Poems About Rivers Seeking Honest Critique
#river
Poems about rivers seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 1:59pm
3rd Mar 2025 1:59pm
Under the moon light
Here I am as I am in a place of pure calmness and tranquility, with the quiteness of the moon reflection, upon the peaceful waters, as they flow so peacefully up stream. For sure it's here and now I feel the tension leaving my mind, and heart and spiritual subconsciousness of my soul. As it eliminates to the point there's no hurt and no pain, only the deepness of being replaced by the sounds of the quiet waters, drifting with the winds of time. For even as I feel this great sensation, I begin to inhale and exhale out the negativity, from my subconscious of my deepest thoughts of healing,...
#clouds
#countryside
#nature
#river
#sky
85 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
19th Feb 2025 8:54pm
19th Feb 2025 8:54pm
She Felt Betrayed By What Kevin's Doing
Jennifer stepped outside the cabin.
She looked at the star filled sky.
Then, she heard a noise.
She turned towards the river.
Karina was swimming naked in the water.
She's also doing something else.
Jennifer discovered how Karina's acting.
Just like someone/s humping her so hard.
Then, Kevin just popped up.
They turned and saw Jennifer.
She felt betrayed by what Kevin's doing.
They were getting married Sunday.
She threw her ring into the water.
Jennifer doesn't wish to see Kevin again.
She looked at the star filled sky.
Then, she heard a noise.
She turned towards the river.
Karina was swimming naked in the water.
She's also doing something else.
Jennifer discovered how Karina's acting.
Just like someone/s humping her so hard.
Then, Kevin just popped up.
They turned and saw Jennifer.
She felt betrayed by what Kevin's doing.
They were getting married Sunday.
She threw her ring into the water.
Jennifer doesn't wish to see Kevin again.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#river
#sex
131 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Feb 2025 11:23am
15th Feb 2025 11:23am
The Last Time They Went Camping Together
Brian walked towards the river.
He spotted Nicole naked in the water.
She turned around and smiled.
That's before an upset Corey showed up.
He made her wrap around a towel.
He spotted Nicole naked in the water.
She turned around and smiled.
That's before an upset Corey showed up.
He made her wrap around a towel.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#river
#sex
170 reads
2 Comments
COOPCAT
Poem Published
8th Feb 2025 3:32pm
8th Feb 2025 3:32pm
THE SHORELINE
The big log trucks used to load here
Right outside my door
I can still hear the noontime whistle
Kids don’t get wind of that anymore
Down along the shoreline
Where the tugboats used to haul
The silence is almost deafening
The only sound remaining
Is the lonesome seagull call
Right outside my door
I can still hear the noontime whistle
Kids don’t get wind of that anymore
Down along the shoreline
Where the tugboats used to haul
The silence is almost deafening
The only sound remaining
Is the lonesome seagull call
#river
138 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 11:05pm
26th Jan 2025 11:05pm
It's here and now I'm free
As long as I can remember that it was never this way, when we were in prison by the things that have changed, the atmosphere slowly destroying the very fabric of lives that have come and gone. But yet as I continue to stand and tolerate, the deepness of the mass destruction, it's here and now I find myself in this space and time. Finding the deepness of the words of peace and tranquility with quiteness of harmony and sounds. For sure as I look as far as I can see, it is necessary for me to be able to absorb the deepness of the energy, as I received my strength and courage and perseverance. To...
#forest
#nature
#river
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
96 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 2:21pm
23rd Jan 2025 2:21pm
The Couple Allowed Her To Join Them
Elizabeth heard a noise outside.
She followed that noise to the river.
She spotted Charles humping Mary.
That made Elizabeth strip and touch herself.
The couple allowed her to join them.
She followed that noise to the river.
She spotted Charles humping Mary.
That made Elizabeth strip and touch herself.
The couple allowed her to join them.
#confusion
#fiction
#friendship
#river
#sex
149 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
10th Jan 2025 8:39pm
Like What You See?
Jeff was hiking in
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
the woods before he saw a
tan lined chick step out
of the river and flash her
naked bod in front of him.
#fiction
#love
#river
#sex
#tanka
144 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 11:35pm
28th Oct 2024 11:35pm
Running The Devil
I took to the bayou road at dusk
With a lantern low and an iron trust
Through cypress roots and Spanish moss
Where the devil roams and souls get lost
O, I run, I run, through mud and shade
With blood on hands and debts unpaid
He’s stalkin' close, in dark so thick
With eyes like coals and fingers slick
They say he waits on southern lands
With silver tongue and burned-black hands
He calls my name like a mournful hymn
And draws me down where light grows dim
O, don’t look back, and don’t slow down
Don’t heed his...
With a lantern low and an iron trust
Through cypress roots and Spanish moss
Where the devil roams and souls get lost
O, I run, I run, through mud and shade
With blood on hands and debts unpaid
He’s stalkin' close, in dark so thick
With eyes like coals and fingers slick
They say he waits on southern lands
With silver tongue and burned-black hands
He calls my name like a mournful hymn
And draws me down where light grows dim
O, don’t look back, and don’t slow down
Don’t heed his...
#countryside
#dark
#devil
#rhyming
#river
118 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 4:21pm
13th Oct 2024 4:21pm
THE NEED FOR PEACE
As another day comes over the horizon and it is here were, I sit down by the river of crystals waters, hearing it flows so calming to my brain 🧠 waves, as it quiets the very temple of my thoughts. WITH the deepness of the sound of running waters, sounding in the backdrop of my mind and eyes, seeing with each ripping wave. TO remain me again how much of what I see affects, the deepness of my thoughts and insight and imagination and dreams. For sure it's here I think of the peace and tranquility and peace, that lets me be able to share my thoughts with me myself and I, with the forest...
#evolution
#forest
#nature
#river
#sun
141 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 7:26pm
6th Oct 2024 7:26pm
That's When I Found Out That Autumn Has Arrived
One day, I saw a
leaf that was colored brown in
the river floating to me.
leaf that was colored brown in
the river floating to me.
#dialogue
#fall
#fiction
#nature
#river
122 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Oct 2024 6:57pm
6th Oct 2024 6:57pm
Big Top Steam
A Big East Top Steam Whistle
The steam whistle goes off to sleep
No more coal left now we haul parcels and people places and then some
Want the steam whistle to echo through the valley
All I hear is a ghost whispering to me when I’m awake
So Kov bought it for scrap tryin to spin a buck
All he hears walking along great steel is
Ghostly voices coming from a steam engine from time before
They say here comes the Scrap Man
The butcher will tear us apart for profit
He says to them as long as I’m...
The steam whistle goes off to sleep
No more coal left now we haul parcels and people places and then some
Want the steam whistle to echo through the valley
All I hear is a ghost whispering to me when I’m awake
So Kov bought it for scrap tryin to spin a buck
All he hears walking along great steel is
Ghostly voices coming from a steam engine from time before
They say here comes the Scrap Man
The butcher will tear us apart for profit
He says to them as long as I’m...
#forest
#mountains
#nature
#river
#sky
101 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 11:31am
2nd Oct 2024 11:31am
When It Moves
It is
One of thee worst
Fears
One can imagine
The Shock
The Terror
The Fear
When the Ground
Moves
Under our feet
Not stopping
Until everything
We've ever known
Has Gone
One of thee worst
Fears
One can imagine
The Shock
The Terror
The Fear
When the Ground
Moves
Under our feet
Not stopping
Until everything
We've ever known
Has Gone
#forest
#mountains
#nature
#river
#sea
139 reads
4 Comments
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