Poems About the Sun by Top Critiquers
#sun
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 9:02pm
17th Nov 2024 9:02pm
You're in control
Standing on a wave in time
Distant silhouettes run through my mind
Messengers through a cloudy space
Darkness reflects onto my face
Maybe one day the sun will reflect a new vision
Walking towards the light is my decision
A warm glow on my soul,
beauty through my eyes
A new dream each day,
thankful to see a new sunrise
Distant silhouettes run through my mind
Messengers through a cloudy space
Darkness reflects onto my face
Maybe one day the sun will reflect a new vision
Walking towards the light is my decision
A warm glow on my soul,
beauty through my eyes
A new dream each day,
thankful to see a new sunrise
#dark
#happiness
#memories
#sun
#uplifting
80 reads
6 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 3:59am
19th Jun 2024 3:59am
Island Sunset
She’s got lustful eyes
Hiding behind an angel face
Gently rubbing her thighs
Tender skin softest lace
One night of seduction
Could last a lifetime
Pleasure the only function
For these partners in crime
Our bodies dance electric
Closer towards release
Flowing in divine metric
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
Hiding behind an angel face
Gently rubbing her thighs
Tender skin softest lace
One night of seduction
Could last a lifetime
Pleasure the only function
For these partners in crime
Our bodies dance electric
Closer towards release
Flowing in divine metric
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
#sun
285 reads
14 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
24th Feb 2021 11:55am
24th Feb 2021 11:55am
sunrise
restless morning betray me not
awakened to the day I pray one of beauty
inside my dreams, you saw me
eager to visit, I was awoken
the sun has yet to kiss the morn
I in a sleepy state greeted the wee hours
smiling at me from the clock on the nightstand
I thought surely it was too early
then the beautiful stillness of the day sway me
so I walk into the solemn corridors of the morning
watching in awe as the sun first touches the horizon
the night whispers I love you
two old lovers, she departs to her bed chamber
...
awakened to the day I pray one of beauty
inside my dreams, you saw me
eager to visit, I was awoken
the sun has yet to kiss the morn
I in a sleepy state greeted the wee hours
smiling at me from the clock on the nightstand
I thought surely it was too early
then the beautiful stillness of the day sway me
so I walk into the solemn corridors of the morning
watching in awe as the sun first touches the horizon
the night whispers I love you
two old lovers, she departs to her bed chamber
...
#love
#beauty
#sun #birds
#sun #birds
490 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 1:20pm
9th Jan 2025 1:20pm
Amongst the tree of life
Would you like to take a walk through the trees of life, for let's sit here as the morning mist rest upon the very, texture of our skin as it fills us with natures aviance of it's beauty. THAT grows far and beyond our own imagination as we are just running through and out the forest. For it's here in the morning of the dawn of transition, that we have been given a chance to enjoy this time of deep meditation, away from the negativity and drama and confusion and chaos of the world. 🌎 THAT we shall see the eclipse of the truth of the chaos, that has gone through society 😭 as it...
#evolution
#moon
#stars
#sun
#universe
50 reads
1 Comment
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
16th Jul 2023 7:34am
16th Jul 2023 7:34am
THROW THOSE CURTAINS WIDE
Throw those curtains wide,
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
let daylight inside,
lighten all the room,
chase away night gloom.
Let it shine on you,
be night-clothed or nue,
in its warmth bathe in
as it touches skin.
Feel the face of God
look upon your bod,
your soul deep into;
He created you.
Said, "Let there be light!":
then world came in sight.
On its face sprung life,
good without sin's strife.
Let that light of day
inspire you on way
lighting up your path
post-breakfast and...
#sun
#spiritual
#dawn
236 reads
4 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:22pm
5th Jan 2025 11:22pm
Sol
The morning sun took my shadow for a walk.
It flowed over concrete,cars and grass.
Sometimes playing hide and seek with much larger shadows or stopping when I stopped to greet a friend and chat to its own shadow buddy.
Most times it was by my side,a trusted friend.
Quite often though it would be up front hoping to get to the cafe first before the other shadows did.
Or it would be loitering behind me, a truculent toddler in search of its tantrum.
Everyone has shadows.
Some can't find the sun.
It flowed over concrete,cars and grass.
Sometimes playing hide and seek with much larger shadows or stopping when I stopped to greet a friend and chat to its own shadow buddy.
Most times it was by my side,a trusted friend.
Quite often though it would be up front hoping to get to the cafe first before the other shadows did.
Or it would be loitering behind me, a truculent toddler in search of its tantrum.
Everyone has shadows.
Some can't find the sun.
#shadows
#sun
48 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Jan 2023 3:54pm
29th Jan 2023 3:54pm
Whispers through Sunlight
Art
My art
Self
Painter
Modern Art
Contemporary Art
Whispers through Sunlight
My art
Self
Painter
Modern Art
Contemporary Art
Whispers through Sunlight
#beauty
#sun
#TruthOfLife
#art
#philosophical
412 reads
32 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
30th Nov 2024 8:34pm
30th Nov 2024 8:34pm
Secret Magic Sight
The stark ivory glisten is like
islands of broken diamonds.
Smashed sparkling beauty,
It became her retina's duty
To behold an acutely bright,
angelic ray of light.
She needed that sign.
That he was still there,
just beyond alive.
Or was it hazy sun drugged on peace?
The ambience of mixtures of light,
becomes our secret magic sight.
islands of broken diamonds.
Smashed sparkling beauty,
It became her retina's duty
To behold an acutely bright,
angelic ray of light.
She needed that sign.
That he was still there,
just beyond alive.
Or was it hazy sun drugged on peace?
The ambience of mixtures of light,
becomes our secret magic sight.
#SelfDiscovery
#sun
89 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
21st Dec 2019 4:50pm
21st Dec 2019 4:50pm
Releasing the Light
It is our light not our darkness
that most frightens us.'
We lit the candles of our Spirit—
not under a bushel of ancient secrets
digging as moles in sunken basements;
but, a cavernous gateway to acceptance
Trimmed the wicks of our heart
to observe Love blaze brighter
from this darkest eve of Winter
Allowed flames to alight memory—
fill our dark soul of night
with fresh perspectives in truth
Felt bygone...
that most frightens us.'
We lit the candles of our Spirit—
not under a bushel of ancient secrets
digging as moles in sunken basements;
but, a cavernous gateway to acceptance
Trimmed the wicks of our heart
to observe Love blaze brighter
from this darkest eve of Winter
Allowed flames to alight memory—
fill our dark soul of night
with fresh perspectives in truth
Felt bygone...
#dark
#sun
#winter
#nature
#humankind
1200 reads
39 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 12:53pm
5th Nov 2023 12:53pm
totally eclipsed...
it was a weekend with a dual purpose
to watch sun disappear behind moon
and a chance for me to get away from the mundane
go on an adventure
let my hair down & have a little fun
Willow style...submerged in nature
and I did
exploring monuments & caves
taking in incredible landscapes
Black Hills backdrop to a cerulean sky
it was there I lost the thread of the trip
having a moment most unexpected
witnessing the spirit of man
in breathtaking granite
as the world continued to move around me
I stood in silence ...
to watch sun disappear behind moon
and a chance for me to get away from the mundane
go on an adventure
let my hair down & have a little fun
Willow style...submerged in nature
and I did
exploring monuments & caves
taking in incredible landscapes
Black Hills backdrop to a cerulean sky
it was there I lost the thread of the trip
having a moment most unexpected
witnessing the spirit of man
in breathtaking granite
as the world continued to move around me
I stood in silence ...
#beauty
#sun
#moon #mountains
#moon #mountains
147 reads
9 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
14th Oct 2024 00:14am
14th Oct 2024 00:14am
Sol
It's the hardest part of the sledge,
with little in between,
wielding on the wedge
splitting the evergreen.
It's solar power we devour
to burn for cozy nights
and solar flares by the hour
for Northern Light delights.
I feel the swing at my core
with every downward blow
knowing chlorophyll is making more
with wild stellar glow...
smashing those numberless atoms,
in fusion overload,
processed through globular stratums...
the laws of nature goad. ⚛️
with little in between,
wielding on the wedge
splitting the evergreen.
It's solar power we devour
to burn for cozy nights
and solar flares by the hour
for Northern Light delights.
I feel the swing at my core
with every downward blow
knowing chlorophyll is making more
with wild stellar glow...
smashing those numberless atoms,
in fusion overload,
processed through globular stratums...
the laws of nature goad. ⚛️
#sun
104 reads
6 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 2:25pm
27th Dec 2024 2:25pm
~some night of a traversing highway chaos
the sweltering december hotness sun
consumes gritty astringent skinnish salts
in enormous gulping hunger of a famine
vacuuming emptiness, a fuming depression
of a puckering in sizzling hot desert, rises in
a rotting stench of bled out moulted maroons
scattered as a modern streaked out flash art
sprinkled with the sweaty deltaic tidal waves
in craving wide open rafflesia blooms in scents
of a pickled inner vascular.. severed as tidbits
..screams of an unquenchable insane violence
in firing passion burns to the...
consumes gritty astringent skinnish salts
in enormous gulping hunger of a famine
vacuuming emptiness, a fuming depression
of a puckering in sizzling hot desert, rises in
a rotting stench of bled out moulted maroons
scattered as a modern streaked out flash art
sprinkled with the sweaty deltaic tidal waves
in craving wide open rafflesia blooms in scents
of a pickled inner vascular.. severed as tidbits
..screams of an unquenchable insane violence
in firing passion burns to the...
#love
#night
#rain
#sensual
#sun
114 reads
4 Comments
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