Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 10:37pm
12th Sep 2024 10:37pm
the acts of the souless
your careless handling of my soul
bruised redemption another piece of my soul gone
sadness collects who she can
the delicate parts of my feelings recess to the shadows
forlorn they don't know how to pretend they love
they are cherry blossoms in spring
falling from the trees to never blossom
the wind carried their fragile petals away
what might have been, fell to the ground in dismay
brightly colored pain
true in my forlorn state
if you get a smile from me
it will warm your soul
there are those...
bruised redemption another piece of my soul gone
sadness collects who she can
the delicate parts of my feelings recess to the shadows
forlorn they don't know how to pretend they love
they are cherry blossoms in spring
falling from the trees to never blossom
the wind carried their fragile petals away
what might have been, fell to the ground in dismay
brightly colored pain
true in my forlorn state
if you get a smile from me
it will warm your soul
there are those...
#heartbroken
#honesty
#kindness #support
#kindness #support
122 reads
3 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
8th Sep 2024 00:12am
8th Sep 2024 00:12am
life death and football
it’d be awful to to die today,
he wrote, since Dartford are
playing Dover today, and he’d be annoyed
not to know the result
he wrote, since Dartford are
playing Dover today, and he’d be annoyed
not to know the result
#inspirational
#support
83 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Aug 2024 6:53pm
30th Aug 2024 6:53pm
Death is lurking
Hear the darkness breathe
Watching every step I take
Wish you were with me
Watching every step I take
Wish you were with me
#dark
#death
#senryu
#support
#wife
71 reads
4 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 10:48am
26th Aug 2024 10:48am
Oh Klahoma
I can see it in your voice.
I can hear it in your eyes.
I can hear it in your actions.
And the eyes you despise.
The pain,I can see it from miles.
And I can hear it in your eyes.
When you cried alone,time flies.
But I can hear it in your eyes.
And I can see it in your smile.
That you are in pain,and been hurt for a while.
Tears are falling down at the party.
Everyone is looking at you.
But they don't see it through your eyes.
Or your mind ,that likes to fly in the skies.
They can't hear through your...
I can hear it in your eyes.
I can hear it in your actions.
And the eyes you despise.
The pain,I can see it from miles.
And I can hear it in your eyes.
When you cried alone,time flies.
But I can hear it in your eyes.
And I can see it in your smile.
That you are in pain,and been hurt for a while.
Tears are falling down at the party.
Everyone is looking at you.
But they don't see it through your eyes.
Or your mind ,that likes to fly in the skies.
They can't hear through your...
#hope
#motivational
#sadness #support
#sadness #support
129 reads
1 Comment
LunaDahlia
Poem Published
24th Aug 2024 8:54am
24th Aug 2024 8:54am
Eclipse
A spark of electricity
Between us
Overwhelming the senses
Intertwined in a passionate embrace.
This is the dream.
This is the desire.
We see Fate's intention
Detrimental to us
Beneficial to all
We are the precipice of survival
You, the sun
I, the moon
Separated forevermore
But just once
Once in a thousand years
The yearning for connection ceases
A joining of such primal lust
And longing
Sated but for a moment
As our lonely souls sing sweet pain.
Yet the bitterness is back
No.
This...
Between us
Overwhelming the senses
Intertwined in a passionate embrace.
This is the dream.
This is the desire.
We see Fate's intention
Detrimental to us
Beneficial to all
We are the precipice of survival
You, the sun
I, the moon
Separated forevermore
But just once
Once in a thousand years
The yearning for connection ceases
A joining of such primal lust
And longing
Sated but for a moment
As our lonely souls sing sweet pain.
Yet the bitterness is back
No.
This...
#LongDistanceRelationship
#love
#MentalHealth #support
#MentalHealth #support
197 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 1:13am
20th Aug 2024 1:13am
Opportunity is gone
Storm washed away roads
Roads were closed, canceled my trip
My one chance for change
Roads were closed, canceled my trip
My one chance for change
#LifeChangingMoment
#senryu
#storm
#support
#travel
81 reads
12 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 3:37pm
14th Aug 2024 3:37pm
I Am With You
I fly in your dreams
I am your living hope and set belief
I am the sun that keeps away the smothering darkness
That would do anything to clench your pure soul in its icy claws
I bring life and warmth to your weary heart
I am the sole comfort in a world plagued by misery
Though you cannot see me
You can sense me all around you
I am in the flowers, and the trees
I am in the soil that gives way beneath your feet
You question why there is one set of footprints on the ground instead of two
My dear child, it is because I picked you up and now I...
I am your living hope and set belief
I am the sun that keeps away the smothering darkness
That would do anything to clench your pure soul in its icy claws
I bring life and warmth to your weary heart
I am the sole comfort in a world plagued by misery
Though you cannot see me
You can sense me all around you
I am in the flowers, and the trees
I am in the soil that gives way beneath your feet
You question why there is one set of footprints on the ground instead of two
My dear child, it is because I picked you up and now I...
#God
#love
#spiritual #support
#spiritual #support
185 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Aug 2024 11:41am
12th Aug 2024 11:41am
Deprieved Fiend
Ghetto calling
So hungry
So thirsty
So tired
On fire
Calling your name
Rancid stench
Glass shard womb
The atmosphere suffocates
The voices
The fear
Monkey climbing up your leg
If the shoe fits, curl up and die in it
So hungry
So thirsty
So tired
On fire
Calling your name
Rancid stench
Glass shard womb
The atmosphere suffocates
The voices
The fear
Monkey climbing up your leg
If the shoe fits, curl up and die in it
#addiction
#poverty
#support
170 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Aug 2024 8:26pm
11th Aug 2024 8:26pm
Love Shouldn't Hurt
I'll handle with care
Other hands have damaged you
Put your trust in me
Other hands have damaged you
Put your trust in me
#DomesticViolence
#friendship
#relationships
#senryu
#support
179 reads
12 Comments
Just-Rob
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 5:18pm
21st Jul 2024 5:18pm
The Promise
You always hide your scars
You feel ugly inside
Within the smile on your lips
There's a sadness that's belied
What's beneath the surface
You keep hidden away
Always wearing a mask
As you go throughout your day
The person that others know
It isn't you at all
Nothing but a big display
When in truth you feel small
The more people around you
The more alone you feel
They can't understand
That this you isn't real
Inside of your silence
Is where you find peace...
You feel ugly inside
Within the smile on your lips
There's a sadness that's belied
What's beneath the surface
You keep hidden away
Always wearing a mask
As you go throughout your day
The person that others know
It isn't you at all
Nothing but a big display
When in truth you feel small
The more people around you
The more alone you feel
They can't understand
That this you isn't real
Inside of your silence
Is where you find peace...
#family
#hope
#love #support
#love #support
200 reads
4 Comments
Just-Rob
Poem Published
20th Jul 2024 1:50am
20th Jul 2024 1:50am
Talking To The Moon
You're scared of people getting close
Its hard to give your trust
You've had that trust betrayed
You had no choice but to adjust
Your feelings overwhelm you
You want to let them go
The more you crave the quiet
The louder that things grow
You feel unworthy, you don't deserve
The people that love and care
It's hard to accept good things
When you were raised within despair
You have trouble with speaking the words
That get caught somewhere in your mind
You have so much going on at once ...
Its hard to give your trust
You've had that trust betrayed
You had no choice but to adjust
Your feelings overwhelm you
You want to let them go
The more you crave the quiet
The louder that things grow
You feel unworthy, you don't deserve
The people that love and care
It's hard to accept good things
When you were raised within despair
You have trouble with speaking the words
That get caught somewhere in your mind
You have so much going on at once ...
#acceptance
#family
#love #support
#love #support
174 reads
2 Comments
Madcinder
Poem Published
19th Jul 2024 12:04pm
19th Jul 2024 12:04pm
Kindness You Show Me
So bright the light ahead of me in the tunnel.
I can barely even see.
But I can see your hand reaching down from above.
To take hold of the lowly me.
I’m forever grateful you pulled me out.
Of my deepest of fogs.
Stood me up on my own two feet and.
In one moment you were gone.
But the kindness you show me won’t be forgotten.
I will bring others the healing word.
It’s just the kindness you show me enhances my life.
And I’ll forever praise the call you heard.
Separate me from the walk of life I travel.
And I’ll...
I can barely even see.
But I can see your hand reaching down from above.
To take hold of the lowly me.
I’m forever grateful you pulled me out.
Of my deepest of fogs.
Stood me up on my own two feet and.
In one moment you were gone.
But the kindness you show me won’t be forgotten.
I will bring others the healing word.
It’s just the kindness you show me enhances my life.
And I’ll forever praise the call you heard.
Separate me from the walk of life I travel.
And I’ll...
#gratitude
#kindness
#lyrics #support
#lyrics #support
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DU Poetry : Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
