Poems About Rivers Seeking Honest Critique
#river
Poems about rivers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Jun 2024 5:24am
26th Jun 2024 5:24am
TRANQUILITY OF PEACE
Here I am in tranquility and the deepness of my thoughts, as they roam with my eyes to see 👁️👁️ before me. THE full truth of the deepness and depth, in it's natural form of beauty. As it is setting with the golden sun 🌞 and tall trees of green, and mountains with it's tall peeks reaching out to the heavenly skies. AS the mere reflection of crystal clear waters, shines against the calm waters of the seas. For as I sit here in this world of TRANQUILITY, and PEACE I find that it is here I am at inner peace, with my senses of my ability to manifest my deepest...
#forest
#mountains
#river
#sea
#sky
213 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Jun 2024 5:01pm
17th Jun 2024 5:01pm
THE TURNING POINT
It's me again the story teller ✍️ I just want to make it possible, that you are about to go through a transaction with me 🤫 for let me dig into your imagination 🪬 as I give you a visual affect, to be lost within a moment in space and time ⌚ For as you stare at the vision that you see 👁️ before you I want you to think as you close your eyes 👁️ and just see the image in the dark deepness of your mind thoughts 🤔 can you imagine seeing thyself on the calm waters just drifting away to a peaceful destination, passing the...
#forest
#mountains
#nature
#river
#sea
110 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
6th Jun 2024 9:18pm
6th Jun 2024 9:18pm
Floating
Floating down the river bend
I sure am missing a few friends
Floating down the river bend
I hope I get to see them again
Floating down the river bend
My friend, you’ve gone too soon
I drink to your memory
Of the times the river spoke our names
Young and bold
You’ll never grow old
Your story will be told
Tales that will never end
Floating down the river bend
I sure am missing a few friends
Floating down the river bend
I hope I get to see them again
Floating down the river bend
My friend, you’ve gone too soon
I drink to your memory
Of the times the river spoke our names
Young and bold
You’ll never grow old
Your story will be told
Tales that will never end
Floating down the river bend
#death
#river
99 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th May 2024 5:52am
26th May 2024 5:52am
TO GO FAR AWAY TO ESCAPE
If you were to get out of the hustle and drama of the 🌍 where would you go, to be free of the nonsense and the madness. THAT seems to be like an pledge of death and destruction, to the very fabric of your mind and spiritual soul holding you in a place. THAT you feel that you just don't really belong. What if you were able to share your thoughts with, the invaders of lost time were would you go to find, your peace of mind and spiritual subconsciousness of freedom. To become aware of your unspoken words of wisdom, and the true flow of your silence in your heart, that actually makes you...
#mountains
#nature
#river
#sky
#StreamOfConsciousness
127 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
28th Apr 2024 5:39pm
28th Apr 2024 5:39pm
Sexy Eyes
This is the original version of "Pretty Eyes."
Honey, your sexy eyes give me a thrill.
You’re a captivating lady, and I adore you.
Why do I follow the river to the coast?
I go there for you and your sexy eyes.
Every day I pray and wait for your love.
And I’m still hoping that you’ll accept me.
I don't mind if it’s late when I’m at your gate.
Would you like to go sightseeing with me?
I'll take you anywhere you want to go.
And I’ll enliven you when you’re down.
Don’t wait forever to say you love me.
Honey, I need...
Honey, your sexy eyes give me a thrill.
You’re a captivating lady, and I adore you.
Why do I follow the river to the coast?
I go there for you and your sexy eyes.
Every day I pray and wait for your love.
And I’m still hoping that you’ll accept me.
I don't mind if it’s late when I’m at your gate.
Would you like to go sightseeing with me?
I'll take you anywhere you want to go.
And I’ll enliven you when you’re down.
Don’t wait forever to say you love me.
Honey, I need...
#love
#dreams
#river #wife
#river #wife
231 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2024 00:16am
23rd Apr 2024 00:16am
don’t ignore the river, mate
on his phone he describes to her
what he’s seeing.
“I’m on a hill overlooking the river ..”
let me stop you there,
she says
to overlook the river’s a mistake
what he’s seeing.
“I’m on a hill overlooking the river ..”
let me stop you there,
she says
to overlook the river’s a mistake
#river
94 reads
3 Comments
I_was_rare_once
RareFaction
RareFaction
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 7:19am
19th Apr 2024 7:19am
Waste(d) waters
Gently, as the river flows,
Crystal clear hydration like a dream of light.
But it has secret poison that is also clear as glass as it flows intwined
So I pull out my canteen,
On this hiking excursion.
and I filter the dreams.
As I gasp from my thirst again.
Gotta keep my head clear.
And my freshwater too.
So I lie down to rest on my journey.
Slowly falling asleep safe and sound for now.
Until I thirst again.
Crystal clear hydration like a dream of light.
But it has secret poison that is also clear as glass as it flows intwined
So I pull out my canteen,
On this hiking excursion.
and I filter the dreams.
As I gasp from my thirst again.
Gotta keep my head clear.
And my freshwater too.
So I lie down to rest on my journey.
Slowly falling asleep safe and sound for now.
Until I thirst again.
#river
126 reads
0 Comments
Josiah
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 5:13pm
15th Apr 2024 5:13pm
It's Time
We have none to lose
Yet, it slips away
When most kinetic
In jubilant high spirits
It slips between grasp
Like pouring sand
Prying my own hands open
To lose my miser's cloak
At peak's potential
Yet it trudges onward
With seconds saturated
Scraps go to the dogs
Stay vigilant in panning
This eternal river for gold
Some days, perfume
Wisps that float by
Brushing into us
With memories
Like close embraces
Mixed with soft lips
Other days,...
Yet, it slips away
When most kinetic
In jubilant high spirits
It slips between grasp
Like pouring sand
Prying my own hands open
To lose my miser's cloak
At peak's potential
Yet it trudges onward
With seconds saturated
Scraps go to the dogs
Stay vigilant in panning
This eternal river for gold
Some days, perfume
Wisps that float by
Brushing into us
With memories
Like close embraces
Mixed with soft lips
Other days,...
#NaPoWriMo2024
#river
#LifeCycle #bittersweet
#LifeCycle #bittersweet
128 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 8:43pm
8th Apr 2024 8:43pm
He Told Me He's Doing A Wildlife Film
Gianna got
so jealous
after seeing
her fiancé Eric
naked in the river
with her maid of honor
Deborah and Eric's chimpanzee.
so jealous
after seeing
her fiancé Eric
naked in the river
with her maid of honor
Deborah and Eric's chimpanzee.
#heartbroken
#river
#animals
#fiction
#sensual
140 reads
0 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
28th Feb 2024 6:08am
28th Feb 2024 6:08am
she loved the river
Life is like the river, sometimes it sweeps you gently along and
sometimes the rapids come out of nowhere.”―Emma Smith
she loved the river,
the whispering, lisping river.
there skinny-dipped
under the curtain of its depths,
when no one was around.
fish popping out huge eyes,
attracted by her nippled elegance
and marvelled by her gently rippled dance.
she moved the river, ...
sometimes the rapids come out of nowhere.”―Emma Smith
she loved the river,
the whispering, lisping river.
there skinny-dipped
under the curtain of its depths,
when no one was around.
fish popping out huge eyes,
attracted by her nippled elegance
and marvelled by her gently rippled dance.
she moved the river, ...
#river
#water
#nature
#fate
#tragedy
139 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 11:09pm
14th Feb 2024 11:09pm
Coastal navigation
Gigantic sea of forgotten
silent sea that does not bring
your voice in the turbulent waves
sea of island eyes on fire
that doesn't imitate the sound of your voice
sea that limits the roof of your mouth
and swallow your voice mythologically
like a desert island lighthouse
human marks of desert sonar
quasar pulse and virus analysis
sea that salts the throat
sea that stretches the rope
chained from anchored boats
in the deep brown
from the...
silent sea that does not bring
your voice in the turbulent waves
sea of island eyes on fire
that doesn't imitate the sound of your voice
sea that limits the roof of your mouth
and swallow your voice mythologically
like a desert island lighthouse
human marks of desert sonar
quasar pulse and virus analysis
sea that salts the throat
sea that stretches the rope
chained from anchored boats
in the deep brown
from the...
#river
#sea
#beach
#water
#nature
110 reads
5 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Dec 2023 12:15pm
19th Dec 2023 12:15pm
Not How This Guy Describes The Hot Chick
"Dull" is not how this
guy describes the hot chick
he saw skinny dipping in
this one river last summer.
guy describes the hot chick
he saw skinny dipping in
this one river last summer.
#river
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#dialogue
#sensual
150 reads
0 Comments
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