Poems About School Seeking Honest Critique
#school
Poems about school seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Threading the Needle
Spelling bees challenging
third grade dictionary habits for glee's.
Letting go of all my conspiracy theories.
Listening to the voice of my trees.
Which came from the deep dark
whole sentences meant to be heard.
Sorting out the words. Head. Ache. Is a bird.
Left for dumb and blurred.
The truth is a flooding creek
running below on-fire bridges
Teeth cutting swims across mountainous ridges.
Belt rope dangling responsibility switches.
By the collar of a dead mother's dog
the pronouncer...
third grade dictionary habits for glee's.
Letting go of all my conspiracy theories.
Listening to the voice of my trees.
Which came from the deep dark
whole sentences meant to be heard.
Sorting out the words. Head. Ache. Is a bird.
Left for dumb and blurred.
The truth is a flooding creek
running below on-fire bridges
Teeth cutting swims across mountainous ridges.
Belt rope dangling responsibility switches.
By the collar of a dead mother's dog
the pronouncer...
#learning
#school
#WritingPoetry
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2 Comments
The Schoolboys and the Rastafarian Men (With original Patois quotations)
Two schoolboys, Dan and Josh, attended the Independent City All Age School in St. Catherine. In the evenings, they used to walk through a cane field near the school when they were going home. Many tall coconut trees bordered the cane field. Dan and Josh would cut sugar cane and pick coconuts to eat. In addition to that, they would carry some sugar cane and coconuts home.
The boys had a big problem. They had to pass a construction site on the way home, and some men who worked there would beg them sugar cane and coconuts. If the boys refused to give the men what they asked...
The boys had a big problem. They had to pass a construction site on the way home, and some men who worked there would beg them sugar cane and coconuts. If the boys refused to give the men what they asked...
#men
#school
#curse
#water
#children
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Let's Get One Thing Straight, Kid.
Let's
get one
thing straight, Kid.
I agreed to
pose naked for your
art class project. But you
are not allowed to do things
to me that we know should be known
as nasty and obscene or the deal
is off. Do I make myself clear on that?
get one
thing straight, Kid.
I agreed to
pose naked for your
art class project. But you
are not allowed to do things
to me that we know should be known
as nasty and obscene or the deal
is off. Do I make myself clear on that?
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#school
#sensual
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Such An Embarrassing Day It Was For Her
On Monday, Janet
disrobed and turned
towards the entire
art class that includes
her grandmother.
disrobed and turned
towards the entire
art class that includes
her grandmother.
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#school
#sensual
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Last Day Of School
#abuse
#bullying
#revenge
#school
#teens
46 reads
7 Comments
It Really Was Peter's Idea
Hazel stepped into the classroom.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
It really was Peter's idea.
She dropped her robe and stood naked.
It really was Peter's idea.
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#school
#sensual
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From The Duckling To The Swan
There was this
one girl back in high school
who was such a nerd but lets herself
to dare to dream of a way to make it all go
away which happened when we met her
in college and... now... is
so red hot.
one girl back in high school
who was such a nerd but lets herself
to dare to dream of a way to make it all go
away which happened when we met her
in college and... now... is
so red hot.
#dialogue
#fiction
#healing
#school
#suffering
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Under Pressure
One time when I was in summer camp
I was talking to this guy about suicide
He told me about this kid he used to go to school with
The kid was a straight "A" student
His parents told him not to bother coming home if he had anything less
One day they were walking home from school and he said he had gotten a "B"
He said, "My parents are going to kill me"
My friend said, "No way, relax!"
The kid said that he had to go
My friend said, "See ya later"
Later that day the kid jumped off the roof of his...
I was talking to this guy about suicide
He told me about this kid he used to go to school with
The kid was a straight "A" student
His parents told him not to bother coming home if he had anything less
One day they were walking home from school and he said he had gotten a "B"
He said, "My parents are going to kill me"
My friend said, "No way, relax!"
The kid said that he had to go
My friend said, "See ya later"
Later that day the kid jumped off the roof of his...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#nonfiction
#school
#suicide
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6 Comments
Nobody Cares That You Were Chased by a Donkey in Sardinia
She was probably rehearsing telling the story
as the event was happening
something about a donkey
persisntely rubbing up against her
which caused the other four teachers
at our last day of school happy hour
to ask why
Why would a donkey do that?
Eww.
I think he liked you, liked you
I quip
as I dip a chip into the cruelly fiery salsa
at the Mexican restaurant
in one of the most Mexican parts of town
now I'm being mildly pathetic
playing up my ethnic experience.
I was running so fast my heart rate...
as the event was happening
something about a donkey
persisntely rubbing up against her
which caused the other four teachers
at our last day of school happy hour
to ask why
Why would a donkey do that?
Eww.
I think he liked you, liked you
I quip
as I dip a chip into the cruelly fiery salsa
at the Mexican restaurant
in one of the most Mexican parts of town
now I'm being mildly pathetic
playing up my ethnic experience.
I was running so fast my heart rate...
#animals
#school
#travel
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7 Comments
Keep Yourself As Still As Possible
Don't move, Brittany. Just keep yourself
as still as possible. And don't
worry. Josh will be here to
strip down and take your place
soon. Hello, Class... and
welcome to our
nude model
studies
course.
as still as possible. And don't
worry. Josh will be here to
strip down and take your place
soon. Hello, Class... and
welcome to our
nude model
studies
course.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#school
#sensual
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I'm Kind Of Busy Right Now
Melanie called Simon and asked him to
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
pick up Mark from school while Luke
touched her naked body.
#friendship
#school
#fiction
#lover
#sensual
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The One Type Of Classroom Dream
Holly walked to the blackboard.
Then, her teacher shouted "SHE IS NAKED!"
That made Holly wake up.
Then, her teacher shouted "SHE IS NAKED!"
That made Holly wake up.
#friendship
#dreams
#school
#fiction
#sensual
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