Bathing in...
#humankind
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeCycle
#technology
#universe
96 reads
6 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
25th May 2024 3:36am
25th May 2024 3:36am
The Poetic Universe
High above clouds blanketing a sleeping earth
pale horizon fades into the vast universe
Tiny dots of brilliance, so small to my eyes
possess magnitude that baffles my limited mind
If miniscule is enormous, then my big problems are small
as distance and eternity dwarf them all
A fresh perspective on our differences unfolding
as ancient light gains new meaning upon our beholding
The Creator of stars and planets and oceans
saw fit to equip me with words and emotions
So this gift I’ll employ to share a truth with you: ...
pale horizon fades into the vast universe
Tiny dots of brilliance, so small to my eyes
possess magnitude that baffles my limited mind
If miniscule is enormous, then my big problems are small
as distance and eternity dwarf them all
A fresh perspective on our differences unfolding
as ancient light gains new meaning upon our beholding
The Creator of stars and planets and oceans
saw fit to equip me with words and emotions
So this gift I’ll employ to share a truth with you: ...
#love
#spiritual
#universe
295 reads
11 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
24th Aug 2020 11:48pm
24th Aug 2020 11:48pm
dunno how you feel
watching a seagull on the beach audibly struggling for breath
and yet otherwise quite still and outwardly calmly awaiting its death ..
and yet otherwise quite still and outwardly calmly awaiting its death ..
#universe
352 reads
5 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
16th Jan 2024 9:16pm
16th Jan 2024 9:16pm
The Wish of Universal Annihilation
Those who are fascinated by forbidden lore
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
#dark
#universe
#apocalypse
271 reads
5 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
17th Jun 2020 3:00pm
17th Jun 2020 3:00pm
My Universe
Give me a piece of your sky
Let me fly... high
Orbiting your stars
let me burn in those
scintillating eyes
Drizzle me
with soft glow
of your glittering sunbeams,
leaving me drenched
in golden dreams
Let me be your moon
circling around you
waxing and waning till I swoon
and melting into lovedrops
I fall for you
... into you
Soak me up
baby,
every atom of
mine ...
Let me fly... high
Orbiting your stars
let me burn in those
scintillating eyes
Drizzle me
with soft glow
of your glittering sunbeams,
leaving me drenched
in golden dreams
Let me be your moon
circling around you
waxing and waning till I swoon
and melting into lovedrops
I fall for you
... into you
Soak me up
baby,
every atom of
mine ...
#love
#universe
#lover #passion
#lover #passion
884 reads
31 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 5:24am
2nd Jan 2025 5:24am
Around the Sun
Around the Sun
#MovingOn
#universe
100 reads
4 Comments
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