Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
PAR
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:02pm
23rd Nov 2024 11:02pm
In the Dead of the Night
Intro:
In the dead of night, the cradle rocks.
Echoes in the shadows, ticking clocks.
Tiny hands reach out for air.
Chaos reigns, curly hair everywhere.
Rhyme 1:
Under the moonlight, whispers grow,
silent secrets only shadows know.
From the cradle to the rocking chair,
curly hair is everywhere.
Chorus:
Rock the cradle, feel the storm,
in the darkness love takes form.
Curly hair, wild and free,
a symbol of our destiny.
Rhyme 2:
Midnight cries break the silence....
In the dead of night, the cradle rocks.
Echoes in the shadows, ticking clocks.
Tiny hands reach out for air.
Chaos reigns, curly hair everywhere.
Rhyme 1:
Under the moonlight, whispers grow,
silent secrets only shadows know.
From the cradle to the rocking chair,
curly hair is everywhere.
Chorus:
Rock the cradle, feel the storm,
in the darkness love takes form.
Curly hair, wild and free,
a symbol of our destiny.
Rhyme 2:
Midnight cries break the silence....
#dance
#funny
#lyrics
#music
#sun
64 reads
6 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 5:06am
31st Dec 2024 5:06am
restless of flame
how that
sun seems
to reflect
on the
water like
bright
flowers,
its restless
of flame
discontented,
non-stopping
whimsy
purpose
and joy,
its
expressing
deep
purpose
filled
meaning.
sun seems
to reflect
on the
water like
bright
flowers,
its restless
of flame
discontented,
non-stopping
whimsy
purpose
and joy,
its
expressing
deep
purpose
filled
meaning.
#nature
#sea
#sky #sun
#sky #sun
50 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 7:05pm
15th Jan 2025 7:05pm
Mmm.. So Above, As Below
My love, do you feel the tenderness in the softness of my hands
Shh... you want to feel inside this while under my saucy command
The extension of your soul, wishes upon me, I have the flavor you strongly demand
Kissing all up in the soft folds of my nectar
Yeah baby... go on pollinate for this honey and make me wetter
Mm.. the creamier the better
Lifting your state of arousal for my carnal taking
Your body in a state of Nirvana as you lie under my care, ready and awaken
Bestowed ecstasies,...
Shh... you want to feel inside this while under my saucy command
The extension of your soul, wishes upon me, I have the flavor you strongly demand
Kissing all up in the soft folds of my nectar
Yeah baby... go on pollinate for this honey and make me wetter
Mm.. the creamier the better
Lifting your state of arousal for my carnal taking
Your body in a state of Nirvana as you lie under my care, ready and awaken
Bestowed ecstasies,...
#moon
#mythology
#spiritual
#sun
#water
199 reads
4 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
14th Sep 2024 6:50am
14th Sep 2024 6:50am
questions ???
a question
came to the
mind of darkness,
can I click a picture of light?
the moon also
expressed its thoughts,
can't the phases of the sun
also increase or decrease like me?
came to the
mind of darkness,
can I click a picture of light?
the moon also
expressed its thoughts,
can't the phases of the sun
also increase or decrease like me?
#moon
#sun
184 reads
11 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
19th Oct 2024 6:36am
19th Oct 2024 6:36am
F the Sun
Evil carcinogenic ball in the sky
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as...
I've a message for you: piss off and die
You promised to hide so we could have rain
yet on you blazed
bringing nothing but pain
Strut your radiant ass away and leave me alone
cool rainy days feel more like home
Your stupid solution
is to bring more pollution
well done i say
in the worst possible way
There's big trouble in the East
flooding and such
but would just one thunderstorm here
be asking too much?
In August I'm leaving
I know not where
but as long as...
#frustration
#rain
#sun
108 reads
8 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
7th Jul 2022 9:20pm
7th Jul 2022 9:20pm
Cloudy With A Chance Of Possibility
enough yesterdays
have rained this way ~ now breaking
clouds ~ let the sun through
have rained this way ~ now breaking
clouds ~ let the sun through
#sun
#rain
#nature
#senryu
#hope
617 reads
7 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2021 11:49pm
3rd Sep 2021 11:49pm
a real love story
today,
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
#love
#kindness
#sun
558 reads
14 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2020 9:16am
2nd Sep 2020 9:16am
Orange Popsicle
Visual poem
#sun
#winter
657 reads
18 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
5th Mar 2019 8:23pm
The Evolution of Creation
So He, the divine being,
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
(Who for millenniums and centuries has had different names)
Let loose his power with a clap of his hands,
And Bang!
He created a race of celestial giants across the cosmos.
And off they went, scattered transversely on His canvas,
The new universe.
But these titans of massive and epic proportions,
Some of gas, some of dust,
Went into conflict,
To conquer and claim
Their territories in the vast expanse.
And for millions and billions of years
They went to war.
Some of the gas giants would...
#earth
#sun
#universe
#stars
#evolution
829 reads
2 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
8th Jul 2023 3:48am
8th Jul 2023 3:48am
Sunbath for Sea Otters
Sunbath for Sea Otters
Sunbathing sea otters
Dream like arctic orphans
On glacial ice floes
Like angels on an ice cube
But in wingless reverie
When daydreams come and go
With the Alaskan tides
Not trapped for fashion
By tourists who take pictures
They nap in nature’s cool embrace
On melting islands
Of sunken mountains
Fleeting as snow
When the sun comes out
But lasting a summer afternoon
Where solar heated mammals sleep
Sunbathing sea otters
Dream like arctic orphans
On glacial ice floes
Like angels on an ice cube
But in wingless reverie
When daydreams come and go
With the Alaskan tides
Not trapped for fashion
By tourists who take pictures
They nap in nature’s cool embrace
On melting islands
Of sunken mountains
Fleeting as snow
When the sun comes out
But lasting a summer afternoon
Where solar heated mammals sleep
#dreams
#sea
#sun #animals
#sun #animals
178 reads
2 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
7th Jun 2020 9:34pm
7th Jun 2020 9:34pm
the midday sun burns brightest but midnight sun burns longest
Viz
#sun
#universe
#snow
741 reads
1 Comment
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
11th Aug 2022 10:09am
11th Aug 2022 10:09am
Summer haiku
The sun’s out to play.
And will make this sweaty gay
a little less gay.
And will make this sweaty gay
a little less gay.
#sun
#haiku
206 reads
1 Comment
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