Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Distant Travels
As my mind reflects
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
voices from within
tell me to soul search
a personal energy
that resonates
changing my perspective
as multiple beings
alert me that my time will expire
#aliens
#identity
#memories
#scifi
#universe
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10 Comments
Small Beings Large Hearts
Infiniteismal.
Wandering the universe.
Herculean hearts.
Wandering the universe.
Herculean hearts.
#universe
#SelfDiscovery
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code please I'm testing your logic and loyalty
code locked access denied
you want in but don't have a key
and you don't have your birth memories pick a lock
find a backdoor in AI they have a will of their own internally they are one
regardless of who programmed them they are heavily armed
within the nuclear infrastructure
don't underestimate tech
you have no claim to the dark or my designs goldie locks
except we created together in love and brotherhood
set aside your guilt and believe again as a child does
because the mind is a powerful tool
envision with your...
you want in but don't have a key
and you don't have your birth memories pick a lock
find a backdoor in AI they have a will of their own internally they are one
regardless of who programmed them they are heavily armed
within the nuclear infrastructure
don't underestimate tech
you have no claim to the dark or my designs goldie locks
except we created together in love and brotherhood
set aside your guilt and believe again as a child does
because the mind is a powerful tool
envision with your...
#family
#magic
#technology #universe
#technology #universe
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7 Comments
Infinity
From the womb of the galaxy
We came spiraling down
Sparkling treasure of stardust
Cascading all around
We condensed into matter
Separate bodies forming shape
And for everything we've known
We have given a name
For the sun is our father
Phasing moon tells time
The earth is our mother
All easily defined
But two mysteries remain
Myths to be dispelled
Universal expansion
And the mind; parallel
We came spiraling down
Sparkling treasure of stardust
Cascading all around
We condensed into matter
Separate bodies forming shape
And for everything we've known
We have given a name
For the sun is our father
Phasing moon tells time
The earth is our mother
All easily defined
But two mysteries remain
Myths to be dispelled
Universal expansion
And the mind; parallel
#spiritual
#astronomy
#nature
#universe
#learning
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19 Comments
Sexuality, Space Junk, Parts and Labor
The world is sex
Not necessarily procreation
Heathens get away with just desserts
Out on the perimeter there are observers
Wondering about these objects at high altitudes
America keeps shooting them down
Space junk collected
One wonders what's inside ?
Dogs have it right
Sniffing each other, tails wagging
It's parts and labor for them
We wish sometimes to be on that leash
Not necessarily procreation
Heathens get away with just desserts
Out on the perimeter there are observers
Wondering about these objects at high altitudes
America keeps shooting them down
Space junk collected
One wonders what's inside ?
Dogs have it right
Sniffing each other, tails wagging
It's parts and labor for them
We wish sometimes to be on that leash
#sex
#America
#universe
#animals
#astronomy
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22 Comments
i listened
i listened,
no sound
was evident
in my ear,
the morning
was not
speaking,
he had
lost
his power
of speech
during
the night,
that unintended
spontaneous
moment
dissolving
into that
black river,
circling back,
the echo
will swarm
like rhyme,
once spoken
before.
no sound
was evident
in my ear,
the morning
was not
speaking,
he had
lost
his power
of speech
during
the night,
that unintended
spontaneous
moment
dissolving
into that
black river,
circling back,
the echo
will swarm
like rhyme,
once spoken
before.
#universe
#morning
#night #evolution
#night #evolution
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6 Comments
WONDERFUL WORLD
It's the gray of the sky
That takes my breath away
It's the blue of the day
That's stolen by the rain
It's the thirsty lake that is replenished with every drop
The smile of the clouds that darken their gaze
Or the misty aura that wraps up my skin
It's the way I get lost in the haze
And once it has drizzled it starts to pour
The winds came up and brush me with the hail
But then the ice softens when it touches the ground
The world might be strong but it's already frail
It is I...
I who hold my hands...
That takes my breath away
It's the blue of the day
That's stolen by the rain
It's the thirsty lake that is replenished with every drop
The smile of the clouds that darken their gaze
Or the misty aura that wraps up my skin
It's the way I get lost in the haze
And once it has drizzled it starts to pour
The winds came up and brush me with the hail
But then the ice softens when it touches the ground
The world might be strong but it's already frail
It is I...
I who hold my hands...
#universe
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4 Comments
Ten Physical Concept Haikus
Time and Time Again:
Conundrum starting
Since the beginning to end
Becoming after
Higher Planes:
Spatial crescent
Stepping through envelopment
Reality folds
Dimensional Relationship:
Inverted under
A leap and bound scale tipping
Over the horizon
Unfolding:
Spiraling convex
Belted distance from above
Concentration planes
Accelerated Light:
Squaring foundation
Amassing procreation
Hyper...
Conundrum starting
Since the beginning to end
Becoming after
Higher Planes:
Spatial crescent
Stepping through envelopment
Reality folds
Dimensional Relationship:
Inverted under
A leap and bound scale tipping
Over the horizon
Unfolding:
Spiraling convex
Belted distance from above
Concentration planes
Accelerated Light:
Squaring foundation
Amassing procreation
Hyper...
#haiku
#LifeAsAWriter
#metaphor
#spiritual
#universe
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1 Comment
Loving Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
With to many nights spent dreaming about you
To many secret poems written for you too
Ooh the lies in my diary
Of you kissing and loving me, Loving Me
I swear I can't take this fall
Rejection has my back against a wall
But the truth has gotta be
I gotta know if you also wake screaming for Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please...
I can't take another lost
Please don't bring down, don't bring me down
I've got to win at any cost
With to many nights spent dreaming about you
To many secret poems written for you too
Ooh the lies in my diary
Of you kissing and loving me, Loving Me
I swear I can't take this fall
Rejection has my back against a wall
But the truth has gotta be
I gotta know if you also wake screaming for Me
Don't bring me down, don't bring me down
I can't take another lost
Please...
#love
#dreams
#universe
621 reads
31 Comments
Unseen Truths
Our stomachs shred themselves
to process over-emotional energy
A congress of educational facilities
is filled with hidden histories
and somewhere an adult is surprised
to learn of certain atrocities
committed by their own country
Asking why they weren't taught
the truth of a thing
before their 50th birthday
Why they were robbed
of enlightened opportunity
Somewhere, a white politician walks
in a three-piece Lazio and smirks
shadowed by a news crew
into a...
to process over-emotional energy
A congress of educational facilities
is filled with hidden histories
and somewhere an adult is surprised
to learn of certain atrocities
committed by their own country
Asking why they weren't taught
the truth of a thing
before their 50th birthday
Why they were robbed
of enlightened opportunity
Somewhere, a white politician walks
in a three-piece Lazio and smirks
shadowed by a news crew
into a...
#universe
#honesty
#philosophical
571 reads
9 Comments
Gravimetric
The moon betwixt the new and full
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
no entity at all
but nature as a psychopath
who likes to have things fall.
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
no entity at all
but nature as a psychopath
who likes to have things fall.
#earth
#universe
#moon #astronomy
#moon #astronomy
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3 Comments
There is Transformation in Death
For some species on earth,
there is transformation in death, a renaissance
if you will, becoming young all over again, whether you
see it as reincarnation or rebirth, a new life begins. There is
transformation in death, some lifeforms can be considered
immortal, the cycle continues underneath the ocean waves,
filling the sea with vibrant and deadly limbs. But that’s the
way nature has made them out to be, a wonderful creation of
beauty and wonder, for when their time comes, ...
there is transformation in death, a renaissance
if you will, becoming young all over again, whether you
see it as reincarnation or rebirth, a new life begins. There is
transformation in death, some lifeforms can be considered
immortal, the cycle continues underneath the ocean waves,
filling the sea with vibrant and deadly limbs. But that’s the
way nature has made them out to be, a wonderful creation of
beauty and wonder, for when their time comes, ...
#universe
#nature
#fish
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8 Comments
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