Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Sapiosexual Egalitarian Xylene
#TruthOfLife
#magic
#support
#philosophical
#morality
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WHAT YOU HAVE IS A BLESSING
THE HERE AND NOW...👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
for what comes to your mind as it slowly comes, with the whole manifestion of mere thoughts. Coming back with a full force of energy with deep inner emotions. Blessing you with sweet sensual dreams and thoughts, that will have you remembering that she is more than an illusion, as she is a woman who stands there before you, yes in all her beautiful essence of a woman with a kindred spirit and love and kindness Just BECAUSE OF YOU....👁️👁️
#romantic
#gratitude
#support
#respect
#obsession
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You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
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I Cut Myself and Thought of You
That's the kind of relationship we have
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
Mundane household chore
Blade went too far, just a slice
Clean, surgical in nature
It was that kind of week
Unsettling
It's not so bad though
I have you to share my pain
You appreciate gore and perversity
Unintentional
Had it been self harm
Well, there's always tomorrow
#LifeStruggles
#SelfHarm
#confessional
#gratitude
#support
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Good Company
I once had a vision; a surreal dream
I dreamt I was in good company with no hidden scheme
It felt like an illusion; yet it’s what I yearn for
To be pleasantly surprised when I open that front door.
-
Oh, what I’d do to be in good company
Have my worries and doubts burn out with the sun’s gleam
To be held and cherished unconditionally
I’d give up all earthly wealth to bask in good company.
-
How can I make my dream a reality?
Where’s all the good company?
I’d cherish our bonds wholeheartedly
If only I knew where to find some good...
I dreamt I was in good company with no hidden scheme
It felt like an illusion; yet it’s what I yearn for
To be pleasantly surprised when I open that front door.
-
Oh, what I’d do to be in good company
Have my worries and doubts burn out with the sun’s gleam
To be held and cherished unconditionally
I’d give up all earthly wealth to bask in good company.
-
How can I make my dream a reality?
Where’s all the good company?
I’d cherish our bonds wholeheartedly
If only I knew where to find some good...
#happiness
#family
#friendship
#rhyming
#support
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The Therapists Lament - being perfect people
They tell me their stories
Their troubles and their nightmares
I listen and analyze, I’m their friend for a session
I nod and my face concentrates
While they describe their struggles
I am the perfect, non judgmental professional
I sometimes guide but mostly I give space
Most humans know what they need to do
To be their best selves
But they pay good money
For my degree to collaborate
Their most private struggles
I am so grateful they cannot see
That I am a mess
Yes you read that right
My life is a shitshow ...
Their troubles and their nightmares
I listen and analyze, I’m their friend for a session
I nod and my face concentrates
While they describe their struggles
I am the perfect, non judgmental professional
I sometimes guide but mostly I give space
Most humans know what they need to do
To be their best selves
But they pay good money
For my degree to collaborate
Their most private struggles
I am so grateful they cannot see
That I am a mess
Yes you read that right
My life is a shitshow ...
#confessional
#myself
#SelfReflection #support
#SelfReflection #support
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Karens
Watching these poor men
I can fractionally understand
When the thought crosses
Shit
I wish I could hit a woman.
I can fractionally understand
When the thought crosses
Shit
I wish I could hit a woman.
#bullying
#support
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Wave of Rage
This monster
Well fed and overgrown
Stares darkly
A hound near his throne
The stench of fear dissolves
It was threatening my resolve
Driving my blade through
As it rears with reaching claws
Raising the mutts head
One single purpose arose
One thought as eyes lock
Stirs hope that points us home
Where I intend to take him.
Well fed and overgrown
Stares darkly
A hound near his throne
The stench of fear dissolves
It was threatening my resolve
Driving my blade through
As it rears with reaching claws
Raising the mutts head
One single purpose arose
One thought as eyes lock
Stirs hope that points us home
Where I intend to take him.
#anger
#love
#depression
#support
#responsibility
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When She Says her Name is Weed
There are treasures not hidden but here in plain sight
Some might notice the new buds in the giving sunlight
Not yet set within the colors of coiled petals
Surrounded by numerous broods of flowers in a meadow
Some prefer to find where the concrete rose grows
It's unseen form behind ruins
Old store rows
To pluck and use wherever they go in deprave
The rose to finally die in a glass shaped grave
No
I seek the open flower
Facing the sun
Asking to be devoured
By way of outstretched
Pediculums ...
Some might notice the new buds in the giving sunlight
Not yet set within the colors of coiled petals
Surrounded by numerous broods of flowers in a meadow
Some prefer to find where the concrete rose grows
It's unseen form behind ruins
Old store rows
To pluck and use wherever they go in deprave
The rose to finally die in a glass shaped grave
No
I seek the open flower
Facing the sun
Asking to be devoured
By way of outstretched
Pediculums ...
#sex
#friendship
#support #SelfWorth
#support #SelfWorth
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Closure
We used to be more, but we're better as less
We traded some laughs, and we both went through hell
It's been quite a while since we had parted ways
I'm glad after all I can call you my friend
Call it crazy, call it wild
I know it's hard to understand
Forget the tears, forget the fights
And cherish instead the smiles and good times
We speak to each other without saying a word
Yet I still can't laugh at most of your jokes
After all this time, you still know me so well
If you ever need me you know I'll be there
...
We traded some laughs, and we both went through hell
It's been quite a while since we had parted ways
I'm glad after all I can call you my friend
Call it crazy, call it wild
I know it's hard to understand
Forget the tears, forget the fights
And cherish instead the smiles and good times
We speak to each other without saying a word
Yet I still can't laugh at most of your jokes
After all this time, you still know me so well
If you ever need me you know I'll be there
...
#love
#BestFriend
#breakup #support
#breakup #support
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Rocky is Dad, Dad is Rocky
Heavy is the head that wears the crown
But do not let your spirit wane,
Wage war with your agile mind,
Let your flame thrower eyes conquer the pain.
Rocky Dad, climb up off the canvas,
Get back up on your feet,
We do not throw in the towel,
We do not do defeat.
Navigate the chasms of hurt,
Pilot through the storm,
Assassinate the saturnine imposter,
We are invincible, we are the strong.
Many people are afraid to dance,
Remember that YOU are not!
You can out-jive the devil,
Teach the...
But do not let your spirit wane,
Wage war with your agile mind,
Let your flame thrower eyes conquer the pain.
Rocky Dad, climb up off the canvas,
Get back up on your feet,
We do not throw in the towel,
We do not do defeat.
Navigate the chasms of hurt,
Pilot through the storm,
Assassinate the saturnine imposter,
We are invincible, we are the strong.
Many people are afraid to dance,
Remember that YOU are not!
You can out-jive the devil,
Teach the...
#motivational
#inspirational
#support
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The Therapist's Summary
Lauryn was born in 1998 and remained an only child. She and her mother forged deep bonds through their shared struggles after Lauryn's father, now deceased, abandoned them when she was just 14 years old.
Lauryn’s first sexual experience came at age 16, marking a turning point in her life. Since then, she has led an active and uninhibited sex life, seeking connection and solace through physical intimacy.
Lauren enjoyed a deep bond with her mother, her only close remaining family member. In early May of this year, Lauryn’s world was shattered by the loss of her mother to...
Lauryn’s first sexual experience came at age 16, marking a turning point in her life. Since then, she has led an active and uninhibited sex life, seeking connection and solace through physical intimacy.
Lauren enjoyed a deep bond with her mother, her only close remaining family member. In early May of this year, Lauryn’s world was shattered by the loss of her mother to...
#LifeStruggles
#support
#healing
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DU Poetry : Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique