Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
#school
Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:38am
Yesterday 1:38am
That Was Then. This Is Now.
At first, nobody liked Betty.
She was nothing more than a nerd.
But that was high school.
We saw her at Roger's bachelor party.
She looked so hot in that dress.
She was nothing more than a nerd.
But that was high school.
We saw her at Roger's bachelor party.
She looked so hot in that dress.
#beauty
#fiction
#nostalgia
#school
#seductive
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 1:43pm
21st Mar 2025 1:43pm
If My Mom And Dad Find Out
Only you and I should know that I'm
posing nude for Hustler, Sydney.
If my mom and dad find out
about it, they'll come here
to Baldwin Wallace
and drag me back
to Scottsdale
by the
hair.
posing nude for Hustler, Sydney.
If my mom and dad find out
about it, they'll come here
to Baldwin Wallace
and drag me back
to Scottsdale
by the
hair.
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#school
#sex
102 reads
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Pinkdreams
Poem Published
20th Mar 2025 2:45am
20th Mar 2025 2:45am
When Worlds Collide
Her world
at that moment
was her friends;
their animated conversation,
the joy of movement,
perhaps too,
somewhere,
thoughts of unfinished homework
an unreciprocated crush,
her parents' marriage or divorce,
maybe some musical artist I don't know the name of.
My world
at that moment
was begrudged playground duty
Wondering how I was going to get copies made,
when my prep time had been cancelled all week
And more immediately,
guessing the airline
of a plane flying overhead.
...
at that moment
was her friends;
their animated conversation,
the joy of movement,
perhaps too,
somewhere,
thoughts of unfinished homework
an unreciprocated crush,
her parents' marriage or divorce,
maybe some musical artist I don't know the name of.
My world
at that moment
was begrudged playground duty
Wondering how I was going to get copies made,
when my prep time had been cancelled all week
And more immediately,
guessing the airline
of a plane flying overhead.
...
#LifeStruggles
#school
102 reads
9 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
24th Feb 2025 2:21pm
24th Feb 2025 2:21pm
What She Did In Front Of An Art School Class
Marina stepped into the classroom.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
She gave Scott a smile.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
She gave Scott a smile.
#art
#fiction
#lover
#school
#sex
155 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Feb 2025 2:57pm
11th Feb 2025 2:57pm
The Shoe Is On The Other Foot
Is
there one
thing about
me that you like?
Maybe it's the fact
that I'm not that chubby
bookworm that you made fun of
back when we were in high school. I
see that time has not been kind to you
as well. The shoe is on the other foot.
there one
thing about
me that you like?
Maybe it's the fact
that I'm not that chubby
bookworm that you made fun of
back when we were in high school. I
see that time has not been kind to you
as well. The shoe is on the other foot.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#nostalgia
#school
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 10:10am
23rd Jan 2025 10:10am
The Teaching Task
Lockdown over, I had to head to school
my pupils waiting to learn the golden rule
I got ready and put on that mask
following the health protocols is a must
How would I each word articulate?
and those whole lessons explicate!
***
Principals in their towers have their say
and teachers, Skills For Life, have to convey
So eager to see my pupils and join the classroom
no time to spend with colleagues in the teachers room
Just virtual wishes.. Love and hugs
and the joy of all the social media tags.
***
I...
my pupils waiting to learn the golden rule
I got ready and put on that mask
following the health protocols is a must
How would I each word articulate?
and those whole lessons explicate!
***
Principals in their towers have their say
and teachers, Skills For Life, have to convey
So eager to see my pupils and join the classroom
no time to spend with colleagues in the teachers room
Just virtual wishes.. Love and hugs
and the joy of all the social media tags.
***
I...
#gratitude
#hope
#pandemic
#school
#strength
89 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 8:40pm
9th Jan 2025 8:40pm
A Certain Daydream In The Library
Rob stepped into the
library and saw Ms. Cross
smiling and stripping in there.
After walking to
the guy and laid his hands on
her chest, Rob blinks and she's gone.
library and saw Ms. Cross
smiling and stripping in there.
After walking to
the guy and laid his hands on
her chest, Rob blinks and she's gone.
#corruption
#dreams
#fiction
#school
#sex
147 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 3:22am
28th Dec 2024 3:22am
Are We All Ready For Some Real Sex Ed?
Shannon's found in the classroom.
She's stripped and tied to a chair.
Ms. Lander is behind her.
She's stripped and tied to a chair.
Ms. Lander is behind her.
#BDSM
#fiction
#school
#sex
#teens
233 reads
0 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 9:04pm
1st Dec 2024 9:04pm
Mid six week summer break
I wake, early,
to the dawn chorus coda, an oriole calling as a flute,
while I lay on my pillow,
an ivory mountain.
It’s August, middle of the six week schooling break,
and the day’s horizon shimmer beckons with sweet breath.
I follow the stream, where Kingfishers glide,
and dragonflies ply the sparkling water lanes.
to the dawn chorus coda, an oriole calling as a flute,
while I lay on my pillow,
an ivory mountain.
It’s August, middle of the six week schooling break,
and the day’s horizon shimmer beckons with sweet breath.
I follow the stream, where Kingfishers glide,
and dragonflies ply the sparkling water lanes.
#memories
#nostalgia
#school #summer
#school #summer
105 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 1:43pm
22nd Nov 2024 1:43pm
Before My Mom And Older Sister Come To Visit Me
Get
done with
humping me
and quick! You need
to get your naked
butt dressed and out of here
before my mom and older
sister come to visit me here
at the dorm! And please do not get me
started on how my dad embarrasses me!
done with
humping me
and quick! You need
to get your naked
butt dressed and out of here
before my mom and older
sister come to visit me here
at the dorm! And please do not get me
started on how my dad embarrasses me!
#dialogue
#family
#fiction
#school
#sex
148 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 7:06pm
20th Nov 2024 7:06pm
The Coming
Yelling cursing, noise level terror
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't speak
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't speak
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
#abuse
#DomesticViolence
#home
#metaphor
#school
114 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
One Nervous Teenager
He would go to those dances
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
#dance
#dating
#fiction
#school
#ShortStory
112 reads
6 Comments
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