Poems About Support Seeking Honest Critique
#support
Poems about support seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
16th Apr 2023 3:37pm
16th Apr 2023 3:37pm
Splendid company during an apocalypse
Pictures of you
Chasing the tide
Riding ebony mares
Foam glistening beneath orange
pink hues
Invigorating mist
Unseen dragons breath
Calm
Though tempest fury
Surely follows such moments
Symphonic lightening crashes
Serenades illuminated shadows
From the shelter of caverns wall
Two green peas in a pod
Subsiding on nettles
Supping dew drops
Carefree
Arm in arm
Watching the oncoming storm
Chasing the tide
Riding ebony mares
Foam glistening beneath orange
pink hues
Invigorating mist
Unseen dragons breath
Calm
Though tempest fury
Surely follows such moments
Symphonic lightening crashes
Serenades illuminated shadows
From the shelter of caverns wall
Two green peas in a pod
Subsiding on nettles
Supping dew drops
Carefree
Arm in arm
Watching the oncoming storm
#love
#BestFriend
#gratitude
#support
#PopCulture
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
7th Apr 2023 00:13am
7th Apr 2023 00:13am
saving grace
maybe it’s a person
maybe it’s a fuzzy blanket that you own
it could be a pet, who fancies your lap
it may even be song you blast
..or sing
find it, savor it, save it
it keeps you warm
when your mind goes cold
it illuminates the darkness
that’s got you in a chokehold
can’t break free?
try a latte, or a cup of tea
it’s not always human
perhaps it’s a place
a grin
or the look of your own handwriting piercing a new notebook page
sometimes it’s just sitting and existing
when a day won’t let you do...
maybe it’s a fuzzy blanket that you own
it could be a pet, who fancies your lap
it may even be song you blast
..or sing
find it, savor it, save it
it keeps you warm
when your mind goes cold
it illuminates the darkness
that’s got you in a chokehold
can’t break free?
try a latte, or a cup of tea
it’s not always human
perhaps it’s a place
a grin
or the look of your own handwriting piercing a new notebook page
sometimes it’s just sitting and existing
when a day won’t let you do...
#motivational
#uplifting
#support
#determination
#NaPoWriMo2023
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 7:11am
6th Apr 2023 7:11am
The CEO
Walternate Universe – KP3434
“TOTO I’m tired, I’m sleepy and my feet hurt” I told my handler
“That’s on you” he said “you’ve been up for over a day and a half
You can have a couple of hours of rest here because in the morning
You are going to save the livelihood of your friends and staff”
As I walked through the dimly hallway past many other stations
Portals opened up as other people traveled in between realms
TOTO took me to a breakroom for those tired and weary travelers
It had beds and so I'd sleep for a bit until it was time to take the...
“TOTO I’m tired, I’m sleepy and my feet hurt” I told my handler
“That’s on you” he said “you’ve been up for over a day and a half
You can have a couple of hours of rest here because in the morning
You are going to save the livelihood of your friends and staff”
As I walked through the dimly hallway past many other stations
Portals opened up as other people traveled in between realms
TOTO took me to a breakroom for those tired and weary travelers
It had beds and so I'd sleep for a bit until it was time to take the...
#friendship
#universe
#support #NaPoWriMo2023
#support #NaPoWriMo2023
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
4th Apr 2023 00:00am
4th Apr 2023 00:00am
Eternally grateful
Eternally grateful
It seems things are changing and I'm rolling out into the light, I'm beginning to accept who I am the light in me shines bright
Yes I'm not the man I was, now I'm a broken poet in a chair but it doesn't mean my life's over, I've got people that still care
People that I see often, some who call me every single day, some I've never met face to face, who live so far away
Each person sends me love, each of you play your part, giving me the strength to carry on, know you all live inside my heart
To you all I'm so grateful...
It seems things are changing and I'm rolling out into the light, I'm beginning to accept who I am the light in me shines bright
Yes I'm not the man I was, now I'm a broken poet in a chair but it doesn't mean my life's over, I've got people that still care
People that I see often, some who call me every single day, some I've never met face to face, who live so far away
Each person sends me love, each of you play your part, giving me the strength to carry on, know you all live inside my heart
To you all I'm so grateful...
#love
#friendship
#support
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Write-On
Poem Published
30th Mar 2023 1:58am
30th Mar 2023 1:58am
Because I hold it sleful to despond,
Because I hold it sleful to despond,
And will not let the bitterness of life Bilad me with
burning tears, but look beyond Its tumall and its
strife; Because I lift my head above the mist,
Where the sun sblues and the broad beccars
blow. By every ray and every rain-drop kissed That
God's love doth bestow;
Think you I find no bitterness at all, No burden to
be borne, like Christian's pack? Think you there
are no ready tears to fall Because I keep them
back?
Why should...
And will not let the bitterness of life Bilad me with
burning tears, but look beyond Its tumall and its
strife; Because I lift my head above the mist,
Where the sun sblues and the broad beccars
blow. By every ray and every rain-drop kissed That
God's love doth bestow;
Think you I find no bitterness at all, No burden to
be borne, like Christian's pack? Think you there
are no ready tears to fall Because I keep them
back?
Why should...
#love
#friendship
#support #admiration
#support #admiration
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Survi
Survi Sinha
Survi Sinha
Poem Published
28th Mar 2023 5:07am
28th Mar 2023 5:07am
Silent Pain
Behind closed doors, a secret resides,
Where love once thrived, now pain presides,
A silent victim, afraid to speak,
Her heart shattered, her body weak.
Her tears fall like rain, but no one sees,
The bruises hidden beneath her sleeves,
Her smile forced, her laughter fake,
A life she leads, that's hard to take.
He says he loves her, but she's not sure,
His words once sweet, now feel like a lure,
A trap that ensnares her, day by day,
A love that hurts, in every way.
She dreams of escape, but it's not easy,
The...
Where love once thrived, now pain presides,
A silent victim, afraid to speak,
Her heart shattered, her body weak.
Her tears fall like rain, but no one sees,
The bruises hidden beneath her sleeves,
Her smile forced, her laughter fake,
A life she leads, that's hard to take.
He says he loves her, but she's not sure,
His words once sweet, now feel like a lure,
A trap that ensnares her, day by day,
A love that hurts, in every way.
She dreams of escape, but it's not easy,
The...
#anger
#violence
#support
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
27th Mar 2023 8:34pm
27th Mar 2023 8:34pm
Power in my rhyme
Power in my rhyme
I send my words across the void, hoping they will touch your heart, sent to let you know your on my mind, even though we're far apart
Each stanza I send to you, is written as a rhyming hug, to make you feel safe and loved, it should fit you nice and snug
I hope each line wraps around you, like a security blanket in the night, bringing you much needed comfort, when thing's aren't going right
Each word sent across the void is to sent hopefully to make you smile, even if it doesn't work all the time, I'd settle for a while
...
I send my words across the void, hoping they will touch your heart, sent to let you know your on my mind, even though we're far apart
Each stanza I send to you, is written as a rhyming hug, to make you feel safe and loved, it should fit you nice and snug
I hope each line wraps around you, like a security blanket in the night, bringing you much needed comfort, when thing's aren't going right
Each word sent across the void is to sent hopefully to make you smile, even if it doesn't work all the time, I'd settle for a while
...
#kindness
#support
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6 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
13th Mar 2023 3:30am
13th Mar 2023 3:30am
The Glorious People
Arise, shine; for your light has come! And the glory of the Lord is risen upon you. For behold, the darkness shall cover the earth, and deep darkness the people; but the Lord will arise over you, and His glory will be seen upon you. The Gentiles shall come to your light, and kings to the brightness of your rising.” Isaiah 60:1-3.
We are made in His likeness and image. Each one, personally formed in our mother’s womb. Here the character of God is manifest in them.
“…the Holy Spirit form[s] the very character of God within. Then the outward religious actions will be the...
We are made in His likeness and image. Each one, personally formed in our mother’s womb. Here the character of God is manifest in them.
“…the Holy Spirit form[s] the very character of God within. Then the outward religious actions will be the...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#support
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Asani
Poem Published
8th Mar 2023 10:54pm
8th Mar 2023 10:54pm
Let’s talk about Love
I came not to call the righteous, but the sinners“ this line you would find in Matthew 9:13.
My understanding of this verse is that Jesus, the son of God was speaking to the Pharisees explaining to them why he choose sinners and wrongdoers to dine with.
J3ws believe that they are godlike, and being godlike, requires you to have a son or a messenger in his name. Being godlike means you create a powerful majestic being or things that are fueled by wrongs of sinners. In my opinion, Jesus represents Christianity. Christianity is the hub for attracting sinners and...
My understanding of this verse is that Jesus, the son of God was speaking to the Pharisees explaining to them why he choose sinners and wrongdoers to dine with.
J3ws believe that they are godlike, and being godlike, requires you to have a son or a messenger in his name. Being godlike means you create a powerful majestic being or things that are fueled by wrongs of sinners. In my opinion, Jesus represents Christianity. Christianity is the hub for attracting sinners and...
#happiness
#love
#ILoveYou
#gratitude
#support
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Nilknarfar
Poem Published
6th Mar 2023 7:23pm
6th Mar 2023 7:23pm
Bring your storm
Bring your skin to me
Breathe the life back into my pen
Cast the heavens down around me
To remind me I’m unafraid
Test my sense of wonder
And show reverence as I never waiver
Breathe the life back into my pen
Cast the heavens down around me
To remind me I’m unafraid
Test my sense of wonder
And show reverence as I never waiver
#love
#storm
#learning #support
#learning #support
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Ljdynamic
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2023 7:15pm
2nd Mar 2023 7:15pm
Revivified
It is better if you lie awake
then to visit any dream.
As you can recall,
they are currently nightmares.
The rising heat
keeps you bare-skinned.
Hand me your heart
I will untangle you
and bring back your fire.
You do not need to know how to travel.
You do not need to hide you are art.
Brought a boat for you.
The seas are calm
and we sway
with the ocean's journey.
Let us escape to a time
when you were once whole.
You were made perfect.
So unique that you were left hollow.
...
then to visit any dream.
As you can recall,
they are currently nightmares.
The rising heat
keeps you bare-skinned.
Hand me your heart
I will untangle you
and bring back your fire.
You do not need to know how to travel.
You do not need to hide you are art.
Brought a boat for you.
The seas are calm
and we sway
with the ocean's journey.
Let us escape to a time
when you were once whole.
You were made perfect.
So unique that you were left hollow.
...
#hope
#inspirational
#friendship #support
#friendship #support
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mel44
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2023 4:26pm
22nd Feb 2023 4:26pm
Holding Your Space
A sadness in you
I’m not meant to touch
tempest of pain
tightly to the chest you clutch
It’s alright my friend
I pass no judgement here
my place is not to mend you
that is for you my dear
Wishing I could calm you
that I might love you well
That I could know your truth
and promise not to tell
Witnessing your tears
wanting to assuage
sensing your discomfort
as they fall upon your page
In your darkness
that place where you rest
I can hold the space
but only as...
I’m not meant to touch
tempest of pain
tightly to the chest you clutch
It’s alright my friend
I pass no judgement here
my place is not to mend you
that is for you my dear
Wishing I could calm you
that I might love you well
That I could know your truth
and promise not to tell
Witnessing your tears
wanting to assuage
sensing your discomfort
as they fall upon your page
In your darkness
that place where you rest
I can hold the space
but only as...
#friendship
#support
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