Poems About Responsibility by Top Critiquers
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Poems about responsibility by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
what free speech entails
you can say what you like
it or not there'll be consequences
it or not there'll be consequences
#responsibility
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The NO! machine malfunction
Eeny meenie miney moe,
my day is flying – watch it go!
The to-do list is like a rope
around my neck – there is no hope…
…that I can get out of this heap
when every task is layers deep
and messages won’t quit – BEEP BEEP!
and people keep on asking me…
…to do the things I promised them.
What was I thinking way back then??
My stupid optimistic mind
has bit me in my own behind!
There’s only one thing this could mean --
I have to fix my NO! machine.
my day is flying – watch it go!
The to-do list is like a rope
around my neck – there is no hope…
…that I can get out of this heap
when every task is layers deep
and messages won’t quit – BEEP BEEP!
and people keep on asking me…
…to do the things I promised them.
What was I thinking way back then??
My stupid optimistic mind
has bit me in my own behind!
There’s only one thing this could mean --
I have to fix my NO! machine.
#anxiety
#choices
#NaPoWriMo2024 #responsibility
#NaPoWriMo2024 #responsibility
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Sleepy Sunday
I dreamt upon a Sunday morn
to sleep in without interruption
I wanted a cosy snuggle treat
the luxury sleep soft and sweet
"Feed us now!" Cats loudly cry,
the starving hordes from everywhere
just cross annoying felines
I turned over hands over ears
The dogs scratching at the door
their barks and whines loud and clear
wake up wake up wake up
incessant call for bowl and feed
I groaned out of bed
My pillow calling, "Rest your head!"
there's a chorus of No No No
feed us now now now ...
to sleep in without interruption
I wanted a cosy snuggle treat
the luxury sleep soft and sweet
"Feed us now!" Cats loudly cry,
the starving hordes from everywhere
just cross annoying felines
I turned over hands over ears
The dogs scratching at the door
their barks and whines loud and clear
wake up wake up wake up
incessant call for bowl and feed
I groaned out of bed
My pillow calling, "Rest your head!"
there's a chorus of No No No
feed us now now now ...
#animals
#responsibility
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it's not a prison, but you'd be forgiven for mistaking it as one
Places like this
aren't made for honest people
if you were honest when you got here
you won't be honest
by the time you leave
I don't know a single person
who hasn't broken the rules
myself included
I've broken three today already
and I'll break two more
before the day is out
Because freedom comes at a price
and it's hard enough to be here
that getting a gold star for compliance
isn't on anyones agenda
though my file would make you think
I'm the kind of person
that can walk that...
aren't made for honest people
if you were honest when you got here
you won't be honest
by the time you leave
I don't know a single person
who hasn't broken the rules
myself included
I've broken three today already
and I'll break two more
before the day is out
Because freedom comes at a price
and it's hard enough to be here
that getting a gold star for compliance
isn't on anyones agenda
though my file would make you think
I'm the kind of person
that can walk that...
#humankind
#freedom
#responsibility
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...just saying
our government
should fight corruption
not be corrupted
...just sayin'
should fight corruption
not be corrupted
...just sayin'
#responsibility
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An Odyssey
An Odyssey
A fiery necklace of jade stretches down her throat during their goodbye kiss. When he boards the gangplank the beads sink into her navel where they ignite. She says, “If you come back maimed I will take care of you. If what you saw haunts you, I’ll exorcise your demons with my touch. If you return to me as a corpse I will keep fresh roses on your grave. But please give Agamemnon this note I wrote for you that you are married to a woman who will surely perish of heartbreak if you come home in a casket.”
“He would call me a coward.”
“Be my lovely coward. Go...
A fiery necklace of jade stretches down her throat during their goodbye kiss. When he boards the gangplank the beads sink into her navel where they ignite. She says, “If you come back maimed I will take care of you. If what you saw haunts you, I’ll exorcise your demons with my touch. If you return to me as a corpse I will keep fresh roses on your grave. But please give Agamemnon this note I wrote for you that you are married to a woman who will surely perish of heartbreak if you come home in a casket.”
“He would call me a coward.”
“Be my lovely coward. Go...
#love
#marriage
#war
#home
#responsibility
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Inspiration Requiem
Inspiration Requiem
It is amazing
how long an eclipse
can seem
to churn on.....
and yet
these vapid
and nullifying
instances
are their own source
of inspiration.
There is
a humble nobility
in painting
that waning
instability
even
as we fall
off a roof....
a zenlike quality
of seeing despair
as the staircase
to moonlight.
It is amazing
how long an eclipse
can seem
to churn on.....
and yet
these vapid
and nullifying
instances
are their own source
of inspiration.
There is
a humble nobility
in painting
that waning
instability
even
as we fall
off a roof....
a zenlike quality
of seeing despair
as the staircase
to moonlight.
#fate
#aging
#nostalgia #responsibility
#nostalgia #responsibility
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Vainglory
Relevant perfectionist.
Eloquence indefinite.
Elements competitive.
Evident development.
Pessimist insensitive.
Cleverness preeminent.
Negative pretentiousness.
Treacherous experiment.
Eminent supremacist.
Selfishness prerequisite.
Sentences intemperate.
Definite presentiment.
Decadent degenerate.
Tentative inheritance.
Benefit relentlessness.
Leverage resembling.
Desolate executive.
Prejudiced intelligence.
Recklessness consecutive.
Premises repetitive.
Residents...
Eloquence indefinite.
Elements competitive.
Evident development.
Pessimist insensitive.
Cleverness preeminent.
Negative pretentiousness.
Treacherous experiment.
Eminent supremacist.
Selfishness prerequisite.
Sentences intemperate.
Definite presentiment.
Decadent degenerate.
Tentative inheritance.
Benefit relentlessness.
Leverage resembling.
Desolate executive.
Prejudiced intelligence.
Recklessness consecutive.
Premises repetitive.
Residents...
#God
#morality
#responsibility
#rhyming
#spiritual
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Time Divided
5 days on,
2 days off
alternating
every other week
Split custody
isn't the easiest,
but I would never complain
That bond is the most integral
and I divide my life
based on those responsibilities
It is always strange
once I return to the quiet of house
once again,
there is a fusion of sadness
and relief
And sometimes the best tonic
once I am alone again
is a healthy escape
into those imaginative worlds
engaging in those devious thoughts
of bodies and release
...
2 days off
alternating
every other week
Split custody
isn't the easiest,
but I would never complain
That bond is the most integral
and I divide my life
based on those responsibilities
It is always strange
once I return to the quiet of house
once again,
there is a fusion of sadness
and relief
And sometimes the best tonic
once I am alone again
is a healthy escape
into those imaginative worlds
engaging in those devious thoughts
of bodies and release
...
#dreams
#temptation
#responsibility
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If Only
If only every child
Had someone at their side who
Listened to them attentively
Took them seriously
Believed in their potential
Encouraged them
Always had their back and
Loved them unconditionally
This world would be a better place
Had someone at their side who
Listened to them attentively
Took them seriously
Believed in their potential
Encouraged them
Always had their back and
Loved them unconditionally
This world would be a better place
#culture
#morality
#responsibility
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Roadside Manner
This highway air
is thick & bleeding.
A yellow sleep
in curt despair.
Windows down
for morning dew
on hard thistle blue.
A red flag noon
fuming mindful ooze
into white-hot stew.
A smile so sweetly
sang the horizon-
miles over my head
on a mobile bed…
"oh no, child,
THIS is the dream,
you are still in very real danger"
our...
#freedom
#FreeVerse
#responsibility
#travel
#drugs
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She's Gone Too Far!
Hope spotted her
roommate Rachel
in a strip bar.
"She's gone too far!",
said Hope before
storming right out.
roommate Rachel
in a strip bar.
"She's gone too far!",
said Hope before
storming right out.
#corruption
#fiction
#friendship
#responsibility
#sensual
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