Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 7:12pm
14th Jun 2024 7:12pm
Last Day Of School
#abuse
#bullying
#revenge
#school
#teens
138 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th May 2024 9:00pm
28th May 2024 9:00pm
It Really Was Peter's Idea
Hazel stepped into the classroom.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
It really was Peter's idea.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
It really was Peter's idea.
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#school
#sensual
217 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th May 2024 11:27am
28th May 2024 11:27am
From The Duckling To The Swan
There was this
one girl back in high school
who was such a nerd but lets herself
to dare to dream of a way to make it all go
away which happened when we met her
in college and... now... is
so red hot.
one girl back in high school
who was such a nerd but lets herself
to dare to dream of a way to make it all go
away which happened when we met her
in college and... now... is
so red hot.
#dialogue
#fiction
#healing
#school
#suffering
185 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
25th May 2024 11:16am
25th May 2024 11:16am
Under Pressure
One time when I was in summer camp
I was talking to this guy about suicide
He told me about this kid he used to go to school with
The kid was a straight "A" student
His parents told him not to bother coming home if he had anything less
One day they were walking home from school and he said he had gotten a "B"
He said, "My parents are going to kill me"
My friend said, "No way, relax!"
The kid said that he had to go
My friend said, "See ya later"
Later that day the kid jumped off the roof of his...
I was talking to this guy about suicide
He told me about this kid he used to go to school with
The kid was a straight "A" student
His parents told him not to bother coming home if he had anything less
One day they were walking home from school and he said he had gotten a "B"
He said, "My parents are going to kill me"
My friend said, "No way, relax!"
The kid said that he had to go
My friend said, "See ya later"
Later that day the kid jumped off the roof of his...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#nonfiction
#school
#suicide
254 reads
6 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
24th May 2024 5:21am
24th May 2024 5:21am
Nobody Cares That You Were Chased by a Donkey in Sardinia
She was probably rehearsing telling the story
as the event was happening
something about a donkey
persisntely rubbing up against her
which caused the other four teachers
at our last day of school happy hour
to ask why
Why would a donkey do that?
Eww.
I think he liked you, liked you
I quip
as I dip a chip into the cruelly fiery salsa
at the Mexican restaurant
in one of the most Mexican parts of town
now I'm being mildly pathetic
playing up my ethnic experience.
I was running so fast my heart rate...
as the event was happening
something about a donkey
persisntely rubbing up against her
which caused the other four teachers
at our last day of school happy hour
to ask why
Why would a donkey do that?
Eww.
I think he liked you, liked you
I quip
as I dip a chip into the cruelly fiery salsa
at the Mexican restaurant
in one of the most Mexican parts of town
now I'm being mildly pathetic
playing up my ethnic experience.
I was running so fast my heart rate...
#animals
#school
#travel
190 reads
7 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th May 2024 3:21pm
20th May 2024 3:21pm
Keep Yourself As Still As Possible
Don't move, Brittany. Just keep yourself
as still as possible. And don't
worry. Josh will be here to
strip down and take your place
soon. Hello, Class... and
welcome to our
nude model
studies
course.
as still as possible. And don't
worry. Josh will be here to
strip down and take your place
soon. Hello, Class... and
welcome to our
nude model
studies
course.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#school
#sensual
216 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 9:50pm
13th Apr 2024 9:50pm
I'm Kind Of Busy Right Now
Melanie called Simon and asked him to
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
169 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 3:40am
10th Apr 2024 3:40am
The One Type Of Classroom Dream
Holly walked to the blackboard.
Then, her teacher shouted "SHE IS NAKED!"
That made Holly wake up.
Then, her teacher shouted "SHE IS NAKED!"
That made Holly wake up.
#friendship
#dreams
#school
#fiction
#sensual
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 00:07am
9th Apr 2024 00:07am
Girl Just Wanted to Have Fun
The teacher always told her not to stand up on the swing but she always did it anyway.
I hated her guts because she always used to chase me home from school, pull my hair and try to kiss me.
She was huge and ghastly.
She scared the shit out of me.
One day at lunch she was doing her standing on the swing stunt, while the sound of Cyndi Lauper filled the air from a shitty cassette deck radio near by.
She was singing along to "Girls Just Wanna Have Fun" when she fell off and ate the ground so hard!
It still makes me cringe and laugh thinking about it now....
I hated her guts because she always used to chase me home from school, pull my hair and try to kiss me.
She was huge and ghastly.
She scared the shit out of me.
One day at lunch she was doing her standing on the swing stunt, while the sound of Cyndi Lauper filled the air from a shitty cassette deck radio near by.
She was singing along to "Girls Just Wanna Have Fun" when she fell off and ate the ground so hard!
It still makes me cringe and laugh thinking about it now....
#childhood
#school
#funny
#acceptance
#nonfiction
196 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Mar 2024 10:12am
21st Mar 2024 10:12am
Kiss Them Goodbye
#violence
#death
#school
#fire
#God
161 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Mar 2024 9:44am
16th Mar 2024 9:44am
Live For Today
My 30th year reunion is coming real soon
Majority I went to high school with are dead
Reminds me of some after school special, I presume
I can be next before this reunion transpires
Phlegmatic, I never was
Stress I carry in my jaw, my ass is on fire
A chemical relationship I had with my friends
Most of those goons have departed
They’d often asphyxiate me similar to The Bends
Domestic violence occurred often
Love was a fist in their lives
Now you see why their all in coffins
Screw the event, I'm going out to...
Majority I went to high school with are dead
Reminds me of some after school special, I presume
I can be next before this reunion transpires
Phlegmatic, I never was
Stress I carry in my jaw, my ass is on fire
A chemical relationship I had with my friends
Most of those goons have departed
They’d often asphyxiate me similar to The Bends
Domestic violence occurred often
Love was a fist in their lives
Now you see why their all in coffins
Screw the event, I'm going out to...
#motivational
#school
#rhyming
#MovingOn
#choices
212 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Mar 2024 7:43pm
12th Mar 2024 7:43pm
Oh, God! Please Don't Make Her Embarrass Me!
Suzanne
took a deep
breath, dropped
her robe and sat on
the stool before she
saw her mom being
one of
the art class
students.
took a deep
breath, dropped
her robe and sat on
the stool before she
saw her mom being
one of
the art class
students.
#mother
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
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