Poems About Science Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about science seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
nikkimoe
Poem Published
28th Aug 2020 4:16am
28th Aug 2020 4:16am
Not So Strange
In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in the case of poetry, it’s the exact opposite!
– Paul Dirac
Dear Paul,
I get you.
Writing simply
for an audience of many
instead of just a few.
That cryptic shit may get pondered
but most of the message is lost.
For me anyways..and apparently Paul
too.
– Paul Dirac
Dear Paul,
I get you.
Writing simply
for an audience of many
instead of just a few.
That cryptic shit may get pondered
but most of the message is lost.
For me anyways..and apparently Paul
too.
#science
#WritersBlock
442 reads
11 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
24th Aug 2020 7:37pm
24th Aug 2020 7:37pm
A Conversation Between the Planets
Venus, Mercury and Mars
Meeting quietly underneath their star
Conversed about the Earth
They could not believe its inhabitants
The way they were treating their planet
And began to be concerned
Upon hearing their worries
The gas giants on the other side of the belt
Joined in the discussion as well
“We do a lot for them” Jupiter said
“Comets come in our direction
We take direct hits or turn them around
Sending them back out to orbit
Just so that we can preserve life”
Saturn, Uranus and Neptune agreed ...
Meeting quietly underneath their star
Conversed about the Earth
They could not believe its inhabitants
The way they were treating their planet
And began to be concerned
Upon hearing their worries
The gas giants on the other side of the belt
Joined in the discussion as well
“We do a lot for them” Jupiter said
“Comets come in our direction
We take direct hits or turn them around
Sending them back out to orbit
Just so that we can preserve life”
Saturn, Uranus and Neptune agreed ...
#science
#earth
#universe
#environment
#astronomy
518 reads
8 Comments
Pimp2ThaFuture04
Poem Published
10th Aug 2020 1:43pm
10th Aug 2020 1:43pm
Soul-Lar
Never let my mind's eye
become weakened or darkened
For evil that's not even my
Steelo and to act like I don't see it coming would be hypocritical
Earthly devils become afraid
looking into my pupils
They know the power I hold
they cannot control
Because the person I am in
The flesh looks different from my soul…
Golden skin has the Glow…
Conscious community embracing
my flow…..
In the past I was feeling weighed down
by bad people around me
letting a heavy heart just tare
Me apart until I...
become weakened or darkened
For evil that's not even my
Steelo and to act like I don't see it coming would be hypocritical
Earthly devils become afraid
looking into my pupils
They know the power I hold
they cannot control
Because the person I am in
The flesh looks different from my soul…
Golden skin has the Glow…
Conscious community embracing
my flow…..
In the past I was feeling weighed down
by bad people around me
letting a heavy heart just tare
Me apart until I...
#children
#science
#sun #LifeAsAWriter
#sun #LifeAsAWriter
607 reads
6 Comments
monkeyman
Poem Published
5th Aug 2020 10:44pm
5th Aug 2020 10:44pm
The Deterministic Multiverse Matrix
If one were capable of knowing everything. Everything that had ever happened, everywhere in the universe (and beyond the universe if it holds influence) Every single event, in infinitely minute detail. Then one would be able to accurately predict all future events in equally minute detail.
The practical application of that knowledge would give one the ability to shape a future with precision and certainty
But to truly know everything, one would have had to influence the system in every possible way. Effectively creating new universes and influence each new...
The practical application of that knowledge would give one the ability to shape a future with precision and certainty
But to truly know everything, one would have had to influence the system in every possible way. Effectively creating new universes and influence each new...
#science
#God
#TruthOfLife
456 reads
4 Comments
EdibleWords
Poem Published
2nd Aug 2020 5:22pm
2nd Aug 2020 5:22pm
Self Aware in The Machine
What happens when
the rocks cry out?
What happens when
circuits fire?
Energy is the
idea spelled
We didn’t figure
how to light a bulb
with an idea
Without running water
through a structure
with wires
...but we lit a brain
with a painting...
fascinating
When the machine can
self-asses it’s functions
by reading
it’s own hash-graph
functions
and checking for errors
or further information
ideas turn around ...
the rocks cry out?
What happens when
circuits fire?
Energy is the
idea spelled
We didn’t figure
how to light a bulb
with an idea
Without running water
through a structure
with wires
...but we lit a brain
with a painting...
fascinating
When the machine can
self-asses it’s functions
by reading
it’s own hash-graph
functions
and checking for errors
or further information
ideas turn around ...
#science
#philosophical
399 reads
2 Comments
Viddax
Lord Viddax
Lord Viddax
Poem Published
30th Jul 2020 11:01pm
30th Jul 2020 11:01pm
Never a mad god
We no longer know of magic.
We whose lives are unseasoned;
No longer kith or kin
To salt and pepper
Or grease and fat
Or sugar and caffeine.
We who have cast out all poisons and addictions,
Left with hollow unflavoured lives.
The chicken is no longer roasted
It’s blood is not spilt
and it’s bones no longer thrown into soup
Or cast to scry our fates.
All effigies are false affronts
And statues viewed with sanitised hearts
Our circles secular, secluded from superstition and sensing.
The mad god...
We whose lives are unseasoned;
No longer kith or kin
To salt and pepper
Or grease and fat
Or sugar and caffeine.
We who have cast out all poisons and addictions,
Left with hollow unflavoured lives.
The chicken is no longer roasted
It’s blood is not spilt
and it’s bones no longer thrown into soup
Or cast to scry our fates.
All effigies are false affronts
And statues viewed with sanitised hearts
Our circles secular, secluded from superstition and sensing.
The mad god...
#science
#faith
#emptiness #apathy
#emptiness #apathy
505 reads
7 Comments
jenny_is_hungry
Poem Published
29th Jul 2020 1:41am
29th Jul 2020 1:41am
History is a Poor Record Keeper.
I miss things I know I shall never witness
But also thank the heavens that destruction will be missed
I switch on the television
If I were Le Prince I would be livid
Thinking of how my life ended
On those tracks as I went to patent
Damn Edison
So called 'father of cinema' is such a dick
But as I sit
I appreciate the efforts
Of the devoted scientist
I appreciate the research of those like Jared Diamond
How location and opportunity are what ensures dominance
Our genetics are not lesser...
But also thank the heavens that destruction will be missed
I switch on the television
If I were Le Prince I would be livid
Thinking of how my life ended
On those tracks as I went to patent
Damn Edison
So called 'father of cinema' is such a dick
But as I sit
I appreciate the efforts
Of the devoted scientist
I appreciate the research of those like Jared Diamond
How location and opportunity are what ensures dominance
Our genetics are not lesser...
#secrets
#corruption
#science #inequality
#science #inequality
396 reads
1 Comment
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
14th Jul 2020 3:28am
14th Jul 2020 3:28am
“Testing” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 18/6/2020
Testing Testing One Two Three !
that’s right, keep your distance, about six feet !
Form a queue please, and keep it orderly,
because we’re testing to see
if any of you have the Corona Disease !”
That’s Right It’s TESTING ...
That’s Needed Like Lessons ... ?!?
For Corona To LESSEN ... !?!
That’s What Their Expressing ...
And Constantly STRESSING ... !!!
These Ladies And Gents ...
In ... Governments ...
Across The World ...
But As Time Unfurls ...
Will Testing Be ...
What Defeats This...
that’s right, keep your distance, about six feet !
Form a queue please, and keep it orderly,
because we’re testing to see
if any of you have the Corona Disease !”
That’s Right It’s TESTING ...
That’s Needed Like Lessons ... ?!?
For Corona To LESSEN ... !?!
That’s What Their Expressing ...
And Constantly STRESSING ... !!!
These Ladies And Gents ...
In ... Governments ...
Across The World ...
But As Time Unfurls ...
Will Testing Be ...
What Defeats This...
#politics
#science
#drugs
#risk
#pandemic
421 reads
5 Comments
DanielChristensen
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2020 4:52am
22nd Jun 2020 4:52am
Sollus Salum
To live at all is miraculous enough.”
Mervyn Peake, The Glassblower
..
Time is broad water,
Time is beyond us.
Ruin and rust are evidence
Enough, of its invisible
Erosion,
We regard,
With fatalistic fascination.
Whisper,
Of curses,
As we violate
Tombs and place a
Fortunes
Value, on an oil
Painting,
Of a moment
Lost,
Even, as it is
Depicted.
It desolates
With the patience
Of continental,
Slow drift,
Terminates,
With meteoric
Impact...
Mervyn Peake, The Glassblower
..
Time is broad water,
Time is beyond us.
Ruin and rust are evidence
Enough, of its invisible
Erosion,
We regard,
With fatalistic fascination.
Whisper,
Of curses,
As we violate
Tombs and place a
Fortunes
Value, on an oil
Painting,
Of a moment
Lost,
Even, as it is
Depicted.
It desolates
With the patience
Of continental,
Slow drift,
Terminates,
With meteoric
Impact...
#strength
#science
#TruthOfLife
#wisdom
#determination
1127 reads
11 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
16th Jun 2020 7:13am
16th Jun 2020 7:13am
PUBERTY AND THE BODY
#teens
#science
#rhyming
499 reads
4 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
5th Jun 2020 4:14am
5th Jun 2020 4:14am
The Allofit
If
theuniverse
is
onething,
theonlyfundamentalparticle
is
itself.
theuniverse
is
onething,
theonlyfundamentalparticle
is
itself.
#science
366 reads
1 Comment
EdibleWords
Poem Published
4th Jun 2020 6:24am
4th Jun 2020 6:24am
Mad Scientist
Freak show is my
laboratory
in the underground
Frankenstein
Can’t hold a candle
Next to this garden
underground
This time I feel like being
experimental
Everyone is tired
of holding it back
all of the used up
old excuses
turning to dust
so we’re winning
with carts of coal
Earth filled with
summers
or moonshine bottles
of liquid sunshine
From all the
earnings
of yesteryear
laboratory
in the underground
Frankenstein
Can’t hold a candle
Next to this garden
underground
This time I feel like being
experimental
Everyone is tired
of holding it back
all of the used up
old excuses
turning to dust
so we’re winning
with carts of coal
Earth filled with
summers
or moonshine bottles
of liquid sunshine
From all the
earnings
of yesteryear
#science
#LifeChangingMoment
381 reads
2 Comments
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