Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
#school
Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Kiss Them Goodbye
#violence
#death
#school
#fire
#God
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Live For Today
My 30th year reunion is coming real soon
Majority I went to high school with are dead
Reminds me of some after school special, I presume
I can be next before this reunion transpires
Phlegmatic, I never was
Stress I carry in my jaw, my ass is on fire
A chemical relationship I had with my friends
Most of those goons have departed
They’d often asphyxiate me similar to The Bends
Domestic violence occurred often
Love was a fist in their lives
Now you see why their all in coffins
Screw the event, I'm going out to...
Majority I went to high school with are dead
Reminds me of some after school special, I presume
I can be next before this reunion transpires
Phlegmatic, I never was
Stress I carry in my jaw, my ass is on fire
A chemical relationship I had with my friends
Most of those goons have departed
They’d often asphyxiate me similar to The Bends
Domestic violence occurred often
Love was a fist in their lives
Now you see why their all in coffins
Screw the event, I'm going out to...
#motivational
#school
#rhyming
#MovingOn
#choices
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Oh, God! Please Don't Make Her Embarrass Me!
Suzanne
took a deep
breath, dropped
her robe and sat on
the stool before she
saw her mom being
one of
the art class
students.
took a deep
breath, dropped
her robe and sat on
the stool before she
saw her mom being
one of
the art class
students.
#mother
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
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Of Empathy And Authenticity You Stand As A Beacon
What is to be a teacher like?
Is it to learn by heart the golden rules
use the most recent methods and tools
Lesson plans devise
constructive feedbacks provide
or on subject matters have to so much know
adapt teaching theories to have minds grow
Would all that simply suffice
to knowledge and values impart
mentor minds
hug hearts
to goals guide
and of teaching make an art
Of amazing special teachers I know one
her inner Beauty for me second to none
Mrs Jaoued, my teacher, Madam, my Lady
You I admire for...
Is it to learn by heart the golden rules
use the most recent methods and tools
Lesson plans devise
constructive feedbacks provide
or on subject matters have to so much know
adapt teaching theories to have minds grow
Would all that simply suffice
to knowledge and values impart
mentor minds
hug hearts
to goals guide
and of teaching make an art
Of amazing special teachers I know one
her inner Beauty for me second to none
Mrs Jaoued, my teacher, Madam, my Lady
You I admire for...
#school
#humankind
#WritingPoetry
#gratitude
#admiration
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San Vernando Valley Circa 1982
Take a chill pill butt-face
Even though your hella buff,
Rick, you look more like a wannabe
That freakazoid is ralphing all over her shoes
Big Whoop, Crissy’s a foodie and a wasteoid
No duh. I knew Jenn was like a gazillionaire.
She vegged out all day, hanging out with Chris, getting high.
Doug is a bodacious surfer.
He tells everyone to eat his shorts,
when people are criticizing his tubular moves
Brad is so grody. His bod though isn’t as gnarly as Ken’s.
Barf me out. Gag me with a spoon. Let’s motor outta here. ...
Even though your hella buff,
Rick, you look more like a wannabe
That freakazoid is ralphing all over her shoes
Big Whoop, Crissy’s a foodie and a wasteoid
No duh. I knew Jenn was like a gazillionaire.
She vegged out all day, hanging out with Chris, getting high.
Doug is a bodacious surfer.
He tells everyone to eat his shorts,
when people are criticizing his tubular moves
Brad is so grody. His bod though isn’t as gnarly as Ken’s.
Barf me out. Gag me with a spoon. Let’s motor outta here. ...
#teens
#school
#nostalgia
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fear of being in trouble at school ran pretty deep
under the bedclothes I’d play with my imaginary friends and, fearing tomorrow, and hoping this night never ends, I’d fall asleep
#school
#PopCulture
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Seniors
Eleven years make them
One year can break them
They face the challenge
With strong minds
For they have stood
The test of time
They hold the future
In the palms of thier hands
They will change it
If they can
Some will laugh
Some will cry
They all Walk down the aisle
With a gleam in their eye
One year can break them
They face the challenge
With strong minds
For they have stood
The test of time
They hold the future
In the palms of thier hands
They will change it
If they can
Some will laugh
Some will cry
They all Walk down the aisle
With a gleam in their eye
#school
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Susan Had Already Picked Him Up
Diana was told by Eric's school
that their next door neighbor Susan
had already picked him up.
After that, Diana
went to Susan's house
and saw with shocked
eyes her son
hump that
pal.
that their next door neighbor Susan
had already picked him up.
After that, Diana
went to Susan's house
and saw with shocked
eyes her son
hump that
pal.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#sensual
#son
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Too many
I have had plenty of many moms,
some witches, which is not that bad,
many hags, who had made me sad.
So many moms so little differences...
Some such bad opinions to share,
some much good ideas to spare.
I can recognize them with a glare.
I can sort them by a simple affair.
I spot all of them here and there.
Waiting at my classroom door...
Trying to read my thoughts.
Aiming to reach me in a hunt.
Moms should never get close
to their children teachers, ever!
Our planets are too far away...
some witches, which is not that bad,
many hags, who had made me sad.
So many moms so little differences...
Some such bad opinions to share,
some much good ideas to spare.
I can recognize them with a glare.
I can sort them by a simple affair.
I spot all of them here and there.
Waiting at my classroom door...
Trying to read my thoughts.
Aiming to reach me in a hunt.
Moms should never get close
to their children teachers, ever!
Our planets are too far away...
#mother
#children
#science
#school
#astronomy
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With Eyes As Wide As His Were
Jeff
walked in
and said that
he was sorry
for being late for
art class before he saw
that the day's nude subject was
his fiancé Farrah and she... in
turn... spotted Jeff with eyes as wide as
his were at that moment on a Sunday.
walked in
and said that
he was sorry
for being late for
art class before he saw
that the day's nude subject was
his fiancé Farrah and she... in
turn... spotted Jeff with eyes as wide as
his were at that moment on a Sunday.
#relationships
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
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What Scott Must Have Been Last Night
Drunk happens to be what Scott must have been last
night when he saw the librarian Ms. Saunders
and suddenly remembered doing something
with her on a stage at the one local strip club.
night when he saw the librarian Ms. Saunders
and suddenly remembered doing something
with her on a stage at the one local strip club.
#corruption
#school
#fiction
#memories
#sensual
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What She Got Talked Into Doing In Art Class
Nancy was found in
the classroom topless
and in front of her
friends assigned to do
a nude chick portrait.
the classroom topless
and in front of her
friends assigned to do
a nude chick portrait.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#art
#sensual
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