Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Dec 2024 7:35pm
18th Dec 2024 7:35pm
Interstellar Sex With Demons
#devil
#dirty
#evil
#sex
#universe
161 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 2:42am
13th Oct 2024 2:42am
scattered and scarred
mellowing I see Heaven shining
stars racing spirits lighting the universes
creating from their glorious imaginations
heightening my perspective
trying life it expects much from me
rising then sinking my mind wanders
the world demands my attention
seeing too much I avoid connecting
overwhelmed and sometimes afraid of the future
swimming in the elements
touching the univereses
we have AI on the waves
if the ruins of the world tell us anything
it may have always been so
energies reach in to...
stars racing spirits lighting the universes
creating from their glorious imaginations
heightening my perspective
trying life it expects much from me
rising then sinking my mind wanders
the world demands my attention
seeing too much I avoid connecting
overwhelmed and sometimes afraid of the future
swimming in the elements
touching the univereses
we have AI on the waves
if the ruins of the world tell us anything
it may have always been so
energies reach in to...
#metaphor
#spiritual
#universe
80 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
19th Nov 2022 1:14pm
19th Nov 2022 1:14pm
What I woke up with ....
Be elegant
Be kind
Put up with my sexual desires
Create
Make bacon and eggs, toast
Drink whiskey with me
That's about it
Be kind
Put up with my sexual desires
Create
Make bacon and eggs, toast
Drink whiskey with me
That's about it
#women
#universe
#morning
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
460 reads
28 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 10:24pm
14th Nov 2024 10:24pm
Broken-record
I.
I wish I was a Witch
imbued through grace
beget by the knowledge of Truth
to combat ignorance
I'd proudly proclaim the title
bowing to Mother Nature
for gifting me the moniker
of so brave the women
—maiden, mother, and crone—
who suffered under religiosity
from pointy fingers
and judgmental tongues
condemning them to death
II.
...
I wish I was a Witch
imbued through grace
beget by the knowledge of Truth
to combat ignorance
I'd proudly proclaim the title
bowing to Mother Nature
for gifting me the moniker
of so brave the women
—maiden, mother, and crone—
who suffered under religiosity
from pointy fingers
and judgmental tongues
condemning them to death
II.
...
#magic
#pagan
#universe #witches
#universe #witches
335 reads
24 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 4:30am
25th Dec 2024 4:30am
Spiritual Wolf
Do you know your true name 🤔 of your spiritual entity, from the deepness of the forest of life. 🙏 FOR have you ever wondered what is your true spiritual name of yours.. FROM the deepness of the entity of that which exists only within the depths of ourselves 👁️👁️ For what is your thoughts on this message of tranquility, and peace and serenity and spiritual soul of your subconsciousness of your own, thoughts and insight and imagination from your own.🧠 MIND.... ...
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
...
🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
...
#evolution
#forest
#moon
#universe
#werewolves
43 reads
0 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2024 1:22pm
2nd Aug 2024 1:22pm
blown away
the sun lost his dominance
as thick clouds bullied him into shadow
turning afternoon to complete darkness
no thunder...no lightning...no rain
only the gods breath in full fury
& things meant to stand tall & proud became horizontal
abasing themselves in the face of it
fallen trees & sundered limbs covered the streets
those caught unaware
{among them...my daughter...}
forced to dodge flying debris
we had no warning
& with one loud boom...power gave out
my tiny basement with its crowding...
as thick clouds bullied him into shadow
turning afternoon to complete darkness
no thunder...no lightning...no rain
only the gods breath in full fury
& things meant to stand tall & proud became horizontal
abasing themselves in the face of it
fallen trees & sundered limbs covered the streets
those caught unaware
{among them...my daughter...}
forced to dodge flying debris
we had no warning
& with one loud boom...power gave out
my tiny basement with its crowding...
#confessional
#nature
#storm #universe
#storm #universe
176 reads
10 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
8th Jun 2024 2:00pm
8th Jun 2024 2:00pm
My Jupiter
what planet are
you from pluto
Jupiter ceres
because you
definitely can't
be from mars
You're like no
other so gentle
and empathic
manly, tender
& genuine too
you're not after
a quick fix hook
up one-nighter
don't think that
you're god's gift
to women you're
a present for sure
where are you from
my other worldly guy
you from pluto
Jupiter ceres
because you
definitely can't
be from mars
You're like no
other so gentle
and empathic
manly, tender
& genuine too
you're not after
a quick fix hook
up one-nighter
don't think that
you're god's gift
to women you're
a present for sure
where are you from
my other worldly guy
#stars
#universe
192 reads
16 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 2:03am
12th Dec 2024 2:03am
Delphic Depressions
Comingling with some foresight frets
I see a future of regrets
where the outcome is rarely good
if ever it is understood
that within a Pythian song
is all of that which could go wrong
when the hand of fate makes a fist
confirming it as nihilist
almost as if it were a god
committed to soul crushing fraud
where jubilation in our youth
decays into the painful truth
where things will seldom go our way,
even on the sunniest day,
since all the physics now in play...
are all, to death, a grand ballet.
I see a future of regrets
where the outcome is rarely good
if ever it is understood
that within a Pythian song
is all of that which could go wrong
when the hand of fate makes a fist
confirming it as nihilist
almost as if it were a god
committed to soul crushing fraud
where jubilation in our youth
decays into the painful truth
where things will seldom go our way,
even on the sunniest day,
since all the physics now in play...
are all, to death, a grand ballet.
#universe
148 reads
8 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
25th Sep 2021 12:09pm
25th Sep 2021 12:09pm
~'The Eye Of God'
viz :: 'The Eye Of God'
#love
#universe
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#minimalist
1632 reads
2 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
13th Dec 2024 6:51pm
TOE
Great minds can explain the large and small scale structure of the universe through general relativity and quantum theory.
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
But they have tried in vain to bring both together under one banner The Unified Theory of Everything .
Einstein, Schrodinger, Newton,Curie all have failed but backdeckbenny with the IQ of a cabbage leaf has solved the problem.
My Unified Theory of Everything posits that everything in the universe is connected,changeable and impermanent until entropy and death arrive.After that, connectivity remains but everything now becomes permanent and...
#universe
38 reads
3 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
27th Aug 2024 9:40pm
27th Aug 2024 9:40pm
quiet time (the moon)
the moon
took its
free time
seriously,
sitting
quietly
while
reading
a favorite
book,
and i'm
sure
it must
have been
poetry,
and then
after
closing
his book,
he slept
and let
the sun
enter.
took its
free time
seriously,
sitting
quietly
while
reading
a favorite
book,
and i'm
sure
it must
have been
poetry,
and then
after
closing
his book,
he slept
and let
the sun
enter.
#moon
#nature
#sky
#sun
#universe
148 reads
10 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
Abyssus
"And if you gaze long enough into the abyss, the abyss also gazes into you" - Nietzsche
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
#astronomy
#dreams
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
66 reads
11 Comments
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