Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers
#universe
Poems about the universe by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Big Picture
grandiose visions!
connections! and synapses!
signals pinging! to & fro
images! flashing beauty
words tumbling! downstream
strokes of brilliance
on the tip of my tongue
this tangled-yarn
spaghetti-slippery
brain full of squirrels
wherein
everything relates
to everything else
critically important
(blessedly irrelevant)
the gestalt
is all so clear to me
and yet
impossible to convey
to you
connections! and synapses!
signals pinging! to & fro
images! flashing beauty
words tumbling! downstream
strokes of brilliance
on the tip of my tongue
this tangled-yarn
spaghetti-slippery
brain full of squirrels
wherein
everything relates
to everything else
critically important
(blessedly irrelevant)
the gestalt
is all so clear to me
and yet
impossible to convey
to you
#dreams
#universe
#art
#philosophical
#ADHD
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Just Do It
Springtime begins Tuesday, March 19
Blends into Summer on Friday, June 21
I hope everyone is feeling great, and the time it takes you to read this, may it always find you and your family prospering spiritually, financially, intellectually, and always pamper your soul, positively and emotionally.
If you have children, make sure, you check with your local Health Department in your county, there seems to be an uprise in MMR outbreak in some states, (Measles, Mumps, and Rubella).
If you are an adult, I could only assume you have had this combined...
Blends into Summer on Friday, June 21
I hope everyone is feeling great, and the time it takes you to read this, may it always find you and your family prospering spiritually, financially, intellectually, and always pamper your soul, positively and emotionally.
If you have children, make sure, you check with your local Health Department in your county, there seems to be an uprise in MMR outbreak in some states, (Measles, Mumps, and Rubella).
If you are an adult, I could only assume you have had this combined...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#water
#spiritual
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Touch me...
Touch me....
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads. ...
To reach through the skin, body, soul, to my heart.....
To a small point in the middle of the hollow abyss,
To the darkness in the middle of my BEING......
Weave me a shawl made of a web of dreams
And the sun dust of it scattered stuck there like glitter.
Press your cheek against the glare on the crest of the wave
that swept up to the fading horizon.
Give me plenty of wetness from your palms.
Scoop me a handful of stars from your erection.
Burn me with the ashes of forgotten roads. ...
#lust
#universe
#lover
#passion
#orgasm
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46 Comments
unforeseen
even the smallest
pebble cast into the
water creates ripples
pebble cast into the
water creates ripples
#universe
#fate
#luck
440 reads
8 Comments
Rouge crossings\ AriesMoon versus solar eclipse
In tethered tremble
words from tipped tongue
fleeting fetus
we who have comets as eyes
pierced in vacant alphabet
do not mourn dawn
Denied once
existence
dissolving into
black madonna
rite
I am the embryo
eclipsed
unborn
umbra
child
unfathomed
oystered pearl
has bled
her dark red spiral flows
I found a piece called peace
looking...
words from tipped tongue
fleeting fetus
we who have comets as eyes
pierced in vacant alphabet
do not mourn dawn
Denied once
existence
dissolving into
black madonna
rite
I am the embryo
eclipsed
unborn
umbra
child
unfathomed
oystered pearl
has bled
her dark red spiral flows
I found a piece called peace
looking...
#sun
#universe
#astrology #metaphor
#astrology #metaphor
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Dea
Dea
With that marble white skin
Plump lips
Almond eyes
Child of God
Playing with light
Come on dear
Let us catch fireflies
Let us dig the stars
With that marble white skin
Plump lips
Almond eyes
Child of God
Playing with light
Come on dear
Let us catch fireflies
Let us dig the stars
#universe
#stars
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4 Comments
Saturn Through a Telescope
Saturn through a telescope
is bite sized,
like something you could scoop up from a bowl
with a spoon
Saturn's rings through a telescope
look like a little Hula hoop
or like the part of a plastic Saturn toy
a toddler would grip
Saturn through a low-powered telescope
does a bit of a hula itself
before coming into view
But then there it is.
As you peer into the telescope,
it's a portal to a two dimensional object
But for some
its a portal
to questions that form at the speed of light. ...
is bite sized,
like something you could scoop up from a bowl
with a spoon
Saturn's rings through a telescope
look like a little Hula hoop
or like the part of a plastic Saturn toy
a toddler would grip
Saturn through a low-powered telescope
does a bit of a hula itself
before coming into view
But then there it is.
As you peer into the telescope,
it's a portal to a two dimensional object
But for some
its a portal
to questions that form at the speed of light. ...
#childhood
#universe
#astronomy
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The Wish of Universal Annihilation
Those who are fascinated by forbidden lore
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
Are never afraid to look behind the forbidden door,
“Sacrificing countless nights of peaceful sleep
Searching for psycho-cannibal things that one should never seek,
“The dark quest itself may kill an individual outright
As they wonder how their flesh has provided comfort for the knife,
“Or traveled to places that should always remain unseen
While blood from the anus oozes out a nasty sickly green,
“Every dark answer equal to losing pieces of the soul
That slowly...
#dark
#universe
#apocalypse
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5 Comments
Cosmic Hush
In the realm of splendid voids,
where silence dances and shadows play,
there exists a place beyond the stars
where nothingness blooms in shades of gray.
Superb nothing at all times
when clocks cease their tireless chime
and the universe holds its breath
as if waiting for a secret rhyme.
No suns to rise, no moons to wane,
only echoes of forgotten dreams,
in this cosmic hush we find solace
as reality unravels at the seams.
The wind whispers tales of absence
and the rivers flow with empty grace.
Mountains...
where silence dances and shadows play,
there exists a place beyond the stars
where nothingness blooms in shades of gray.
Superb nothing at all times
when clocks cease their tireless chime
and the universe holds its breath
as if waiting for a secret rhyme.
No suns to rise, no moons to wane,
only echoes of forgotten dreams,
in this cosmic hush we find solace
as reality unravels at the seams.
The wind whispers tales of absence
and the rivers flow with empty grace.
Mountains...
#universe
#stars
#WritingPoetry
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10 Comments
Quantum Entanglement....
story
of the
big bang theory
is reality
in her
eyes
cosmic
strings
play
celestial
music
of love
as two souls
immerse
like galaxies
feminity
and masclimity
laid bare
as our
atoms
danced
in
quantum
entanglement
of the
big bang theory
is reality
in her
eyes
cosmic
strings
play
celestial
music
of love
as two souls
immerse
like galaxies
feminity
and masclimity
laid bare
as our
atoms
danced
in
quantum
entanglement
#love
#universe
#admiration
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6 Comments
Eyes to See, Ears to Hear
I wish I could show you the world I see.
The layers and levels, beyond surface deep.
I see a world of intricacies,
Where nothing is quite as I seems.
From the birds in the trees,
To the expression of genes.
From waves in the ocean,
To auditory in motion.
But then you might find,
Humanity is out of its mind.
The layers and levels, beyond surface deep.
I see a world of intricacies,
Where nothing is quite as I seems.
From the birds in the trees,
To the expression of genes.
From waves in the ocean,
To auditory in motion.
But then you might find,
Humanity is out of its mind.
#universe
#nature
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My Empty Space.
I fear that deep, dark, cold, of outer space
it mocks my feeble spark of being, so,
it's up there, lurking, but so in my face
with its life bringing age-old big bang glow.
It's waiting for my cold scattered ashes
this foul, soulless, dead, still eternal thing,
to take my atoms like so much trash is
taken by trash carts, still, I'll cling and cling...
It's the rotten fixed fate of emptiness
I shall not get to leave a space behind,
this soap-bubble of my brief consciousness
will blink, snuffing out my life-spark, my time.
...
it mocks my feeble spark of being, so,
it's up there, lurking, but so in my face
with its life bringing age-old big bang glow.
It's waiting for my cold scattered ashes
this foul, soulless, dead, still eternal thing,
to take my atoms like so much trash is
taken by trash carts, still, I'll cling and cling...
It's the rotten fixed fate of emptiness
I shall not get to leave a space behind,
this soap-bubble of my brief consciousness
will blink, snuffing out my life-spark, my time.
...
#sonnet
#science
#universe
#fate
#scifi
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Universe by Top Critiquers