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a real love story
today,
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
I laid in a
field
and let
the sun
touch
me,
caress
me
everywhere,
make me
his
paramore.
holding
me in
his arms,
whispering
sweetly in
my ear until
I was breathless:
I love
you,
I love
you,
I
love
you.
then warm,
satisfied,
I slept,
my soul
couldn't
cum
anymore.
Published 3rd Sep 2021
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2021 00:31am
Now THAT'S some poetry! ....
Whew!
Outstanding, bk
🌹
Whew!
Outstanding, bk
🌹
4th Sep 2021 00:57am
Hey. Whatever we can get. I never would want to pass a few good soulgasms.
hugs and shakey legs,
buddhakitty.
hugs and shakey legs,
buddhakitty.
4th Sep 2021 1:18am
Enjoyed thinking about the sun and how it relates to all of us, on a physical-mental-spiritual level.
In Japan, there's a literal sense of worshipping the sun.
I never thought I could relate to it this idea of the power of sunlight, being a person more acclimated to cool, shady stuff, but if you ever experience a rainy season that lasts from June to January (no kidding!), it gives you a whole new sense of how powerful the sun can be...
Enjoyed!
In Japan, there's a literal sense of worshipping the sun.
I never thought I could relate to it this idea of the power of sunlight, being a person more acclimated to cool, shady stuff, but if you ever experience a rainy season that lasts from June to January (no kidding!), it gives you a whole new sense of how powerful the sun can be...
Enjoyed!
4th Sep 2021 1:29am
4th Sep 2021 2:37am
4th Sep 2021 3:01am
4th Sep 2021 3:40am
Dear BK,
I don’t sit in the sun anymore but this poem reminded me of the days when I did and I remember the heat warming me up from inside out. The feeling was like an ethereal hug from head to toe.
Shivers of excitement. H🌷
I don’t sit in the sun anymore but this poem reminded me of the days when I did and I remember the heat warming me up from inside out. The feeling was like an ethereal hug from head to toe.
Shivers of excitement. H🌷
4th Sep 2021 7:21am
4th Sep 2021 6:29am
4th Sep 2021 8:36am
4th Sep 2021 1:29pm
4th Sep 2021 4:31pm
Thank you so much, InDreamz. Despite the last line, it was to reflect tenderness at its core.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
10th Oct 2021 5:19pm
10th Oct 2021 5:28pm
