Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2024 1:50pm
23rd Jan 2024 1:50pm
Email from David, the Father of My Baby
Lauryn,
I hope this email finds you well. I've been thinking and realized that my communication in the past has been hurtful, and for that, I sincerely apologize. It's important to me that we have a positive and supportive relationship, especially now that we're going to be parents.
I've attached a PDF from my council outlining the monthly child support payments I'm committed to providing. I want to assure you that I am fully committed to supporting you and our baby, both emotionally and financially.
I understand that this is a challenging time, and I would like to...
I hope this email finds you well. I've been thinking and realized that my communication in the past has been hurtful, and for that, I sincerely apologize. It's important to me that we have a positive and supportive relationship, especially now that we're going to be parents.
I've attached a PDF from my council outlining the monthly child support payments I'm committed to providing. I want to assure you that I am fully committed to supporting you and our baby, both emotionally and financially.
I understand that this is a challenging time, and I would like to...
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#support
226 reads
2 Comments
Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
18th Jan 2024 7:58pm
18th Jan 2024 7:58pm
YOUR WORD CAN BE MY GUIDE.
YOUR WORD CAN BE MY GUIDE.
I am not writing just to gain
the honour that l have the brain
that can indite some rhythmic lines
that you will like and praise my name.
I know you have the head that thinks.
You go along the way l pass.
It's full of hardships and complaints.
Just look at your most recent lines.
I like to join your aims with mine
and read a word from your smart mind.
You are supposed to have some thoughts.
I will be pleased if lots are wise.
I don't compete with you to chant ...
I am not writing just to gain
the honour that l have the brain
that can indite some rhythmic lines
that you will like and praise my name.
I know you have the head that thinks.
You go along the way l pass.
It's full of hardships and complaints.
Just look at your most recent lines.
I like to join your aims with mine
and read a word from your smart mind.
You are supposed to have some thoughts.
I will be pleased if lots are wise.
I don't compete with you to chant ...
#support
197 reads
23 Comments
Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
11th Jan 2024 9:22pm
11th Jan 2024 9:22pm
HELP TO BE HELPED!
HELP TO BE HELPED!
People are opposed to people.
Don't they perceive their own failure?
All of them are poorest creatures.
Each can see how much he suffers.
They advance from snags to harder
frightened by their horried voyage
weeping and expecting others
are successful, but are liars.
Help your brother; he's in trouble,
but you feel just what you go through.
Sympathize, and give him rescue.
All of us have just one Father.
Don't await his loss with laughter
or create a snare to trap him.
It's enough...
People are opposed to people.
Don't they perceive their own failure?
All of them are poorest creatures.
Each can see how much he suffers.
They advance from snags to harder
frightened by their horried voyage
weeping and expecting others
are successful, but are liars.
Help your brother; he's in trouble,
but you feel just what you go through.
Sympathize, and give him rescue.
All of us have just one Father.
Don't await his loss with laughter
or create a snare to trap him.
It's enough...
#support
102 reads
0 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
5th Jan 2024 1:17am
5th Jan 2024 1:17am
Stay With Me
It’s 3am, and I’m wide awake
I just can’t seem to catch a break
The past was then; the present’s now
What can I do to feel safe and sound?
Everyone says it’s all in my mind
Is that why I’ve been walking blind?
My shoulders are hunched over with this pressing weight
I’ve left home long ago; would life have been better had I just stayed?
Stay with me; don’t ever let me go
I’m helpless in the water; will I sink or will I float?
Life’s coloured in multiple shades; it’s not just black and white
This internal war I’m...
I just can’t seem to catch a break
The past was then; the present’s now
What can I do to feel safe and sound?
Everyone says it’s all in my mind
Is that why I’ve been walking blind?
My shoulders are hunched over with this pressing weight
I’ve left home long ago; would life have been better had I just stayed?
Stay with me; don’t ever let me go
I’m helpless in the water; will I sink or will I float?
Life’s coloured in multiple shades; it’s not just black and white
This internal war I’m...
#love
#God
#spiritual
#rhyming
#support
306 reads
14 Comments
Zephlin347
Poem Published
1st Jan 2024 9:11pm
1st Jan 2024 9:11pm
You Are My Muse
You are my muse, the star that guides my night,
The spark that sets my heart and words alight.
You are my love, the one who fills my soul,
The harmony that makes me feel whole.
You are my muse, the treasure of my life,
The blessing that fills my world with grace.
You are my love, the one who warms my heart,
The radiance that brightens my face.
You are my muse, the poetry in my veins,
The wind that whispers verses in my ears.
You are my love, the one who stirs my passion,
The ecstasy that melts away my fears.
You are...
The spark that sets my heart and words alight.
You are my love, the one who fills my soul,
The harmony that makes me feel whole.
You are my muse, the treasure of my life,
The blessing that fills my world with grace.
You are my love, the one who warms my heart,
The radiance that brightens my face.
You are my muse, the poetry in my veins,
The wind that whispers verses in my ears.
You are my love, the one who stirs my passion,
The ecstasy that melts away my fears.
You are...
#happiness
#romantic
#inspirational
#gratitude
#support
730 reads
7 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
18th Dec 2023 6:14am
18th Dec 2023 6:14am
beautiful gifts
the joys of selfless giving
[No. 1 from The Youth Collection]
"The meaning of life is to find your gift. The purpose of life
is to give it away."—David Viscott
give me beautiful eyes:
let me behold the azure skies,
that when the sun at even paints the canvas of the west,
i may behold the wonders of the universe at rest.
give me beautiful lips,
that i may send delicious sips
of kindly words to every heart that longs for poetry;
and may the world be ransomed by my deft...
[No. 1 from The Youth Collection]
"The meaning of life is to find your gift. The purpose of life
is to give it away."—David Viscott
give me beautiful eyes:
let me behold the azure skies,
that when the sun at even paints the canvas of the west,
i may behold the wonders of the universe at rest.
give me beautiful lips,
that i may send delicious sips
of kindly words to every heart that longs for poetry;
and may the world be ransomed by my deft...
#kindness
#gratitude
#support #sacrifice
#support #sacrifice
230 reads
2 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
9th Dec 2023 12:29pm
9th Dec 2023 12:29pm
PALESTINE:THE WOMB WHO BORE MY GOD~
My Darling in oppression,
I know you did not have a lovely Jumu'ah yesterday, and neither are you having a good time now. You're always with me in prayer, and this Sabbath, I thought to put on a sackcloth, dump ashes on my head and weep with you.
Oh my Beloved! How can I not weep with you? Are not your wounded young men my brothers? My lovers? My caretakers and my very own companion? My sons indeed! Blood of my blood! Flesh of my flesh, Life of my life!
That torn woman, wailing! sitting on rubble rocking the departed Fruit...
I know you did not have a lovely Jumu'ah yesterday, and neither are you having a good time now. You're always with me in prayer, and this Sabbath, I thought to put on a sackcloth, dump ashes on my head and weep with you.
Oh my Beloved! How can I not weep with you? Are not your wounded young men my brothers? My lovers? My caretakers and my very own companion? My sons indeed! Blood of my blood! Flesh of my flesh, Life of my life!
That torn woman, wailing! sitting on rubble rocking the departed Fruit...
#support
#love
219 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 9:32pm
26th Nov 2023 9:32pm
graves and bridges
the virtues of disinterested benevolence
“If you want to be a bridge of hope to the world, you’ve got
to allow yourself to be walked on.”—Tommy Barnett
where graves proliferate,
no bonafide
friend may commiserate
with amplified
disdain, to change a world
of indigents,
across life's curtain hurled
like accidents.
let's bridges build, instead,
to span the gap
between the starved and fed;
unite the map
between haves and have-nots.
let ebony
and ivory no blots
cast on the sea.
a...
“If you want to be a bridge of hope to the world, you’ve got
to allow yourself to be walked on.”—Tommy Barnett
where graves proliferate,
no bonafide
friend may commiserate
with amplified
disdain, to change a world
of indigents,
across life's curtain hurled
like accidents.
let's bridges build, instead,
to span the gap
between the starved and fed;
unite the map
between haves and have-nots.
let ebony
and ivory no blots
cast on the sea.
a...
#kindness
#support
#graveyard
#poverty
#apathy
142 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Nov 2023 9:31pm
24th Nov 2023 9:31pm
How About You Take Your Cameras Out?
Unless you
characters have better
opportunities on each of your
agendas, how about you take your cameras
out and start shooting some photos of
yours truly for the new
catalog?
characters have better
opportunities on each of your
agendas, how about you take your cameras
out and start shooting some photos of
yours truly for the new
catalog?
#fiction
#dialogue
#support
#sensual
#success
162 reads
0 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
24th Oct 2023 00:06am
24th Oct 2023 00:06am
Promiseless
Promises, promises.
Apple-feighned oranges.
Addicts claim rehab, yet
itch to have more of this.
Order this, order that.
Bought a fish, got a cat.
Bigger boats needed,
yet neither floats even.
Buyers remorse?
Get me all worked up
then buy me a horse.
I'm addict by choice.
Level headers rejoice!
I'm not buying what I can't afford.
I'm not lying about what i hoard.
I mean store. I'm not a hoarder...
I get angry, my patience grows shorter.
Riddled me this, tit for tat.
Little needs...
Apple-feighned oranges.
Addicts claim rehab, yet
itch to have more of this.
Order this, order that.
Bought a fish, got a cat.
Bigger boats needed,
yet neither floats even.
Buyers remorse?
Get me all worked up
then buy me a horse.
I'm addict by choice.
Level headers rejoice!
I'm not buying what I can't afford.
I'm not lying about what i hoard.
I mean store. I'm not a hoarder...
I get angry, my patience grows shorter.
Riddled me this, tit for tat.
Little needs...
#addiction
#support
280 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Oct 2023 7:53pm
13th Oct 2023 7:53pm
She Respects His Honest Opinion
Scott
has enjoyed
reading Jolene's new
erotic thriller novel
until he finally reached the end.
has enjoyed
reading Jolene's new
erotic thriller novel
until he finally reached the end.
#friendship
#fiction
#uplifting
#support
#success
205 reads
2 Comments
Johnny707
Poem Published
9th Oct 2023 11:09am
9th Oct 2023 11:09am
Rebellion
In a world tainted by corruption's guise,
Where shadows loom and truth denies,
A rebellion stirs, a fire ignites,
To reclaim what's ours, to set things right.
With hearts ablaze, we rise with might,
Defying the darkness, shining our light,
For in unity we find our strength,
To break the chains of corruption's length.
We march with passion, undeterred,
Through streets and alleys, our voices heard,
Against the lies, the deceit, the greed,
With every step, we plant the seed.
We are the rebels, the seekers of truth, ...
Where shadows loom and truth denies,
A rebellion stirs, a fire ignites,
To reclaim what's ours, to set things right.
With hearts ablaze, we rise with might,
Defying the darkness, shining our light,
For in unity we find our strength,
To break the chains of corruption's length.
We march with passion, undeterred,
Through streets and alleys, our voices heard,
Against the lies, the deceit, the greed,
With every step, we plant the seed.
We are the rebels, the seekers of truth, ...
#courage
#motivational
#inspirational
#LifeChangingMoment
#support
250 reads
2 Comments
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